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Posted: 16 years ago
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To Rehana Di
Hey Di its great!!!you r coming to BD??awww 4th june???may b i wont b there 2 recieve u😔going to Bangkok on 27th May(wid 3plets for my jiju's treatment)So how long&whre u r going to live i mean tomar boner in-laws ra kothaye thake??Dhaka???
Have A Safe Journey!!!

Essence Of Love Part 2

WoW!!!the dinning table scene was soooooooooo cute&adorable awwwww i just love tanu*Hugging her tightly*&she gave both of her sweethearts sweet name Mr.Prince&Champ!!!!(BTW Di where did u get those beautiful thoughts???Loved it)😆😆Naughty Preet He always love to tease his dad i missed it in KDMHMD now😔many things had changed but after reading ur FF im again living those lovely sweet&sour moments😳thanks for bringing them😃
So Harman is also in this FF as Mr.Patel 's son(Gujju chhe😊)& flirting with Maya😉😃so ll we get another love story here???You gave all of them a positive look!!!&funny too😆 loved the convo between Harman &his dad(Mr Binod Patel)i think soon he ll learn a new thing tht his beloved friend Prem can also fall in love😳cant wait to read Prem&Heer's part😍.U have DJ also in ur FF???😲😲was missing her.but wait???She is positive?????i cant believe it tht she helps Heer to run away frm her wedding???I just hope tht nw Ash&she dot get into any trouble.Heer got her sence back???ll she meet Prem on next part??ll b waiting to knw😳
.TakecareLove U🤗

Edited by -Liana- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Rehu! 😃
Sorry I am late. I read both the chapters and great work! I am glad to see that you are continuing with this FF!
So, Prem's a doc, uh? Nice...I like that. Love the relationship he has with everyone! Especially Gayatri! I so miss that on the show...hope they redeem Gayatri soon.
The first update left us with a shock..Heer someone else's bride?? 😲 But thank god...she ran away from the wedding! I liked seeing that you have given Daljeet some sense here...Will wait to read what happens next. When is Prem going to find out that the girl is not married...or does he know already?
Waiting eagerly!
You rock! 👏⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Rehu, Daadi,

So, how r u & ur Betu doing????Mommy dear, any clue abt where ur Monu left for in 2day's episode(25th may) without a word but a poem for Heer???

U know what b4 I begin , here let me give u this:-

4 what???Rehu, how can I explain the relief that came over me when I realized that Heer's not yet married & is indeed a runaway bride. Oh, so,u granted my wish & fulfilled my expectation.Remember, I had commented in the previous analysis that she would be one & u had asked me to wait & read the next update. Muaaah......Daadi.....U rockkkk!!

So, does Ur Betu realize that she isn't married yet or has he already????Oh plzzz, make matters clear to him ? the poor doctor is turning on to be a heart patient with every thought abt her - & it's another fact that there seems to be nothing but her thoughts that's consuming his entire attention right now. Why do u want to increase his stress & force him to depression by misinterpreting that Heer, the 1st woman to whom he gave away his heart & that too at 1st sight, is someone else's bride? Plzzz, just clear that misinterpretation if it does exist.

Bcos, only then can he begin his next step of wooing her

U've given him classes for the same right???Haven't u??

Awwwwwwww, My Tannu's here tooo ? What names has she come up with for the 2 dashing young men ? Prince & Charm????Expecting her to call Heer Princess now . well, then any fool can understand its implication right??(I know I'm being too impatient but what to do?)That breakfast scene was sweet & cute.

Another shocker !!!! Daljeet in this ff & that too positive??? And Balraj????wait?Balraj????Ya, he's negative???

****U've put me in thinking mode*****

And another thing, this Harman & Maya seems way different & totally new to me.I guess it's bcos of the way I had been accustomed to them in the show where we had no choice but to hate them(Harman not always but yes sometimes for his actions & Maya, well, have the Creatives left us with any other choice than hating her?) Here they seem nice. Esp. this Harman is way too different - Guess it's bcos he isn't G3 & Lallu's son😆

Anyways u've made me happy again - Now, I needn't have that frown on my forehead everytime reading Maya's name fearing if she would be a pain on ur Betu & My Doctor's neck. U've given Harman for her - now, she's too busy to let other thoughts enter her mind😉😆But this Maya seems sweet really.Make it remain so, Rehu.

I don't understand what goes wrong with me the moment I read that word Apron - Ok, I get it u mean the Doc's coat but that word gets me into laughing mode remembering ur Betu's antics in kitchen with that cooking Apron & hat & that dialogue "Achche khane banane ke liye, achcha khana banana layak dikhna bahut zaroori hai"😆😆😆 - Why can't I get this out off my head😡 - and I lose my concentration from the story at every mention of that word - "Apron". Now...U'll have to be blamed for distracting my mind when I'm focussing my mind on the story with that word. ****Me thinking if there's another word I could suggest u use to refer to this doc's coat****

Once again,a very good piece of work.Good going👏👏

Waiting for ur next update.

Love,

Vrinda

PS:- Sorry abt that post I reserved in the earlier page.Forgot abt posting this there.
And ****Phew****That was a long post to type. Daadi, I'm exhausted. What do I get to energise myself???😉
Edited by vrinda16 - 16 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago
#24
wow!!
awesome!!!
just caught up with ur ff!!
its toooo goood.!!!
do cont soonn!!!
iim waiting...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Rehana dear, sorry for the late comment....
I have been trying for last two days but I have a problem with this post...I cant open the first page nor the third where I have reserved a post to comment....The error message comes...wonder why..
well coming to your FF,absolutely mindblowing....I am not repeating here how much I love your style of writing...straight to the story
awesome concept..Huh , prem a doctor...a comepletely new avtaar...
the white apron left me wondering but luckily in the next parah you mentioned he is a doctor...
I love how you give a completely different shapr to characters...like Maya - a sweet receptionist here and Veera- Nihaal , a happy couple..Prem's character here seems to be like the prem's character....and Gayathri is gmom here..yaay...Kuldi, kiran, preet are all soo cute...loved how you wrote the family moments and the ones between the siblings...Tannu , my darling....I love it when u write abt kids...first one had kuldi's son and prateek , the next one had my adorable pratham and this one has sweet n smexy bTannu...
first chapter , what I loved the most is the Premeer meeting....I have mentioned earlier also that I just love the way you describe Prem scenes...his taking off his coat, rolling sleeves, loosening tie and all ....absoolutely loved the way you wrote the PH meeting part...This is one thing I like the most about your writing, the way you describe their love.........you describe the depth of relations very well....
second chapter,
Mr. Prince- I like that, isnt Prem a real prince and I really liked Tannu's version of the incident...Prince gettting the princess and her falling asleep...
OMG Daljeet ko bhi positive character bana diya....wow now thats real interesting....I really liked that....
Rehana ,both the chapters are beautifully written
very eagerly waiting for the next part
luv
Angieb
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Posted: 16 years ago
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waiting for next update plzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27
............ lovelly ff....😊
plzzzzzzzz update soooooooooooon.
WAITINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG......⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I can't thank you enough for your constant support and love dearies🤗......if only I could tell you what I am going through here.......I have started typing out part 3 but my brain is not cooperating with me *sigh*.......so, I request everyone to have patience, I WILL post the next update as soon as it's ready *sigh*.......I am sorry friends......I am already feeling miserable for hanging the story at such point.......neways hope to catch you soon....
tc
luv
rehana
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey no problem rehana! 😊
Edited by rankanrock - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey no problem dear! 😊i understand! 😊take ur time!i am in no hurry!
love
hiba

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