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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nihaal is waiting at the airport to receive his sister's both of his sisters come and hugs Nihaal and they all leave, Teji is waiting for both Heer and Meher and the come,Teji is kind of shock to see the way they are dressed but they doesn't say anything as Heer is wearing a strapless dress up to her knee with a scarf around her and meher wearing a pink top with a blue skirt, but still Teji takes here Arti they both get her blessing and come and Nihaal says that tonight there will be a party on behalf of his sisters coming back and meher and heer get really excited but not Teji as she thinks the girls have gotten really spoiled. In the evening some guys are talking and someone mentions Rishab Baja coming. Rishab enters and goes to Nihaal and introduces himself, nihaal is very please to meet him, Rishab said he has come here on a business trip and heard many people talking about you so i came today, slowly slowly talking Rishab had a proposal for him, but it is India, and Nihaal said he will thinking about it, a guy who is flirting around with girls comes in and goes to Rishab and Rishab tells Nihaal that he is his younger brother and his jaan, Rishab asks Nihaal what is the party for and Nihaal says the way your brother is your Jaan, the same way these two girls are, my two sisters who mean everything to me, they have come back from boarding school after three years. Nihaal goes onto the stage with his father and mother and introduces his sisters by pointing at them and they enter, with reporters and photographers take pictures, rishab and dheer get amazed, heer comes in a long blue strapless dress with blue diamond earrings and necklace and her hair all curled up, and meher in a black dress, with her hair down straightened and big diamond earrings.

They both go to Nihaal and hugs him and tells everyone to enjoy the party, nihaal introduces rishab and dheer to heer and meher, dheer asks meher if she would like to dance and she said why not, teji kind of got really sad seeing meher that way, saying what will she do, as she wants to go back to india. Rishab keeps on seeing heer and heer is busy talking to her friends.

In the morning Nihaal talks to his dad about the proposal and he wanted to know what he thinks, Balraaj first didn't say anything but then told Nihaal he should do what eber he thinks is right and Nihaal says that means we will have to shift back to India, and Teji gets happy Meher and heer come and asks them shifting to where and teji say india, and meher and heer say wow INDIA that will be fun.

In India, Prem, Harman and preet are in the park playing soccer, Harman kicks the soccer and it goes far away so he decides to go and get it, the soccer ball hits some girl and she gets mad. Harman says sorry, but the girl says sorry my foot and turns around in anger, and Harman was just amazed like he just saw an angel, what eyes, what a smile, silky straight hair, she just looks at Harman in anger and just turns around and leaves, and Harman is still in his thoughts, Preet comes shakes Harman and they leave.

Back at home, prem told Harman and preet that Kulraaj di has already registered us in Xavier college so form tomorrow we will be going and they all go to bed. Later that night Harman had a dream about the girl from the park and they were hugging and he kissed her, and then next thing you know he kissed preet in his dream thinking that he is the girl and preet screamed, when Harman woke up he asked preet what is he doing on his bed, and preet told him that one side of his bed is broken so he came here, but i have question myself why were you kissing and Harman got embarrassed and told him oh noting i thought you were someone else and preet said who huh???? Harman said no one and tells preet to go back to bed and so does he.

In the morning the Mann's arrive to India, Teji is so happy to be back in her desh , Meher and Heer gets excited seeing the mansion and they go in to see it, Nihaal tells both of them that he has registered them both into Xavier College and they will start from today, both get kind of disappointed but don' t say anything.

The boys get ready and are about to leave where preet telle prem and Harman he will meet them at school and they leave, Heer and Meher are about to leave and Nihaal gifts them both new sports car and they both leave with them.

While preet is walking with some friends a car comes and almost runs them over, preet screams and says are you blind, and the person in the car try to run him over again, she gets out of the car, it is our very own meher, who tells preet who does he think he is, preet tells her what her problems is that cant she see and she says she can she its him who has a problem, and leaves, preets friends ask him if he is okay, and preets says he is fine, and then preets friend says she must be a rich spoilt brat and preet says that i will teach this spoilt brat a lesson.

Recap: Heer and meher are walking with some girls the girls stop by the stairs, heer didn't realize they stopped and was about to fall down with her books but someone caught her.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowww!!!!!!!!! whose it gonna b??? khair nice part! updt nxt part asap!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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The story is fantastic and plz update ASAP Please and add me to ur PM List . Ur doing a great job and u got a wonderful skill in telling stories.
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nice part.update ASAP.
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Preet is walking with his friends, and the same car comes in to the parking lot and the girl comes out and preet sees and his friends are telling him she must come here to, and Preet says GOOD.

Heer is walking around confused, she sees a girl and asks her where the principal's office and she says she is going that way, so she will show her, the girl introduces herself as Ashlesa Mann and Heer introduces herself to and gets surprised to find out that they have the same last name. Then they started to talk more and they realized they had a lot in common. Meher is calling Heer from behind and Heer and Ash go to her, heer introduces Ash to Meher and they all leave. They all go into their classrooms, Ash and Meher have the same class so they go and Heer goes her way, Heer was going down the stairs she missed one step and was about to fall where someone catches her PREM he asks her if she is okay and she said yes and thanked him and she left, prem and heer felt a connection. Ash and Meher went into class, and Harman saw Ash and was happy, Ash on the other hand was angry seeing him, Preet sees meher and meher sees him and shows a lot of attitude, the teacher comes and introduces meher as a new student who has come here from London, Preet is happy to know that she is going here as he tells his friends that now we will teach this rich spoilt brats daughter a lesson.

Heer goes into her classroom and many guys are amazed to see her as she is so beautiful she see's prem and smiles, the teacher introduces heer as a new student and asked if someone would volunteer to show her around many guys volunteered but the teacher asked prem if he would volunteered and he said sure.

Meher and Ash are walking and Preet is talking his friends when he hears some guys yelling and a sound of a jeep, and preet turns around to see it is Dheer and tells his friends here comes the spoilt brat, he decided to come to school, his friends tells preet that because his brother owns this school the principle cannot say anything to him, dheer is flirting around with girls where he see's meher and goes to her and meher gets happy to see him and they hug and preet and his friends she this and they leave and go to the canteen. Harman see's ash going along with them so he tells preet and the gang to go they didn't want to but he wanted to so they went.

They all go to the Canteen and they see Heer and Heer joins them and Prem goes to his brothers, Dheer introduces all his friends and he tells his buddies' that he met Meher and Heer in London and they are all like WOW.

Preet and his buddies are talking but Harman is to busy staring at Ash who is smiling and laughing with Meher and Heer.

They girls are about to go home where they invite Ash to come for dinner and she agreed, they all go there and Ash see's there house and is reallie shocked saying its so big, ash goes and meet's heer and meher's parents and her rbother they all sit down for dinner and they all talk and teji asks Ash who else is in her family, ash says no one just her she lives in the hostel her parents dies three years ago and Teji feels bad and so does Nihaal and the rest, Heer says then why do you stay at the hostel why don't you stay with us, yeah said Meher, No said Ash saying me staying here that can't be possib;le but Teji and Balraaj forces her and so does Nihaal, Ash says but Nihaal ji, But Nihaal says not Nihaal ji but Nihaal Bhiaya from now on I don't have two sisters but three sisters, and Ash has tears in her eyes.

Harman is sitting at home thinking about Ash and is day dreaming, Preet and Prem come in and see's him and decided to bug him Preet takes warm tea and Harman;s finger and dips his hand into the eta and Harman screams and chases preet around and Preet hides behind Kulraaj.

At college preet dresses up like a professor and one of his friends call meher telling her that the professor called her, she went in and the professor tells meher to sit down, the professor turns around it is our very own preet, he tells meher that he will be the new bio teacher, when meher asks where is the old professor, and preet yells at meher saying don't talk back meher says I wasn't talking back but preet shut her up and meher just sits there and preets buddies are just looking at laughing. preet tells meher that because she just has joined college she has a lot of catch up to do and preet hands over a big hand pile of work and it is all due by tomorrow and meher is like WHAT and meher is like BUT, but preet leaves and meher is panicking at home later that night around 12 almost in the morning meher is doing her work ash comes in and asks meher what she is doing meher tells her about what happened at school, but ahs says how can this happen as she has bio for foruth period and Mr. Kapoor was teaching and meher was like WHAT, but if he is still here then who was that, then she remembered preets voice and she is like PREET.

Later that morning Meher and her gang(minus ash and heer) decided to get revenge from preet and his gang (minus prem and Harman) so she made a plan, they all dressed up like guys and went into the guys changing room while they were all in the showers since they just came back from soccer practice, took there clothes and ran out with it, preet and the rest get out all in towels go into there lockers and see that there clothes are gone and are all panicking and guy comes in and tells preet and the rest to come outside and see this and they come out to see there clothes hanging on the flag pole and then after they all realize that everyone is around them and laughing at them and all the guys are trying to hide behind preet, preet see's meher who is laughing and she goes to preet saying that you tried to make a fool out of me but I made a fool out of out instead and she leaves.

Heer and is walking and one of dheers goon friends starts to bug her, prem comes and tells him to back off he was about to do something but the principle came and he left, prem asked heer if she is okay and she said she is fine. Prem wanted to ask Heer to the dance but didn't noe how to ask her, and heer saw how nervous she was and prem just blabbed it out but was scared what heer said but heer said yes she would love to go with and told prem she will meet him at the dance.

Later that night all three boys come out I black suits and gayatri outs kala tika on all of them.

Heer and the girls are getting ready teji is downtairs and the girls come down, teji see's them and is shocked but happy but she also couldn't believe her eyes. So couldn't nihaal and balraaj, both meher and heer comes down in salwaar kameezes, heer in a blue spegatti strap long anarkali suit with her hair curled and big earing and meher is a black, halter necked suit, up to the knee with tight pants, small simple earings and small bindi and ash also comes down in a pink suit, she ashs how does meehr and heer look and teji says they look beautiful and ash says she has dressed them both up and the leave, teji is telling herself that's lowly slowly her daughter will understand and get every traditional value into them.

The party is happening Prem is waiting outside, heer, meher and ash come meher realizes that one of laces from the back is undone so ash tells heer to go in and that they will carry on and heer goes in, prem is still waiting for heer and prem can heer the sound of bangles and turns around to see Heer in the suit and it ends on Prems face.

Precap: Prem and Heer dance to Ek Din from Naqaab very passionately

Harman and Ash dance to sholon si from Shabd

Meher is dancing and she feels a little dizzy

Ash and Heer are looking for Meher they think she went home

Ash and Harman are walking home

Prem and Heer are walking near the beach and talking and Heer sees something and is scared

Meher and Preet are together and Preet is trying to handle meher who is drunk

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey just read the two parts i love the spoilt meher great update cant w8 to read more
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nice part.plzzz update soon cant wait.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Heer is walking towards prem and prem is just looking at her he tells heer she looks reallye nice and they go in.

Meher and Ash walk and Harman see's Ash and just keeps on staring at her.

Preet see's meher for a moment he was amazed and he could just see lights around meher but then he got out of it and looked away meher saw preet gave him a dirty look and started walking, ash goes to a couple of her friends while meher does the same, dheer comes tells meher she looks nice, and also tells her that it's the first time he saw her in an indian avt ar and meher said it was Ash's idea.

The part is going and everyone starts to dance they all decide to play a game one bowl has all the boys name and the other one has all of the girls name and what will happen is that we will take one name out of the boys bowl and one from the girls bowl and those two people have to dance together and they do so. First chit came out it was Ash and the other one was Harman, Harman was so shy but happy and scared and gives takes Ash hand and they start to dance to Sholon Si , while dancing Ash loses her grip and Harman catches her and they start to look at each other and Ash kind of smiles, next was meher and preet meehr looked maha pissed as for preet meher, meher said she is not going to dance with preet but preet called her a chicken and she said fine and they dance to pyar ki kahani suno and then it was prem and heer's turn they danced to Ek din from naqaab and they had danced very passionately

Later that night Ash and Harman has started talk to each other, as Heer and Prem are talking to a bunch of friends, dheer is talking to his friend and also looking at meher, who is dancing with a friend, dheer tells his friend that he cannot wait any longer and takes something out of his pocket and puts it into a cup of juice, and preet see's it, dheer goes to meher and gives it to her, meher drinks it and dheer looks at his friends with a smile, meher is dancing more and she gets an head ache and starts to walk towards the bathroom but dheer catches her starts to take her to his car, he puts her down and then he goes back to get something, goes back and see's that meher is not there, on the other hand meher is with preet, later that night meher starts to get more hyper and starts to run around and yells while preet is trying to calm her down.

Back at the party Ash and Harman go for a walk, and Heer thinks they both went home so she leaves with prem.

They still had two hours, so heer and prem decided to go to the beach for a walk, while prem and heer are walking, prem is trying to say something to heer but he can't say it, they decide to go and get some ice cream, while eating it, heer see's something drops her ice cream and runs to prem.

Ash and Harman are walking and Ash is telling Harman about her life and how the mann's took her in and treat her like their own and so for Harmna and they realize they have alot in common.

Prem hugs heers, prem asks heer if she is okay and he said she is okay and they start to go and rme drops heer at home and leaves. Ash also comes home and they both see meher is not home. And they get scared.

Meher and preet on the other hand are walking around and meher is laughing for some reason, and preet is thinking about ehat to do with her, preet gets meher phone and calls heer and tells heer about meher and she gets worried, and preet brings her home quietly so no one hears them, preet drops meher on the bed for a moment preet just started at meher bit then he left.

Heer gets a phone call and it is prem and they talks for a really long time about stuff and he hangs up and they think about each other.

In the morning meher wakes up and has a major head ache, her mom comes in telling her that heer and ash went to school, she realizes she is late so she gets ready and leaves to, dheer calls her and tells her something (in mute) and meher gets mad.

Meher comes to Preet, preet thought she was going to say Thanks to him , but no she slaps him which shocks Ash Harman and Heer and Prem, meher tells preet that how dare he and leaves, and preet leaves in anger, Ash and Heer go to Meher and ask Meher what is wrong with her and Meher tells heer and Ash what preet did with her, but Heer says no preet didn't do anything but dheer did preet saved her and meher gets sad and feels really bad.

Ash leaves with Harman, heer and prem are talking and they start to flirt around alot, and both ash and heer tell them what dheer told meher, Preet is punching the punching bag really hard in anger and meher comes to say sorry but preet yells at her saying girls like you don't appreciate anything but just use people meher tries to ay sorry again and tries to explain what happened but preet cuts her off and leaves form there and meher is sad, he goes to Harman and tells Harman what meher was saying but that preet yelled at her but Harman tells preet what dheer told meher and preet feels bad to.

Meher is sitting alone and crying preet comes to and says sorry but meher tells him its not his fault but hers, they fight for a sec but then they both patch up and decided not to fight and to become friend and they hugged and in that hugged they felt something, and ash and Harman come and see them and say what a scene and they let go, but meher tells them she won't leave dheer alone he will pay and all four scheme on something.

Heer comes home and see's nihaal with rishab, rishab starts to talk to heer and asks her on a date, heer was about to refuse but nihaal forced her to go and she agreed.

That night rishab picks heer up and they go, there she see's prem there who was with some friends, they just kept on staring at each other, and prem wasn't that happy on seeing rishab and heer together, they ate and then rishab offered heer for a dance she didn't want to but then said yes, while dancing rishab started getting really close to her, prem started getting really jealous and heer felt very awkward and then heer lets go and rishab gets a phone call and realizes he has to leave and heer tells him she will get home and he leaves, prem leaves in anger and heer see's and follows prem, and goes to prem tries to touch him but prem gets mad and tells heer to go back inside to that guy, and heer asks him what is wrong with him and prem says noting, heer says noting then why are you mad, and prem gets mad and punches a wall which makes his hand bleed and heer see's and goes to him and he tells heer that he cant stand any other guy near her or cloe to her because he loves her and heer cries and they hug.

Meher calls dheer up and tells him to meet her up and he goes along with some friends, on the other hand meher preet ash and Harman put something in a bucket and they hang it up on a three and dheer and his friends come and meher comes out with ash and dheer asks her why he called her and she says that I wanted to thank you for last night and he says huh and preet and Harman drop the bucket which was filled with blood and they says shit and meher says not yet and preet and Harman come with a bunch of dogs and takes there leash off and they chase dheer and his buddies and all four laugh.

At home heer is walking into the house and runs into the room and just keeps on thinking about prem and prem doing the same.

Next morning the girls go to school and there friend Rashmi tell them she si getting engaged and invited them all and they say yes, in the evening meher heer and ash come to the party and go to the girls into Rashmi rooms other girls bring her down while the guys comes and so does preet, prem and Harman along with his buddies, and they see it is rashmi from school and the boys wonder if the girls are here, and the groom says there is no entertainment and rashmi points to something and they all look there while a performance is happening and three girls with there head covers start to dance and while dancing the take there dupatta off and there faces are shown and prem, preet are happy seeing it is meher and heer dancing to badi mushkil from Lajja. While dacning they drag Ash along and they all dance and slowly drag the boys along and the all satrst to dance to and then the engagement ceremony happens and they all start to dance,

Next morning they all get an announcement on a school trip and they all get excited and all start to get ready and are all walking on what they are going to do and preet makes a comment on meher and she gets mad and she starts to chase him around and dheer see's and his friends tell him that look what preet has done and dheer says he will pay for it.

Next morning they all get ready and they go into the bus and all play antakshari while getting there and then all get out and start to unpack and start to put up there tents and heer asked for prems help, prem says sure and he also says that they should be lucky we are right beside them and meher ays why and he says so if you guys get scared or need help then we will help you guys and Ash says one min you mean if yous guys don't help us then that mean we wont be able to do anything and preet says and yes and meher says fine we will help our self's and they all leave, later that night ash, meher and heer are sleeping and Meher hears someone walking around the tent and she goes and wakes up heer and ash and they all hug each other scared and then someone yells and runs into the tent and they all scream and everyone in the tent come running out and they see the three guys laughing and all three girls are shocked.

Precap: everyone is sitting around the bonfire and are singing

Harman takes ash with him and they get very very close

Meher is scared because it is dark and she is in the jungle and preet is not with her and starts to cry

Heer is sitting with meher near the moonlight and prem is just looking at her


Edited by jamune - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww i loved it especially preet meher sooo cute thank u so much for the update continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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sooo sweet update.wait 4 the next.thanks 4 the pm.
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