Untitled Premeer and Meet story part 4 page3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys i was bored today so i thought of wrtiting a new story on Premeer and Meet i havet thought of a title name yet but will very soon i am still writing my other ff mohabbetin but im not quite done when i will be don i will post up that to.

Synopsis:

This story is about the Juneja's and the Mann's both were one the richest people in India, there friendship was told to everyone but who knew that it wouldn't last. From friendship they turned into enemies and everything was finished. The Juneja's stayed in India while the Mann's moved to Canada. As in Canada Balraaj made a fortune Lalit's business sinked they have a big house but not as much money as they had before and they own two small stores. The main leads in this story are Prem and Preet son's of the Juneja family and Heer and Meher daughter's of the Mann family, when they were kids all four were always together Prem was 10 while Heer was 7 and Preet was 8 and meher was only 5 as she doesn't remember much all she had was preet's necklace that Preet gave her when they were kids, and Prem and heer always said that when they grow up they would get married as they were all playing Balraj comes and takes Heer and Meher away while meher is just crying and Preet is running after her, Heer takes the groom doll with her and prem is left with the bride doll and prem keeps on calling heer out.

Lalit Juneja: The head of the Juneja family, is very strict when it comes to business he is very strict but slowly slowly there business decreased and now they have money but not as much as they had before, but his family matter to him to.

Gayatri Juneja: the second head of the family Lalit has always listened to Gayatri but at certain times when Lalit says something then Gayatri gets scared and never says anything back to him she loves all her kids equally and they all mean the world to her.

Kulraaj Juneja Singh: The eldest among all of her siblings loves both of her brother equally is married and has two kids.

Kiran Singh: Kulraaj's husband, lives with Kulraaj in her house, is in the family business handles on of the stores, loves his wife and kids a lot and respect hi father in law and mother in law a lot and thinks of them as his own parents.

Vikas: Kulraaj and Kiran's 7 year old son

Tannu: Kulraaj and Kiran's 5 year old daughter

Prem: Is a very quiet but also prankster boy, is a college going guy, he always thinks about Heer and plays his special song in his guitar that he used to play when they were young when ever he missed her.

Preet: is the youngest also a college going prankster type of guy, but is very serious when it comes to school, he loves to play tricks on people especially at school, doesn't like Dheer at all, as he is always showing other people down but preet doesn't let that get to him.

Balraaj Mann: The head of Mann family has a big business in Canada but also in India but the one in India is a little smaller then the one in Canada for him his daughter's mean the world to him they have always gotten what they wanted, and he adores his son who looks after the business.

Teji Man: Is a typical house wife lives in Canada but still has her values, doesn't really want to stay in Canada always talks about going back to India but Balraaj doesn't want to.

Nihaal Mann: The eldest among Mann siblings and also the only son, is a simple work freak and always dressed up like a business tycoon, he loves his mom the most but is his dad's favorite adores and loves his sister's, is very protective about his sister's most of the guys know who Nihaal is so they decide to stay away from Heer and Meher, since the last guy who decided to harass Heer got beaten up really badly.

Heer: Is the second oldest, is very modern but still has traditional value's is not as spoiled as her little sister is, she always looks at her groom doll and thinks about prem, loves her sister a lot, and her sister is her best friend always dreams of going back to India

Meher: the youngest and is the brattiest has always gotten everything that she has wanted, she always has the necklace that preet gave her but she doesn't know what it is but still has it around her neck, always think she is better then everyone else but its all changes when she meets preet.

Other Characters:

Rishab: A big business tycoon is shown when the Mann's come to India and Nihaal decided to deal with him and they decide to work together and Nihaal is very impressed by him, as an eye on Heer, Rishab is a very self centred does anything he wants and is really good buddies with Nihaal alogn side of business partners.

Dheer: Rishab's younger brother is a typical college going boy, very spoiled never listens to anyone not even his teacher, when ever he feels like it he comes to college and when ever he doesn't want to he doesn't come since is brother owns the school. His life revolves around drinking, girls, clubbing, and spending money.

(two other main characters)

Harman: Prem's Best friend shares everything with him, he doesn't have anyone in the world so the Mann's took him in and treats him like a son, you can say he is a son and Kulraaj always says I don't have two but three brothers, goes to college with Prem and Preet is secretly in love with Ashelesa Mann but hasn't said anything.

Ashlesha: Heer's best friend Heer and her meet each other when the Mann's come to India and Heer goes to college, Heer shares everything with Ash even to her sister all three do everything together and the Mann's think of her as her as a family.

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PART ONE

In India a lady is singing Kabhie Kushi Kabhie Gham and lighting up diya, while Tannu and Vikas are running around Kulraaj is chasing them to get ready and Kiran is reading the newspaper. Lalit is walking up to Gayatri and says how happy she is and Kulraaj comes and says why wouldn't she be happy as all three of her sons are coming back from boarding school, after 6 years they are coming back. While singing all three of the guys come in and take her blessing and she hugs them Harman was about to walk off but Gayatri grabbed his hand and brought him close to the others saying all three of my son's are back and she hugs Harman and Harman has tears in his eyes. All are at the dinner table and Gayatri has made the boys favourite sweets, Prem Halwa, Preet Kheer and Harman Raslmai, Harman said he had enough but Gayatri kept on feeding him more, And Preet made a joke and prem hit him. Harman started to cry Gayari asked why is he crying and he said that it's just love, the love i get from you guys, a orphan like me is so lucky and Gayatri yells at him saying how dare he say that and he says sorry and they all go to bed.

Gayatri is sitting near the bed and smiles, Lalit says she is very happy today and she says yes, Lalit says now everyone i love is with me and now my son's can help me with our business and put it to the next level, Gayatri says that Prem, Preet and Harman are still young and that they should go to college and Lalit agrees, Gayatri by accident says Balraaj's name and Lalit gets mad but she gets quite, and Lalit leaves and Gayatri looks at the moon and gets depressed.

Back in Canada it is shown as daytime and there is a big party going on and everyone is talking about the Mann's on how rich they are and how Balraaj and his son have put their business to the next level, they are the luckiest people.

And a guy comes in with his wife and they all are clapping at them and they and is shown as Balraaj Mann and Teji Mann, Balraaj talks and then he says if we are in this level it is only because of my son Nihaal and he points his hand and a guy with four other men around him comes in, the guy is wearing glasses and takes them off and he goes up on the stage and all the reporter and photographers are taking pictures and asking questions and his face is shown.

They all talk and Nihaal says that you guys must be wondering where the youngest member's of the Mann family are, well they both are at private school which will be done in a week and they will be here, and today I am telling you guys all that the day they come will be the day I will be throwing another big party.

One week has passed and two girls are shown in blue silky pj's getting out of there beds waking and getting up while singing Piya Piya o piya piya. The girls get ready and they all say how much they will miss each other and they all hug each other and they leave.

Edited by jamune - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey this sounds gooodd!!!!!
i cant wait till they finallii meett!!
i wonder if theyll know each other or not!
update soonnn...and please do PM me when you do..if its not any trouble
thanku!👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome
update soon & plzz add me in the pm list if u dont mind.
Thankz
Lots of luv
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome up date i really liked it
i will wait for your update add me too in pm list
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey sound s great cant w8 to see wt happens
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hey great start luve it cant w8 to read more and thanx for adding me in ur pm list best of luk
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome new storyline cont soon plz!!!!!!!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome update
plz update next part soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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woww!! updt asap nd add me 2 ur PM list!
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awesome dear i loved it your part one is great

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