A Chance Encounter (another surprise one-shot ) - Page 2

Holy Madz, that was just fantastic! The way you describe emotions and all that jazz, you really have a way with words! Can't wait to see what Meera will think and why don't you have a fanfic yet? *taps foot*

--shabz

I'm kinda dead at the moment.....it'll take me a lot of time to edit this...don't hold your breath...☺️

*unreserved* okay so usually...I read the thing again when I'm unreserving, but if I do that this time, you won't get a comment!😆😆😆

Okay firstly the way you described the whole setting for the scene, superb Madz!👏 Whose your english teacher? I'm sure she'd be proud!😃 The way you showed the emotions of not wanting to be center of attention SO ME!😆😆😆 I can not talk in front of people and I get all jittery and nervous and probably would run away like that!😳😳😳

But ahhh!!! Seriously just like Z said, beaches ooze romance, they're just so subtle and calming and not to mention gorgeous and romantic!😳

The way he came up....😳 and what he was wearing......☺️ I seriously can't tell you how much his clothes made me giggle and blush, and then the conversation, ....the touche part, was my FAV!😃😃 I love convo's like that!😉😆😆 and then he gave me his jacket?? *swoons*😳😳😳 The entire conversation part and his "advice" I loved it! the way you wrote the emotions seriously madz, FANTASTIC!😃

*sigh* he dropped me home, and the whole him leaving and waving was so DDLJ, and I really thought that was the last of Prem 😔😳 But I was very very very pleasantly surprised!😆 And ohh the kiss on the hand....I died!😆😆😆

Okay so I made my BFF read the one shot, cus I literally made everyone I know I read it, but that's another point, she knew it was Prem from the moment you mentioned I had to meet someone, I'm dense like that so I was like ohhhh oohhh the entire time!😳 *hides face* But aww I love the relationship that I shared with Ash and Rahul, very sweet, and besides other than the whole boy thing yesterday, Rahul really is my fav name, along with a lot of other ones!😳

He asked me for lunch? What a sweetheart!😃 I'm too excited over this!😳😳 oh oh and the whole subtle wink, and acting like we didn't know each other in front of rahul was cute too!😆 I love secretive things like that!😳😳😳

*sigh* as you can tell Madz, I A-B-S-O-L-U-T-E-L-Y A-D-O-R-E-D IT!!! *BIG BIG BIG HUGS!!!*😳😳😳

Love you loads and loads,

Meera😳

Cant wait for more one shots!😛😃
😳

Originally posted by: Palkhi_08

OMG....... that was sooooooooooo cuteeeeee......

totally lovedddddd it!!...... egerly waiting to read more!! u really should start a FF tho...... :P:D....

-Luv Pari

@Shifali & @Ravjot: Can't wait! 😳

Originally posted by: shabo24

Holy Madz, that was just fantastic! The way you describe emotions and all that jazz, you really have a way with words! Awwww, thank you so much!!! 😳 Can't wait to see what Meera will think and why don't you have a fanfic yet? *taps foot* I can't wait for Meera's response either!!! 😉😆 I'd love to start an FF, but i won't find the time to commit to it!!! 😳

--shabz

awww maddy.........
that was really reaalyy cute............
loved the way u portrayed the inner state of meera and the way she wanted to b treated as normal....... completely shows these people would get frustrated sumtime wen an issue is made out o lil lil things...........
and loved prem in this and he wearing white shirt blue jeans and a coat haye haye😍......... kash we see him wearing sumthin like that pretty soon..........
luv
-iksha

OMG, Maddy!!! You keep on shocking me with your amazing writing skills!! That was amazing!! You know- you totally fooled me- leading me along, letting me think that it was Heer who was the famous singer, wishing to be a normal person. Then when I read Meera's name I was 😲 *jaw drop* I am sure Meerz had the same reaction, yet add on a few faints and blushes for her, LOL!! But I loved it!! Did I tell you that I am a sucker for beach romance- I added a beach scene in Mera Dil... and in Beauty and the Geek, and I will do in the Hitchhiker- it is just so much more dreamy and romantic on the beach- so much more calming!! But I absolutely loved this one-shot, hope you continue to write more- I will look forward to seeing more from you, and will wait to see Meera's comment after she stops blushing, ROFL!!

It was SO beauitfully written :) awsome job.

my comments kinda long! 😳