[FF] The Handmaiden's Tale [Part 16, Pg 44] [3/8] - Page 27

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

woof!!! =D

Good update Bhav!!! YAY, Heer blushed................. and then she goes and swears!!!!! 😆 Just when you think there is progress!!!!
😆 Heer itni aasaani se maanne wali nahin hai!
I wonder what will happen in the orphanage!!!
Me too, but I have a rough idea for it already! 😃
Can't wait for the next part!!!!
Love you!! *hug*
Love you too! *hug*

@ fungrl: Thanks! 😳

Originally posted by: shabo24

What are you going to buy me for your paycheck? *angel face*
How 'bout I find you a guy instead? I've already got my eyes on a really smart one. Strictly for you, 'cause I got my Taylor. 😃😆
Cute part, it was filler-ish but still, it painted a very pretty (PREETY! ☺️) picture in my mind, and I loved how Heer is innocently playing along. I KNOW WHAT HAPPENS AT THE ORPHANAGE. *dances smugly*
It was totally filler. Meh, you don't know exactly what happens at the orphanage! OOOH! *has just been struck by inspiration from a really old idea Shabz told her*
--shabz

@ pooji123456789, bd670816: Thanks! 😃

Originally posted by: a5abeegirl389

I recently just started this FF and I fell in love with it. I love the setting of it! Brilliant. Seriously can't wait for the next part, you are doing an awesome job! Keep it up!

Hi! I'm glad you like it! 😳 Thank you!

Originally posted by: ~nikki1992~

Awsome update!!!!!! Thank you!

even though it was a filler... it was very well written. Heh. Thanks!
i cant wait for the next part..and thanx for the PM.. You're welcome!
Keep smiling, and take care.. Thank you! Take care too! *hugs*
~nikki

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Posted: 16 years ago

I'm a lazy bunny. So my updates from now on are gonna be a little staggered. Heh. Anyway, here's the next part, totally Meet-filled! WHEE! 😃 I'm dedicating this part to Radz, because I didn't let her edit her comment on the previous chapter. 😆 (This probably isn't the right time for me to mention that she had a couple of weeks to edit it...😆)

Anyway, enjoy!

-||-

The Handmaiden's Tale, or Mere Khwabon Mein Jo Aaye

Part Fourteen

Later That Night…

Meher and Tanuja were in Tanuja's room, packing the clothes that Heer and Teji were taking for the children at the orphanage the next day.

"I heard Lord Prem agreed to go as well," Tanuja commented. "How is Lady Heer handling him?"

Meher grinned at her mother. "He is a very worthy adversary, Maa. She's going crazy trying to figure him out."

Tanuja laughed. "What the girl has against marriage, I have no idea."

Meher laughed.

The two spent the next few moments silently packing clothes.

"Speaking of marriage, Meher," Tanuja started.

Meher winced. She should have known this was coming.

"We need to find a man for you too. A few more years and you'll be past that age, and no man will want you."

Meher rolled her eyes. "Thanks, Maa."

Tanuja sighed. "You know what I mean, Meher."

Meher sighed. "I know, Maa."

There was a sudden rap from the window. Meher and Tanuja looked at each other, both frowning.

"Did you hear that?" Tanuja asked.

Meher looked to the window as another rap came. She looked sharply at Tanuja, eyes wide. Forgetting that she was still holding a brown tunic, she crept to the window. She looked out and suppressed a gasp.

Preet looked up at her, a bunch of pebbles in one hand and waving with the other. There was a lamp on the ground, and he motioned for her to come down.

Meher glanced at Tanuja, who raised her eyebrow.

"Um…" Meher looked at the window again, then an idea sprung into her head. She opened the window and leaned out, dropping the tunic. "Oops!" She withdrew her head and turned to Tanuja, a sheepish smile on her face. "I…will go get that."

Without another word to Tanuja, she hurried out of the room, her face flushed.

Tanuja frowned, wondering at her daughter's sudden strange behaviour. She went to the window to see for herself what was there, just in time to see Meher hurrying out of the house. She met up with a man, and Tanuja gasped, squinting to see who it was. Luckily for her he held the lamp up to his grinning face, and she saw that it was Lord Prem's manservant. She turned away from the window, one hand covering her smile, not sure at all what to make of that.

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"What are you doing here?" Meher hissed as she hurried to Preet.

Preet grinned at her. "Would you be interested in a moonlit boat ride, My Lady?" he asked.

Meher rolled her eyes. "You're kidding, right?"

Preet raised an eyebrow. "Do I look like I'm kidding, My Lady?"

Meher studied him and wasn't at all surprised to see that he wasn't. "My mother is up there and she's probably watching us right now," she told him, glancing up at Tanuja's room nervously.

Preet did the same. He waved at the empty window, and Meher felt a headache coming along.

"My Lord…" she began.

Preet put a finger on her lip, startling her. "What's stopping you, Meher?"

Meher simply stared at him, her eyes wide. Her entire body felt electrified by the feel of his skin on hers. She couldn't breathe.

"Meher?" Preet asked, frowning in worry.

"Hunh?" she mumbled, still staring at him.

"Will you come with me?" he asked cautiously, fully expecting her to say no.

"Okay," she whispered.

Preet removed his hand, surprised. That seemed to break Meher's spell.

"You said yes!"

Meher frowned. "What?"

Preet grinned. He wasn't going to let this pass him by. He grabbed her wrist and pulled her to the waiting boat. "You said yes!"

Meher's frown deepened. When had she said yes? The last thing she remembered was Preet waving at the window, and then he put his finger on her lip.

She gasped. "You! You took advantage of…of…" Of her what? Her momentary blackout?

Preet grinned at her. "That I did, My Lady, that I did!" He got into the boat and turned to help Meher in. She stood at the bank of the lake, her hands on her hips, glaring at him. Preet wiggled his eyebrows at her, and Meher bit her lip to stop herself from giving herself away. She shook her head. Preet pleaded at her with his eyes. She shook her head again. Preet held out his hand, pulling a puppy-dog face on her. She rolled her eyes and placed her hand in his with a heavy sigh.

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"This is crazy," Meher muttered. "This is just absolutely crazy."

Preet rolled his eyes. "Meher, will you just stop talking and enjoy this?" he pleaded, rowing the boat.

Meher glared at him. "What if someone sees us?"

"Let them! The night is our time, Meher. At night, we're not Lady Heer's and Lord Prem's servants. We're Preet and Meher."

Meher frowned. "When did you start calling me 'Meher'?"

Preet paused, thinking. He shrugged. "I dunno. But it felt right." He grinned at her. "Admit it, you like it when I call you 'Meher', don't you, Meher?"

Meher made a face at him and looked away, hiding a smile. She would not admit that she did indeed like it when he called her 'Meher'.

Preet smiled at her as she glanced at him and blushed, looking that much prettier in the soft light of the moon and the stars.

"This is nice, isn't it?" Preet asked her.

"It is…soothing…" she grudgingly admitted.

The boat rested in the middle of the lake, bobbing gently.

Meher looked up, smiling. "Look at the moon," she breathed. "It's so…"

"The moon has nothing on you." The minute he said it, Preet wanted to take it back.

Meher looked at him curiously. "What?"

He looked away, feeling embarrassed. "Nothing," he replied quickly.

Meher studied him. He glanced at her, and both of them looked away, smiling to themselves.

Bina baatein kabhi mujhko pukare

Karta kabhi chup chup ke ishaare

Aur dekhe kabhi kissi bhi bahane se

Koshishein bhi maine kar dekhi sari

Iss ladke se aaj hari main toh hari

Issne na seekha darna zamaaney se

Tu kis uljhan mein pad gayi?

Yeh kaisi baatein kar gayi?

Mohabbat kya woh mohabbat jo duniya se dar gayi

-|end of part fourteen|-

YAY for Meet! Right? 😉 Anyway, since my updates are gonna be less frequent now, do let me know if you want to be on my PM list! 😃

Love,

Bhav (:

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Posted: 16 years ago
Shuddup you. *frowns* You meanie. Just for that I will not give you a long comment like I had planned. And just tell you that it was nice. Both parts. And am waiting for the next.

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
hii!!! Nice to see Preet and Meher's love story started blooming already.. waiting to read the next uodate...
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey fab update keep it going
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey
nice update
preet meher scene sooo cute
thankz for pm

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hai, that was too cute!! I think it was the best update in this one story so far............... funnny how it focuses on Meet and not Premeer!!! 😲🤣
I love how Preet is so persistant and Meher finally gives in!! Glad her mum saw them!! Hope to see them together more often in the future!!!! Awwww, a boat trip!!! How sweet!!!!
Great part, hope you put the next one soon too!!!
Love you! *hug*
P.S. I still want to be on the PM list!!! Sorry for the lame length of this comment but i got exams right now! 😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeee part and thanks for the PM and please PM me whrn u do updadate next!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
I just realised that I've missed three parts of this one! 😲 *Angry with self* I just saw this B and could have kicked myself for missing such wonderful updates....

Part 12:
I really loved the PH interaction. My fav bit was when Prem crosses the distance between them in three strides (so masterful...awww*day dream modish*), puts his hand over Heer's and whispers "Don't be mad at the flowers" while meeting her eyes in the mirror" totally awesome B! I loved it!
And I also missed Meet!

Part 13:
Skimpy parasol!!!!! I liked the way you phrased that! I love the way he addresses her as My Lady! Swoonable stuff😆 Although it was a short update, it was written so well that the length just didn't matter. And I loved the last sentence where she smiles, swearing softly! Awesome!
Still missing Meet!

Part 14:
Meet awesomeness!!!!!! Holy Preet! (credit:Shabz) Brilliant part! And so Preetish! And totally adorable! And the conversation between the two is so so so so cute. I don't have to tell you I was imagining myself next to Preet, do I????? Awesome update! Big hug Bhav!

Read it about ten times and then some more times with my PTG! 😆 Preet and meher are just so cute in this one! You just write Preet so well B, every time I read something you have penned, I just keel over a bit more (and now I'm at the precipice (holding on with the sheer power of the PTGs) of the bottomless Preet chasm, doesn't that say something about my precarious hold on life!) Who wants to live if the alternative is an after life in the bottomless chasm of Preetness! Okay, so, that didn't make any sense at all! It's all your fault*sulks* You write Preet so wonderfully, is it my fault I've rolled off the edge (of normal human behaviour!!!!) 😆😆

Sorry, I missed three parts! *Curses self* But loved reading three parts at one go! One big treat for me!

🤗 Big hugs 🤗
Love:-Nonee (Hope I'm forgiven! *making puppy dog eyes a la Preet*)
Edited by noneeM - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
I want a boat ride with Preet 😍😍😍..............awesome update. Hope to read more soon, By the way whats up with Prem and Heer missed their bickering😉😉😉

l really like this story

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