FF:~ tum miley {updt part 05/pg11} - Page 5

Originally posted by: zaibun

hey great update after so long cant w8 to read da next chapter

Originally posted by: baanisings

hey shab!!!!!🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗tannu!!!!
as always...fantabulous!!!👏👏👏thanku thanku
i loved the scene between the trio.(mom daughter &naani)😛😛😛
that was beautiful
well i actually wanted to know who.s krishi's dad.....😳😳😳
hmm...thats a secret...
reaveal this secret out SOON!!!!! i'll try to..
or is she prem's daughter????😉😉😉
mmmmuuaaahhh!!!!
muahh!!!
cont soonnn...
me waiting..😛


😉

Originally posted by: thejazzgal.s

hey shab!!!hey juhi!!!

hmm u updated with part 2...yup!!!

i just really didn't got the time to comment(i know ur not gonna believe...becuz im a bad liar)
you are a very bad liar!!!

i really loved the mum daughter duo!!!...that was sweet

hmm hey shabzy how is krishi heers daughter??? i too dont know 😉

now dont take too long long to reveal this secret!!...
i will dear....😛😛😛
😛

cont soon

me waiting

muahh!!!


muahhh!!!

Originally posted by: angel_60107

plz continue soon...

Originally posted by: xxxxminixxxx

AAAWWWWWWWWWWWW!!

😳

such a good ff thanks!!!!

hey

this is minita hiii!!! me shabani..

i m new to this ff welcome

loving it already!!glad u liked it!!!

😊

continue soon

hey everyone here's your update for the next part'IM EXTREMELY SORRY*holiding ears* for being late..as I was busy 'hope u all understand..and like this update'

~*~*part3~*~*

at office

prem comes in heer cabin..

prem:miss maan'

he doesn't find her there..

anita is doing some work on computer..

anita:yes sir???may I help you..

prem:I just wanted to speak to miss maan..

anita:sir she already left..

prem:already???okay..

just then heer calls anita and blast at her for not mailing her some work..

Anita: sorry mam but net connection is quiet slow...It will be in a minute or two..

anita hangs the phone

prem:ufff hottie!!!

Aniat:huh????

Prem:is she the same hot all the time???

Anita:excuse me??

Prem:ahh I mean is she ths same angry all the time'

Anita:no 'she's very great person..

Prem:I see''' evertime she blasts off at anyone and discipline man!!!!!!'even in my school I wasn't this restricted for doing anything..

Anita:if you get to know her ..then you can understand her..she is such a sweet person..

Prem:sweet person'I know sugar free sweet!!!!

Anita:no'diabetic sweet..

They both laugh..

Prem:finally I came through a normal person who can laugh with me in this office..

Anita:why only one???

Prem:here everyone looks so perfect I think I should go back to school to learn punctuality and discipline'

Anita:no'you are a good person..and slowly u'll get used to this environment..

Prem:sorry dear but im not gonna change..i love the way iam..life is very short..if we don't enjoy it now..then when???

Anita:looks like u are very fun loving person..

Prem:hmm so iam'someone had changed me!!

Anita:hmmm but sorry sir you apt to change'

Prem:lets see either me gonna change or the change is seen on the other side..

Points towards heers chair..

Anita:that's impossible..she never gonna change!!!

Prem:you bet me???think it twice..becuz you gonna loose'

Anita:I don't mind loosing'but be prepared for loosing this bet'

Prem:its very sure im gonna win..

Anita:don't you think you are getting over confident'???

Prem:nahh!!!..just SELF CONFIDENCE..

Anita:then we will see..

Prem:that was nice talking to you..miss'????

Anita:anita..

Prem:I think annie would be easy..

Anita:no problem sir'

Prem:but I have a problem..

Anita:hmmm???

prem:no sir ..only prem!!!

Anita:but'

Prem:no buts!!! i really don't mind..and infact sir sounds so old and khadoos!!!

Anita:hmm(smiles)

Prem:so I guess I found a new friend..

Anita:I guess so..

They both laugh..

Now back with heer..

They are at mall..

Krishi:naani'

Teji:haan beta???

Krishi:the othel(other)day we came to shop hele (here)you got me candy..today also I want the same one..

Teji:shh'beta agar heer ko pata chalega toh teri saari candies bandh aur mera bahar jaana..!!!

Heer gets a call..

She talk for sometime

Heer:maa..there a good news..

Teji:kya baat hai???

Heer:ash aarahi hai..within two days..

Teji:arrey waah yeh toh bahut hi acchi baat hai..

Krishi:wow maashii back!!we can enjoy..

Heer:yes baby..and now lets get back home

Krishi:mummam alleady???(already)

Heer:yes dear'for last two hours we are here..

Krishi:mummam..plzz a little mole (more)time

Heer:no'some other time..

They all leave for home..

They reach home..

Their butler gets water for everyone..

Teji:heer beta dinner main kya legi??

Heer:maa anything'.

Teji:krishi you???

Krishi':hmmm what mummam cooks..

Teji:nahi beta who bahut tired hai..

Heer:no maa its okay..aaj dinner main banaoungi.

Heer goes and freshen up..

Then go to kitchen to prepare dinner..

At dinner time all are at dinner table..

Krishi:naani..u plomised(promised) me candy..nd you didn't get me one..

Teji:kal pakka'

Heer comes..

Heer:krishi stop talking..

Everyone eats..

After dinner'

Krishi:mummam icsh cleam????(ice cream)

Heer:no ice cream today '

Krishi:mummam that's not fail(fair)..

Teji:heer..beta'

Heer:okay heres you ice cream..

Krishi:love u soooo much mummam..

Teji:aur mujhe???

Krishi:love too much naani..

At juneja mansion..

Prem comes home smiling..

Preet:hey pb kaisa tha din..

Prem:hmm too good..

Veera:u look happy!!!

Prem:hmmm am i???

Prem goes to his room..

Veera:something fishy!!!

Preet:you know sis for the first time you are right..

Veer:very funny'lets go see whats the matter'

Preet:what are we waiting for??

Veera:mom!!!

Preet:veera..tu mom ko dekh aur main baat pata laga kar aata hoon..

Veera:why me???

Preet:because you are the younger one..

Veer:hey that's not fair..

Preet:everything is fair..

Preetr leaves from there..

Prem's room'

Prem smiling to himself

Preet:ahem ahem..

Prem:haan preet bol???

Preet:aap batayi..

Prem:kya???

Just then kul di comes..

Kul:oye prem boldey kya hua???

Prem:kya kya???

Kul:ab itna bhi innocent math ban aur bata dey..

Prem tells them something..its in mute..

Kul:toh yeh baat hai..

Prem:yes!!!

Kul:toh baat kiya???

Prem:nahi maukha nahi mila..

Preet:ahh!!!kal pakka..???

Prem:may be'

Preet:what may be kal pakka and that's it'

Prem:yeh itna aasaan nahi'

Veera comes there..

Preet:yeh lo 'tu yahan kyun aayi??mom???

Veera:mom so gayi hai..wo yahin aaney waali thi par maine kaha bhaiyya abhi nahi aaye..toh who apney room chali gayi'but pb itney sad kyn hai..

Preet:the same old story'

Veera:pb don't worry everthing will be fine

Kul:okay..prem main dinner laga ti hoon fresh hokar aaja..

Prem:I'll be there..

Kul:aur tum do bandaron chalo mere saath..

They three leave''

Prem:pata nahi wo pal kab aayega jab sab thik ho jayega'kaash wo pal jald se jald aajaye..

At maan mansion..

Heer is in her room'

Teji comes there..

Teji:abhi tak soyi nahi beta..

Heer:haan maa'bas kuch kaam tha'krishi so gayi ???

Teji:haan'kab tak kaam karegi beta'thak jayegi so jaa..

Heer:bas do minute maa'

Heer shuts her laptop..and goes to bed..

Heer:okay maa'now good night..

Teji:good night beta'