(FF)Tere Bin| Chap 3 -Pg 9: Apr 11 - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
Stop thanking me! 😆 You already know how much I love your ff's! 😳

As for your answers...😆 You will not get jhoote's for this ff! 😛 It's just too good for that! 😊 And oooh Prem's POV, that's going to be soooo heartbreaking to read! 😔 😳

Anywhoo continue soon! 😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
^I know...*Hugs*
Hehe, that comment about not any jhoote's makes me feel sooo better *hugs Meera*
I know. I am afraid to do Prem's POV. What if I don't bring justice to his character?...to his pain?
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: *Shifali*

^I know...*Hugs* *hugs back*

Hehe, that comment about not any jhoote's makes me feel sooo better *hugs Meera* Awwww I'm glad it makes you feel better, cus it really should!😉😃😳
I know. I am afraid to do Prem's POV. What if I don't bring justice to his character?...to his pain? Shifali....pata nahin main tumhe kitni baar kahungi....but you will ALWAYS do justice in what you write for EVERY character!😃😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

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Ok.........hmmmmmm............ well, all i have to say is......... woah!!!
Nice choice is words Madz...'Woah'
Oh Heer, i feel so bad for her!!! So much emotional pain and then to top it of physical pain too!!!!! I still don't understand Prem's POV and what happened to him, so i'm trying my best not to judge!!!! But i think Prem was just a little harsh.... you know maybe just a tinsy bit (I'm sure you realized the sarcasm in this)!!!!!!
I know, Prem was harsh. But come on, please don't judge him soo soon. Give him time to get used to what is happening. Give him time to be used to seeing Heer again...like practically, every single day.😳
The Prem in the flashback and the cold business man Prem is sooo different!!! Obviously what ever he was told really had an impact on him!!!!
Yes. He loved Heer more then his life, so whatever he was told, left a solid impact on him, and now, Heer has to break that impact and make a bigger one. This Prem, he is ruthless, and the old Prem, he was LIFE.
You captured the emotions really well!!! I'm have expecting something like cornering her somewhere and then him griping her arms so tightly, that she later finds bruises (hope nothing of that sort though)!!!!
Don't burst my bubble Madz!😆 It may happen sooner or later. OMG...I just found out, rather, this FF is turning out to be the FF that Kimmu requested..the crazy deewana one...😆
Good update and can't wait till the next chapter!!!!! Hope you update Meera and Ravjot's FF soon!!! It has to be my favorite so far!!!!
Thanks for liking PTHHT. I will be updating that one...shortly.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Chup Meera! Lemme feel unconfident for once...that would really help me!😆
BTW, guess what? Kimz requested a crazy lover FF for Prem, and looks like her dream came true..but for the FF...it's not like Ek Din will be any less crazy then this...but...😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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No....I will "criticize" when I feel the need to! 😳 So no need to fall unconfident! 😆

And ooohhh awesome! 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
^Ok, and when will that time come?
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
It will come when I don't like something you've written! 😛 you wait...it'll happen at some point in life! 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
^Can't it happen now? Or did I ruin it by telling that ring thing? *Stomps feet*
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Posted: 16 years ago
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You kinda did...but I'll criticize soemthing in the next part of PTHHT, promise! 😃

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