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@P.Kamaljit.Sean

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#11

whoa another one
congratz on ur 12th ff *claps*👏
interesting concept
super awesum prolouge
awesum vm meera

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Pooja

@--Pooja--

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Wow Shifali.....another FF....😃
Wonderful character sketch.......Heer is so catty.....i feel bad for her employees......
Who's d poor fellow who was unfortunate enough to get bumped by Miss Heer Maan.....i hope the fellow has d fortitude to tolerate Heer's wrath...

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Meera

@indiandoll89

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Updated my comments! 😃

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

hey another ff ur a record breaker very diffrenet but i still like it keep it up

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Heer is a complete and total brat, and I cannot believe I am saying this, but I really, really want to slap her right now. 😆

I've been going around unreserving and commenting on FFs, and now, I'm a bit tired, so the comment will be short kay? 😃

The premise is interesting, Obviously you can write a catty and arrogant Heer very well, but I really want to see how meeting Prem will change her, make her a better person. I mean, the person who can knock into a guy with a car, albeit lightly, how can she change? How can she be made to realise that she is not the centre of the universe? That is what I cannot wait to read because I know you will do it justice.

And I really want to see how the guy *cough*Prem*cough* reacts. I'm hoping for a fight. 😆

Love,

Radz

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