FF: Hostage- PG 45- Part 19 (11/22/09) NEW!!! - Page 33

omg so sweet and sad poor prem great job keep it up xx

hi was waiting for ur update for a loooooooong time......and the wait was worth of it!!!OMG....u stunned me by d sudden departure of heer ....i feel so sad for Prem coz HE GOT A DOUBLE BLOW ,mother n heerleaving him like dis will break him beyond repair na ....itna zulm uspar mat kar yaar make him happy.anyways urs was an AWSOME update ,.pls pm me when u update...and pls pls make it a bit fast than the earlier one😉

Wow Palchin mindblowing update 👏

hey hun..loved the upd8, rly felt prem's pain nd heer's too....loved their passion and them supporting one another but oh no!! heer left! and when prem is so vulnerable too!! why did she leave tho, is she hiding sumthin?? continue soon hun, cant stand premeer bein apart n will be waitin for the reuniting....xxx

are just read it........its awsome ...cant wait for next parts...Do continue soon..

Hi palchin

I am fine, how r u sweety?

Palchin I truly love your story, seriously I am addicted to it. The way you are describing ever emotion of premeer, their unspoken love for each other, is just sooooooo good, I don't hv any words for it, but it is truly mind blowing. Awesome update, too good.

You are right about brothers, they are the ones who leave no chance to make us angry on each there but at the same time when we need the most, they always stand by us.

First the way you made heer try to share his pain, and the way he couldn't see her pain or see tears in his eyes, it was so beautifully and perfectly described. The way they came to close to each other it was so natural, it was really like two old lovers or two souls were uniting. Liked the way everyone stood for each other in this terrible and testing time. Though I didn't like that heer left him when he needed her most. What made her leave immediately is confusing me.

Now prem has to endure so much alone, I wish that heer was with him in this time. I trust you palchin, you don't have to ask for that, I know that ultimately they are made for each other and they will be united again, but what I am not liking that she left him even though she could feel his pain. The worse thing for prem as his worst fear has come alive. Palchin I really want prem to go back to her and question her for this. good that prem realized her love for him, he did feel it.

Awesome update palchin, sachi I didn't expect their lovemaking in this update, I thought by maximum you would make them kiss or something, but the way you unfolded their coming close to each other, it was so lovely. Palchin you never disaapoint me, infact you always leave me waiting excitingly for the next update, I love this a lot.

Take care

Sia

fab ff palchin

palchin

yaaarrrrrrrr palchin kahan ho tum..............pls update soon............

plzzzz update soon. where r u?