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Posted: 16 years ago
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HIII guyzzz hope u all are doin fine........
i dunno wat they r goin to show today.......... but i has sum thaughts in my mind from long so i need to get it out so i thaught i will give one shot a try.............


PREM HEER One shot.........

Prem still sitting and crying and heer lookin from far away.......

Heer : mujhe pata hai prem ki tum is baat se poori tarah se toot gaye ho ki main sirf tumhare chehre se pyaar karti hoon lekin main kya karoon tumhara dard kam karne ke liye hi main tumhe aur dard de rahi hoon........ aakhir aisi kya wajah hai ki tumne itni badi sachchai mujhse chupaii prem........tumne aisa kyun kiya (both are crying their heart out at the same time.........)

Scene shifts to the party........... where heer and prem are standin with each other avoiding lookin at each other as both have tears in their eyes......

Prem : "heer main acchi tarah se janta hoon ki tum mujhse kuch chupa rahi ho...... pata nahi kyun mera dil manne ko taiyyar nahi ki tum mujhse nahi sirf mere chehre se pyaar karti ho....."

Heer: (thou acts very tough in front of every1 but the things that she said to prem keeps cumin back to her and she is feelin very guilty and there is immense pain in her heart...... at last when she is not able to control herself she runs out near a pool)

Prem sensing her uneasiness goes after her........ heer looking at the moon and cryin.......

Prem : 'tum to sirf prem ke chehre se pyaar karti ho na to phir tumhe itni takleef kyun ho rahi hai...... haan...."

Heer : "takleef kaisi takleef........ mujhe koi takleef nahi hai..... balki main to khush hoon ki prem ke baad tum, gaurav Sharma, meri zindagi mein aaye joki bilkul prem ki tarah hai bas prem nahi hai..... aur isse zyada mujhe kya chahiye... aur waise bhi tumhe kab se koi farak pande laga ki main kise chahti hoon aur kyun.... phir wo chahein prem ho ya koi aur....."

Prem : (in anger..... holds her by the hand turns her around and brings her close to himself) jhooth bol rahi ho tum..... tumhaari aankhein kuch air bol rahi hain aur tumhari baatein kuch aur...... agar tum prem se pyaar nahi balki sirf uske chehre se pyar karti ho to kyun tumhare dil ka dard tumhaari aankhon mein utar aaya.... kyun tum hamesha yahi socha karti ho ki prem hota to aisa karta prem hota to waisa karta........ jo ladki prem ko prem se bhi jyada samajhti ho wo keh rahi hai ki use koi fark nahi padta ki is chehre peeche prem hai ya gaurav...... jo ladki aaj tak apni har saas har dhadkan har ehsaas mein prem ko paati hai wo kehti hai ki use koi fark nahi padta........ jo ladki prem ke liye apne app ko bhool jaati hai....... jo ladki prem ka har farz har kartavya nibhaati hai......... jo apne aap ko prem ke pariwaar ke liye kurbaan hone ko taiiyaar ho jaati hai......... jo us insaan ke saath rehne ke liya taiiyar ho jati hai jo prem jaisa dikhta hai par prem nahi hai........ aur ye jaante hue ki use har pal us insaan ko dekh ke marna hoga joki prem ki yaad dilata hai par prem nahi hai..... wo kehti hai ki use koi FARK NAHI padta..... kabse heer kabse....kabse fark nahi padta.....

heer getin herself out of prem's grasp

Heer : yahi to main tumse pooch rahi hoon prem........ kabse aur kabtak...... tumhe koi fark nahi padta...... kabatak.......haan.... mere aanson se.... meri duaaon se......... meri siskiyon se...... meri yadon se......... meri baton se......... akkhir kabatak prem tumhe mere dard se koi fark nahi padta........ aakhir kabatak tumhe tumhare khud ke dard se koi fark nahi padta perm kab tak.......... (all this time heer faces opposite to prem and cryin)

Prem puts a hand on her shoulder and she turns.........

And they both just stare into each other's eyes as if understandin what they have gone thru..... as if sharing there pain....... as if the whole world has melted and there is no one except them both feelin each other's pain.... it seems that their heart will explode.... tears trickling down their eyes endlessly......and then they both reach a point where this pain becums unbearable and they both hug each other..... as if they are one as if they are unseperable....... nuthin in this world can falter their unwavering love for each other........ absolutely nuthin

hope u guyzzz njoyyed......

do criticize😉😉😊or comment😊😊😉.......


luv

-iksha

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow this seems to be a real update for today. you should be in the creative team man for sure.
i love reading what you have posted here.. hats off to you.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i loved the scene dear.........specially the lines

jhooth bol rahi ho tum..... tumhaari aankhein kuch air bol rahi hain aur tumhari baatein kuch aur...... agar tum prem se pyaar nahi karti ho kyun tumhare dil ka dard tumhaari aankhon mein utar aaya.... kyun tum hamesha yahi socha karti ho ki prem hota to aisa karta prem hota to waisa karta........ jo ladki prem ko prem se bhi jyada samajhti ho wo keh rahi hai ki use koi fark nahi padta ki is chehre peeche prem hai ya gaurav...... jo ladki aaj tak apni har saas har dhadkan har ehsaas mein prem ko paati ahi wo kehti hai ki use koi fark nahi padta........ jo ladki prem ke liye apne app ko prem ke liye bhool jaati hai....... jo ladki prem ka har farz har kartavya nibhaati hai......... jo apne aap ko uske pariwaar ke liye kurbaan hone ke liye taiiyaar hojaati hai......... jo us insaan ke saath rehne ke liya taiiyar ho jati hai jo prem jaisa dikhta hai par prem nahi hai........ aur ye jaante hue ki use har pal us insaan ko dekh ke marna hoga joki prem ki yaad dilata hai par prem nahi hai wo kehti hai ki use koi FARK NAHI padta..... kabse heer kabse....kabse fark nahi padta.....



wowowowow i want that scenes that dilogues to come in the serial also
loved it

love
dimple
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: india

wow this seems to be a real update for today. you should be in the creative team man for sure.

i love reading what you have posted here.. hats off to you.



thank uuu soooooooo much.........
i hope we get the confession scene tomoro......
luv
-iksha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: tv star

i loved the scene dear.........specially the lines

jhooth bol rahi ho tum..... tumhaari aankhein kuch air bol rahi hain aur tumhari baatein kuch aur...... agar tum prem se pyaar nahi karti ho kyun tumhare dil ka dard tumhaari aankhon mein utar aaya.... kyun tum hamesha yahi socha karti ho ki prem hota to aisa karta prem hota to waisa karta........ jo ladki prem ko prem se bhi jyada samajhti ho wo keh rahi hai ki use koi fark nahi padta ki is chehre peeche prem hai ya gaurav...... jo ladki aaj tak apni har saas har dhadkan har ehsaas mein prem ko paati ahi wo kehti hai ki use koi fark nahi padta........ jo ladki prem ke liye apne app ko prem ke liye bhool jaati hai....... jo ladki prem ka har farz har kartavya nibhaati hai......... jo apne aap ko uske pariwaar ke liye kurbaan hone ke liye taiiyaar hojaati hai......... jo us insaan ke saath rehne ke liya taiiyar ho jati hai jo prem jaisa dikhta hai par prem nahi hai........ aur ye jaante hue ki use har pal us insaan ko dekh ke marna hoga joki prem ki yaad dilata hai par prem nahi hai wo kehti hai ki use koi FARK NAHI padta..... kabse heer kabse....kabse fark nahi padta.....



wowowowow i want that scenes that dilogues to come in the serial also
loved it

love
dimple


thanks a lot dimple.......
glad u liked it......
luv
-iksha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i would be over da moon if some thing like dis happened
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaibun

i would be over da moon if some thing like dis happened


thanks zaibun but i guess u will still b over the moon once they confront.......... and i think that will b wither tomoro or monday hope its tomoro.......
luv
-iksha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its fantastic.touched my heart.thnk u sooo much

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sugi77

its fantastic.touched my heart.thnk u sooo much


ur welcum dear..........
thank u for readin it and likin it ........
luv
-iksha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bul3

awesome one shot..


thank uuuu😊😊😊
luv
-iksha

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