im always there for u one shot premeer

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hey guys i came up with this idea and thought of sharing it with u
it starts from yesterdays episode

There she was just walking home now more confused than ever she had so many hopes that after her trip to Delhi would answer all her questions about gaurav Sharma but she couldn't believe what she heard . she dint know how to react should she be happy as gaurav was her prem or should she be sad that prem dint trust her enough to tell her what he was doing she dint understand anything after that women calming to be gauravs mum showed her various pictures of prem or gaurav it was hard to tell. But just as she herd prem from that woman's mouth she couldn't help but listen to what she had to say

Flash back;

Heer said her byes to aunty and thought she should go back home as there was no point in staying here . heer went out the front door and then relised she had left her mobile on the table and went back inside to get it then she heard the truth that she always wanted to hear that gaurav is her prem .

Aunty on the phone:

Haan prem puthar tum nay jesa kha tha mein nai woh kya bechari heer kit ho tum mein prem pani ki umeed be chali gai

Puthar tu meinu dass tu yeh kyun kar raha hai ithni achi larki tho hai wo aur tu us say bohath pyaar be kartha hai

Prem: aunty sorry maa apko tho pattha hai tho phir

Aunty: haan ab tho tery siwa mera hai koon issy lya mein thumhary maada kar rhi hun . par prem eik bath tho hai thu is ko jald say jald apni sachai batha dein kyun kay jo dard mein heer ki ankoo mein dekha hai agar wo bahir agya ya usay koi aur dukh mila tho wo jee nahi paygi

Prem:aunty aissay math kho uss ka dard tho mujh say be nahi dekha jatha lekin meri be majboori hai

Aunty: haan mujhe patha hain prem tu heer say bhoth pyaar kartha hai aur thu yeh saara natak usi kay lya kar raha haiin lekin tu plzzz us ka khyl rakha kar us ki ankoon mein dard nahi acha lagtha aur patha nahi akhir baar wo kab hassi thi

Prem: acha maa teek hai wais app ko meri heer kasi lagi

Aunty: bilkul chand ki thrhan

Bye, bye

Heer doesn't know how to react and grabs her phone and just leaves treay eyed . heer couldn't think straight and was thinking about prem all through the flight and even in the taxi . she told the driver to drop her off near the park as she wanted to clear her head

Present:

Heers still in her thoughts ,she doesn't notice the drunk guys in the park and just makes her way home as she decied

Prem ab jo mujhe patha chal gaya hai kay thum hi mere prem ho tho ab mein skoon ka saans longi

Prem thum fikar math karna mein tum say kuch nahi punchu gi kyun kay mujhy tum paar pura brosa hai

Mein tum say gaurav ki thrah hi baath karoogi lekin zyaada dantu git ho nahi kyun kai itni himmath ab mujh mein nahi hain

Ab prem tum khud mujhey bato gayn kay tum prem ho

Baas mein dua karthi hunk ay wo pal bohat jaldi ayy

On the other hand prem has just came from some work and is just driving pass the park when he see s heer

Prem: heer yhaan nahi mujhe bhi har waqth wohi nazar athi hai

Hits himself on the head

And just as hes about to drive preet rings him he stops the car and step into the side to get fresh air and listen to what preet has to say

Here heer is walking and the drunken people are following her as she hers the whiskey botol break she comes out of her thoughts and is aware of the drunkies she walks as fast as her legs could carry her

But to her bad luck the drunkies reach her one of them grabs her and says omg hmari thraf tho dekho and star misbehaving with her

Just then heer sees a figure on the side of the road and shouts her lungs out

"KOI HAIN MUJHEY BACHAOO PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ HELP ME HELP ME "

Prem hears heers voice and says yeh tho heer ki awaz hi woh yhaan mujh jana chahi

As soon as heer sees prem she shouts prem plzzzzzzzzzzz help me

Prem s blood boils when he sees all these guys misbehaving with his heer

Prem then gives them a punch here and a punch there and kicks them about he dint have to do much as the guys were not stable but he kicked the hell out of them as how dare they touch his heer

Heer was crying like hell

Prem cums up and says it ok heer kuch nahi hua men hu na nothing happened heer hugs prem and prem is surprised and hugs her back then they have a eye locking session and then heer breaks it and says

Thank you guarav

Guarv all surprised

I know gaurav tum yeh saab kis lyin kya iss mein be thumhara koi fidaa hoga rite phir bee i want to say thanx agar thum nahi hothay tho ajja patha nahi kya hotha and she hugs him again as she has found her prem after sooo long gaurav was surprised by her behaviour

And hugged her back he wanted to ask her what she was doing here and all that but he thought this might give him away and he just said in his mind mere hothay tumay kuch nahi hoga heer kuch nahi

Heer says i know prem i know

Ab bass jaldi say saab teek ho jain

So guys hope you liked it and do comment thanx

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Posted: 16 years ago
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it's nice.. i hope it's come true even though it's a one shot... heehee
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I thought it was very good!!! U should make this into like a story!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#4
Wow that was awesome! You should turn it into a FF =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey thanx guys ill see what i can do
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey good one shot once again..šŸ‘..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Pretty cool.. Awesum, wish it was a little longer...
Keep it up. šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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arey babarey....wat a shot hope i comes true....luved it...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
that was awesome. hope the truth in the serial comes put soon too. keep up the good job. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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exellent shot........šŸ‘šŸ‘

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