Simple Gesture... Premeer One Shot... :)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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😆 I am back again and you know what... this time I have decided to get myself checked, My brain was giving out its bakwaas today in my classes...😲, that too in Analysis and Design of Algorithm😕... seriously I am becoming possessed day by day🥱... I'll get to that later... but pehle let me share them....


She tried opening her eyes but was prevented by the blindfold. Getting up from the bed she brought her hands near the knot but two warm hands stopped her from doing so by encircling her wrists.

Fully aware of the owner of those hands she whined, "Premmmmm" ,but was stopped immediately. She felt his lips pressing lightly over her cheek and a murmur of her name "Heer."

The sensuous call numbed her senses. Her breathing pace increased as he lingered his lips over her cheek bone.

They got married the previous night. The night marked their togetherness forever. The night informed the whole world that Prem and Heer are one. The night was one of the most beautiful nights for both of them as they chatted the whole night and eventually plunged into sleep.

"Prem'what are you doing?, please open the knot", Heer moaned in between while Prem continued showering his affection upon her by his kisses and sweet nothing in her ears.

After what seemed like eternity, Prem stopped and pecked her forehead uttering, "Its Time" and led her somewhere holding her hands.

Heer was running thorough numerous questions at that moment but did not ask him once because she trusted him completely.

At last they stopped and Heer being oblivious to the surrounding asked "Where'." But was stopped by Prem's finger over her lips. "Shhh" he whispered and unknotted the blindfold.

Heer squinted her eyes due to sudden rush of lights and a while later when she got a good view she tuned wide eyed placing her palms over her mouth.

They were standing on their room's balcony and infront of them,the orangey red sun was rising proudly embarking another new day.

"Welcome to our Life Mrs. Juneja", Prem whispered resting his head on her crook and enclosing her within his arms.

Heer stood speechless, teary eyed, touched by the simple gesture of her husband. She quietly spoke up, "This is beautiful'" and turned towards him, embracing him into tight hug , confessing, "I love you Prem", to which he replied "I love you too"



Ok done...now jaldi jaldi batao how did you like this shot... will be waiting...😳
and yes , be brutally honest😃

Priyadarshini aka Priyo😊


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sweta2005 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its awesomeeeeeeee too cute lovely part.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow it was so romantic.. i wish we could see something like this in the show..
u again wrote it beautifully....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hai Priyo,
As always even this one was nice. U call this bakwaas? Ofcourse when it arises in ur mind amidst work u might feel so. But according to me, i should thank ur brain bcos its due to its such bakwaases that we get to read such beautiful one-shot ffs(including the previous ones). Not all minds can think of such beautiful moments. Thanks to ur brain, we get to read such cute incidents in the life of Premeer & just hope atleast something from this comes up on tv for us to watch. Just imagine one of ur such one-shots being enacted by Harshiti onscreen as a scene.😍 Well, all we can do is wish for something like this though i don't expect any such kind considerations towards us by the creatives.
Do continue to post such one-shots if ur mind gets any such ideas.So, let ur brain ponder.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yeahhhhh!!!! Another one shot Priyo!!!
Hey Priyo *waves*
i'm Loving the so-called bakwaas that your brain is giving out!!! Let Your brain wander....I need more of this...
This One shot was soo sweet...If I keep reading more Of your sweet One shots on Prem n heer Im defo going to get Diabities..
Aww That was awesome....Seriously the whole balcony scene it was FABBB..👍🏼
Will be waiting for More.....
PS: I Swear I was Being Brutally Honest....😆
Take care
xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😍👍🏼🤗
it was like this hope you get how was that
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Beautifully done, 👏

Keep it up. 👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Your one shot makes me drive crazy and feel like bashing these creatives for not showing such moments that we can dream but they can't.I simply loved this sweet gesture.This was soo romantic and simple.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
that was so cute.....loved it. 👏 prem is a sweetheart....good job. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesum !
So simple and beautiful. 👏 👏

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