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Posted: 16 years ago
Shabzieee...
Mine!!
I'll read it and let u no
Gtg xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
Peanut Butter was HILARIOUS! & SO SO CUUTE!

And...God. So I basically read ALL your oneshots...and ask Meera...I'm totally stunned. Especially the tragedies...you've left me speechless...so you can say I'm not in a comment mood at the moment, but hopefully I shall do so for each one, sometime in the near future?

Anyway, just wanted to let you know I've been hovering over these oneshots, clicking the like button despite knowing it doesn't get anywhere close to telling you how much I LOVED each and every OS of yours. [onto the FF's now]
Posted: 16 years ago
Madz, will reply back in detail later, but PLEASE do not read Hostage and HSSH. Please. The other day I went back and was mortified. I'm serious. Read Haaq. Currently, I'm kinda proud of that. 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
Don't listen to her Madz! 😃 HSSH is FAB!!!!! 😃 And Hostage was incomplete! 😔
Posted: 16 years ago
I'd argue, but my mom is yelling to come and eat. But I'm serious, it's so I don't even know - CHILDISH sounding. Compared to now. *shivers*
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Posted: 16 years ago
Yes run Shabzie! 😃

But it was fabulous Shabz, it was the first FF I EVER read for Kis Desh! 😳
Posted: 16 years ago
That's because you were naive. I guess some parts of it were ok, but the ending was so CHEESY! I hate cheese. But thanks Meera. :)

*runs for her life*
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Posted: 16 years ago
RUUUNNN!!!!

And it wasnt cheesy, you just had to have the ending be happy! 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
HSSH was AMAZING! No cheesiness at all, I dislike cheese myself!

It was so so gooooooood. All the romance...then the twist...and then PREMM 😍 and his khoon wali maang-bhar-ing was soooooooooooo delectable! YAY PREMM! 🥳

I absolutely adoree your work Shabo! 🤗
Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Pyari_Zahra

Hehe, I love this one-shot, it is so cute! I love how you focussed on Preet's relationship with Chahat, is was oh-so-adorable! 😆 My favourite bit was her going off singing 'Chachu's scared of peanut butter' around the house! 🤣 LOL - i think they are so alike - I had to write something with them together! 😃

Haha, and I loved when she threatened to tell her Papa that he caused a scratch on her arm, I could totally imagine an angry Prem, tensed jawline on seeing his daughter hurt- eeeh, no wonder Preet quickly gave in to her! 😆 Oh gosh. Angry Prem? ☺️
But awww Preet is allergic to peanut butter- you know, I am allergic to peanuts!! Which I shouldn't really be happy about, but oh well, one thing I have in common with Preet in here, hehe! Chahat is so cute, naughty kids are so cute!I've never seen anyone so happy to be allergic to something! :)
Loved it Shabz, and no need to thank me, anytime. And there were not that many mistakes! 😳 Thanks for lying! 😃
Love Zahra xx





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Originally posted by: -Pooji-

hey shabo
i love this one-shot
awesome
loved the ending



Hey Pooji, thanks a ton! :)

Originally posted by: fungrl

Preet, is scared of PB🤣..........bechara Preet PB & J are life saver when its 3 am in the morning and you are writing a paper and huger strikes you............Preet does not know what he is missing😆😆😆

Thanx Shabo



Ohh you a fan of PB&J! LOL - for me cereal does the trick. 😆 Thanks for reading/commenting!

Originally posted by: Garima93

Mine!

Btw...I LOVEE PEANUT BUTTER! 😉 🤣I wonder why? Does it start with H and end with arsh? 😆

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THAT WAS SO DAMN HILARIOUS! 🤣 I still can't stop laughing man! 😆 I loved the Preet-Chaahat duo! They are so adorable and CUTE! *pinches their cheeks* I loved Chaahat's attitude in the beginning, it totally reminded me of you! 😉 *hides from shabo* hehe, and then her asking what allergic means and assuming it means to be scared of something! LMAO! hilarious!...and finally "Chachu's scared of peanut butter!" LMAO! 😆😆 I knew I had seen this in some show! and it was King of Queens! Nice inspiration shabz! 😆 LOVED IT!!!! *Sigh* my stomach hurts from all that laughing now! hahaha AHAH tha'ts a good one, Chahat of me? Why would I want to be Preet's niece? 😆 LOL - yea it was the show!! LOL I'm glad you liked it! 😛

I hope you get to 25 shots by August! Best of luck! 😳Thanks Garri!

Luv,
Gari



Originally posted by: indiandoll89

I thought that was the most adorable shot EVER! 😳 Liar. But thanks. :)

I loved the way you wrote it with Chahat and Preet, they must share an adorable relation together...and they better when they include it in the show! 😛 😳😃 I KNOW! I can't wait to see them in the show. :)

(Not very commenty again but I really did love it! 😊) Will you stop harping about it? You could just type in "sdhs" and I would still appreciate it. :)

Love you,

Meera



Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Shabzie, that was adorable! Completely and totally adorable! I love Chahat, she's so smart, and just like Preet, dontcha think? I see loads of similarities between the two. That's why I think they're adorable, cannot wait to see them together on screen! We should totally start an andalon where we want to see them on screen! Ihave a feeling it's going to be a while though! 😉

Love,
Radz


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