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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi guys..how are u all doing...............as you all know...(from 2day's episode)...this guy might be premšŸ˜ŠšŸ˜ŠšŸ‘...so I had this scene in my head about GEM AND HEER....so i thought i share with u guys...do comment if u like it...

"Bura Na Mano Holi Hai"

So its Holi in the juneja Khandan mein…everyone is getting ready to play holi…Kuldi's children are running around the house, preet is planning his game to get everyone in holi (especially Meher😳😳)…everyone around the house is happy and everyone including Veera😔😔 and NihaalšŸ˜• are there with Harman&Maya😔😔( i noe they shudnt be here but BURA NA MANO HOLI HAI)

So the holi party started aleady and everyone was downstairs including Gaurav😳 and they were all wearing white of course….and then Preet with a shararaati attitudešŸ˜‰šŸ˜ˆ came to put color on everyone when Lallu stops him😔 (why aren't we surprised)…Lallu said 'we cant get started without heer after all she is the bari Bahu of the Juneja Khandan"..then every one looks around to see that heer is not down here…she must be in her room…Gaurav looks kinda tense(as he was afraid that Heer is not going to come down to play holi)šŸ˜‰ā€¦Meher volunteers to bring Heer out….but gaurav stops her and said that he will bring her….Preet yells over to Hurry Up...

Heer wearing a pink and white salwar kameez is sitting on her bed with Prem's picture close to her heart, she is crying and saying.."aaj ghar mein holi…sab khush hai, masti ka raha hai par mein tumhari bina kaise khush rahoon, tum to yahan nahin ho…tumhari siva mein kaise holi manoo, yeh pehli holi tumhare bina..aaj mein holi nahi kehlongi…Mein sirf holi tumhare saath manoongi" ( Hum is pal Yahan playing in the back ground).Gaurav comes silently and is standing behind the doopr quietly listening to wat heer is saying to herself..gaurav is just looking at her.He was wishing somewhere in his heart if he could wipe those tears away, but not possible for all her love is towards prem and all her hate is towards me.

Gaurav comes in and snaps heer out of her thoughts, when Heer looks up to Gaurav she quickly wipes her tears, she says "wat are u doing here?, you are suppose to be downstairs playing holi". Gaurav goes to Heer's closet and takes out a White Dress, with golden and red designs on it…and says to put it on for every one is waiting for her downstairs. She is the oldest Bahu in this family she has to go, Heer denies that she doesn't want to go, b/c it will bring back memories of prem and heer from last holi…but gaurav insists that she goes for Maa…(the dude is a blackmailer)…..so without left any choices, she takes the dress from him and gets ready…they both go downstairs…

So Preet comes and greets heer, and he is the first one to put color on her, dheere dheere sab ayaa, GEM and Heer took blessing from Maa aur Lalit jii….So Preet comes behind Prem and puts color on his whole face and Prem gets him Back in the same way Preet got him…Harman too was playing with prem, preet, nihaal, and Kiran Jiju…..while all the girls (except maya and veera,) they are planning to color all the guys hair, especially preet, but heer denies saying she doesn't want to play, Meher and Kuldi insists but Heer doesn't listen instead she goes to a corner and stands there, Gaurav caught Heer from the corner of his eyes, then he sees Heer leaving so he tells Preet and Kiran jiju..he will be right back…

Heer is in the corner hiding behind with prem picture in front of her, she is totally lost her in thoughts about prem, that she didn't notice Gaurav standing behind her, then gaurav moves really close to Heer, that she senses him, when she turns around Gaurav is standing so close to Heer that gaurav can feel her heartbeats, Heer simply looks into his eyes and is totally lost in gaurav's eyes, gaurav too is lost in Heer's eyes (flash back to prem-heer dance when they just simply stared at each other), then out of nowhere gaurav's hand goes up to Heer's face and wipes her tears, Heer is shocked to see this (flashback to when PREM used to wipe her tears)…Heer continues to stare at him then Gaurav said "TUMHARI ANKHON MEY ITNA DARD KYON HAI....JAHAAN DARD HOTA HAI WAHAAN BAAT NAHIN HOTI.....BALKI POORI KI POORI DASTAAN HOTI HAI....ZUBAAN JO BAAT KEHE NAHIN PAATI WOH AHSOO KEHTI...HAR TARAH SE...HAR DARD KEHETEIN HAIN" Heer is totally shocked to hear this, she remembers the time when Prem told her this the day her uncle told her to sell her father's zameen...then Gaurav turns to leave and he walks away..Heer just stands there to reconcile her thoughts on wat just happen…in her mind she is think "kya Gaurav Prem hi hai?"

Meher comes to see Heer just standing there, and takes her to where everyone was playing..Preet comes to her and says "where have u been, we were just looking for you???? Then Preet puts color on heer..Heer does the same for everyone..she puts color on everyone and then she goes to put color on Gaurav and just stands there looking lost in gaurav's eyes…then Preet comes behind Heer and Pushes her toward Gaurav, Heer drops the tahli with colors on the floor..the colors are everywhere, heer is about to trip on the tahli when Gaurav grabs her by her hand and waist and pulls towards him…Heer bumps into Gaurav body totally and is staring next to her, when her hands are resting on Gaurav's shoulders (like Bol na Halke Dance)…..they have a cute eye-to-eye lock…they continue to stare at each other when Gaurav kisses her on the cheeks and say (JUST LIKE PREM)..HAPPY HOLI….AND they continue to stare at each other…

The End

P.S. PLEASE TELL ME HOW THE STORY WAS ND IF U GUYS LIKE IT…

Thank you…..

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow nice story.I hoped such thing could happen in the show also.Nut i know we are not that lucky.
wondeful imagination.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awsome!!!
It'll be great if something like this happens
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nicely done, i had wished we would see prem and heer celebrate at least one festival together, but .....
at least you made them play holi
tc
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aw kuch ziada hee cute haii..šŸ˜
made me miss prem... Nd i just cant imagine Gaurav wid heer.. sounds very peculiar for some reason..
Nway..well done greatt job.. nicee imagination! 😊

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