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swati

@sweta2005

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

update now plzzzzzzzzzzzzz waitingggggggggg asap.

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brokenheart61

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Ayesha24
Hey u r proceeding very nicely😉⭐️

not bad u r new to this forum n started writing FF i really appreciate u r talent👏
abt u r update it was ...very cute😎
Ayesha

thank you fr star

oh yes i am new but not feeling like as i am here for ages . oh i just add a scene got positive reply that why only

thanks you liked my part

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brokenheart61

@brokenheart61

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sweta2005
update now plzzzzzzzzzzzzz waitingggggggggg asap.

if i up date now what you will give me you dont get 2 episode in a day of kis desh mein hain meraa dil if 2 part a day then i must get some thing

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brokenheart61

@brokenheart61

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

part 3

you guys dont see kis desh mein hain meraa dil twice but i am giving you 2 part today hope you like it

prem and heer both confused but inside them self thanking kids are here

kid: mamoo tell us a story

prem : ok once upon a time a beautiful girl accidentally met a guy . may be that was written in their fate met staring at heer

kid then mamoo what happen

prem: she use to fight with him daily

heer ; prem finish it they are asleep

Prem: you don't want to hear was i so boring

Heer ; ask them why you are asking me.

he care fully placed them in bed

prem pick up pillow to sleep on sofa

Heer : snatch no I will sleep you sleep with them

prem: till yesterday you were throwing me out of room now want me to sleep paused gave a naughty look

heer shy walk to window

heer ; woh mein

Prem : kya

heer : when you were not prem it was different now different

Prem : what do you mean by that if i say i am not prem then you will be like before

Heer: prem don't spoil my mood i am happy

Prem : thinking ok pull the pillow from her hand suddenly

Heer was not ready for his sudden action shouted "Prem"

Prem : kya smiled

Heer : again try to snatch from his hand but he doge from one hand to other

in pulling suddenly the pillow open and all wool on them

a kid got up in their pillow fighting he start clapping

kid mamoo that girl use to find like this

Heer Sheepishly move from there .

prem started telling him story again and made him sleep

He turn back saw heer sleeping on sofa he walks to window and murmured

mr gaurav sharma are you in love with heer she asked you to act like prem not be prem . but i dont remember any thing about myself .who I am ? Where I come from? I can be her prem .she will be happy but if her prem come back then . i dont care till then I will be her prem .

to be cont plz press thnaks button so i pm you guys it will be a help plz

Edited by brokenheart61 - 16 years ago

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swati

@sweta2005

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggggg for next asap.

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brokenheart61

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: sweta2005
awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggggg for next asap.

😃 i updated for you dear thanks now sleep i will try for next in morning

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sugii

@sugii

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

wow tooooooo good,superb. i luvvvvvvved it .plz continue

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brokenheart61

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: sugi77

wow tooooooo good,superb. i luvvvvvvved it .plz continue

you liked the bomb he is not prem acting like him 😊 dont kill me please i love to give you heart attack sorry

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 16 years ago

#29

awsome part luved it cant w8 to read more

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Whypadhu

@Whypadhu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#30

super yaar really iam so haapy plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update a big next part asap.plz update it tomorrow morning kyun ki maine aap ki ff bahut badi fan hogayi.

thanks.

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