FF: Mannat II (Ch 51-Pg 38) 7/7 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Garima93

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YAY!! I'm back!! only a day late...that's not so bad, is it??😉😆 and once again...I'm FIRST to comment!!!! wooohoooo!!! *jumps up in the air* LOL, sorry but I kinda have to express my happiness in some way when I'm the first one to comment, especially on your FF!!! hehe!!! hope u don't mind...😆😆
Hey! This must be a record of some sort, you being first to comment each time! Aww...you're very sweet.🤗
WOW!! Ur update was AWESOME!!! I just loved, loved, and LOVED it!!!! Omg! Thank god Neel saved Kiran!! I knew that was coming!! ha! I'm so good!! lol!!😆 But it was shooo shweet how he saved her, and then they landed on top of eachother!!! Neel's my man!!😉 U know, I was wondering if um, for some reason Kiran ditches him in the near future (god forbid that happens) I'm always u know um...Free...to hook up with him!!😉😉 LMAO!!🤣🤣🤣 hahahahahha!!! I'm just kidding Deeps!! No one can seperate Kiran and Neel!!!
Thanks Garima! You're comments always bring a smile to my face. I wouldn't let Kiran just fall like that and I needed to get their love angle moving as well. Kiran ditching Neel? You hooking up with Neel?🤣 Now that is what I call a new love angle...but as of now, I can't say anything on the way their love story will shape up. I'm taking it update by update.
Now to the beatiful Premeer scene!!! awwww, Prem got not one, but TWO kisses from Heer!! Wah Wah!! Bhaisabh ne 2-in-1 waala deal lagaya tha kya? hahahahhaa!!! But it was really really cute!! I just hope their jodi stays like that, and they get all the happniness in life!!😳😳
Thank you hon! Yes, they will get all the happiness in life...well maybe problems here and there, but nothing to major. Before you take my statement in the wrong direction, i'm saying that they'll face problems together & solve them together...nothing that will ever separate them.
YAY!! They're on a picnic type thing!! I love picnics!! Especially when all ur family members are there..it's so much funn!!! and Their family is so wonderful!! I love them!!! Hope kisi ki nazar na lage unko!!😛😆
Picnic's can be so much fun, especially when you're having water balloon fights into the first 20 minutes of it with your cousins. No one's nazar is going to lag them...main hoon na, nazaar utharna ka liya😉!
OMG!! another cliffhanger Deeps??😲😲 Kya yaar...hum log ko kitna marvaaogi?? LOL jk jk!! I luv ur cliffhangers!! OMG!!! Kunal and Nick went missing?? NOOOO!!!!!😲 That can't happen!! I hope nothing bad happens to them!! *prays to God* Otherwise, fantastic update Deepika!! I luved it!!😳
I told you i'm back to my cliffhangers😆. Dekho main aur kyonse twists lathi hoon. And once again, you're very sweet!
Btw, Sorry for the lame comment😔 It's just that I've had a really long day at school with two tests in a row, one in Bio Honors, and one in Geo honors, the Bio one wasn't that bad, but the Geo one...I think I B.S'd it😕😕 and I slept really late last night bcuz of studying...so if this comment doesn't make sense AT ALL!! then blame it on my lack of sleep, I'm soo tired right now that my eyes are drooping, I might go take a littel nap now, so c ya later!! Byeee!! *waves*
Your comment was definitely not lame...it was very very very sweet and encouraging. I know how u feel about school...i get long days at college too. Sometimes I don't sleep at all and just run on coffee or pop. I'm sure you did great on your tests...i have full confidence in you!
Luv, Garima 😳😳

Originally posted by: -Bina-

Hey Deepika,

Your ff is reallyy verryy good! 👏
Because of my studies I haven't been able to comment

The premeer scene was awesome

You have left us on a cliffhanger, so you've to update soon!!

Bina

Originally posted by: ..kashish..

hey deepika..jsut caugth up with the both the stories!

Hey! That must have been a lot to catch up on!

wow is all i can say! so they ran away and got married...which got them disowned by their parents...and now they hve their own lil family...loving the realtionships and how they are protryed! yay prem is back finally after 5 years

Aww...i'm glad you love the relationships and how they're portrayed. I more confortable writing about this family, than the last one.

aww theya re a cute lil family, just waiting for another addtion!..so preet like ash..and mayb neel adn kiran will get tothger!

They are very cute! Yes, Preet has is eyes set on Ash, while Neel & Kiran are just being blind for each other😆!

cant wait for th enext part...

good lck with ur midterms!

Thank you!