FF: Mannat II (Ch 51-Pg 38) 7/7 - Page 3

Originally posted by: miss_hyper

i love it.....i love the leap and yeah i agree with u if if u continued the story when they left then it would be boring i like the 5 year leap...like it how everyone is happy and premeer have adopted kunal....i can't believe that heer has not seen prem for 3 years wow thats a long time....and why did u have to end it there......that was the bit i was waiting for to see how premeer react when they see eachother after all those years...i awww...i felt sorry for poor neel how everyone is picking on him to get married...and he is there running away from the girls....i like how heer and prem are in a real nice family and even though they aren't really related they act like that and stay like that...lovely update.....can't wait to read more.....

Originally posted by: destinny

hey nice update. good to see leaps in fanfics too.lol. anyways kunal is so cute. watitng for saturday

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Deepika! I am so thrilled this story is continuing! Loved this chapter, the bridge between what happened, and how they will meet their families again. I hope the cousins will have an appearance, and are still on their side? Cannot wait to see how the 5 years in between have changed the other family dynamics.

Love,

Radz

Originally posted by: Deepika G.

That was a quick reservation! Analyze😆...will wait for that!! Oh and I actually updated my comment on your ff! So you can check tht out!

Originally posted by: srklover93

Yay!! Me is First!!! Woohooo!! In order to reply to your longggg update, it's going to take me time to analyze it and stuff, so I will be editing this and hopefully you'll see my reply by friday!! So I here by....
*RESERVED*

*Edit*

Okieee!!!! I'm backk!!!!!!!!!!!!! see, I'm not late this time!! LOL! 😆😆

So, first off, I'd like to Congratulate you on your second part of Mannat!!! woohoo!! Time to partyy!!! 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
^lol...I guess you can tell that I'm a little high right now!! 😆
Hey Garima!Aww...thanks you!!! Yes...it is time to party! I'm much more calmer than yesterday though😆! That's because I watched 'Delhi 6' and LOVED it!! It just changed my whole perspective on life!
OMG!! The summary was soooo longgg!!! Infact the whole update was the size of the Nile River!!!! lolz, but that's not such a bad thing!!! LOL but I felt really bad for you, especially your hands, how did you manage to type all that??? Poor hands of yours, I hope they are still managing to work, lol!!😆
The Nile River!?! If Jodha Akhbar can be 3 hours long, then why can't my update by as long as the nile😆! Oh hon, you don't need to feel bad at all. The typing I do for my ff is only 5% of the typing I do all day.
There are so many new characters!!! wow!!! and OMG I was so right, you did take a leap!! now this totally proves I'm phycic!!! Boo-Yaaa!!! LOL!! 😆😆
I like these characters more than the other ones...they weren't very coherant & didn't have definite characteristics like these ones will. Yes...i was quite shocked to know well you caught the hint in my preview!
Im so happy that Premeer and the others found someone who would keep them as their own family members!! how sweet!!!😳😳 and wow, they even adopted Kunal!!! aawwww...they have a little family of their own!! and Btw, did I mention Kunal is the CUTEST thing ever!!!!! I swear, in the future if he ever needs a girlfriend...mention my name in it😉😉...LMAO!!! Hahahaha!! 🤣
I didn't want Premeer to be bumping into walls, so I gave them a logically family foundation! And Kunal is the cutest thing ever...his character will shape out quite nice!
Okay, lets keep going on now, shall we...😉

Awww, bechaare Prem aur Heer, 3 saal tak nahin mile?? aww, I bet that really sucks for them!!😭 But yay!! after so many years he's coming back...or should I say he has come back!!! Cuz obviously the person who kept Heer from falling to the floor was her very own beloved husband Prem 😳 Sho Shweettt!!!!! *sigh* I hope I find my self someone like Prem!!! lol, but there's still lots of time till then!! hehe 😆😆
Yes...he IS back. Is there anyone in this world like Prem!?! I certainly havn't found that guy yet...and I hope I do find someone like him before my parents package wrap me and give me away to someone else in about 4 yrs😆!
Aww, Poor Neel, getting lectures for marraige!! lmao!! and how much you wanna bet he's gonna hook up with *cough cough* Kiran!!! LOL😆😆😆
I don't want to bet at all with you, b/c ur quite right about this also...but you'll see how their relationship shapes out!
I love the whole family!! they're so sweet and just simply wonderful!!! Heer and Prem couldn't hve gotten a better family!!😳😳😳 I just hope their cousins in their original families didn't forget them and are still on their side!! well, that'll come later on...I just cant wait to see more Premeer scences, and the two new love stories!! hehehehe!! can't wait for your next update!!!
The cousins are still on their side, but they lost touch with each other the day Premeer, etc. left their family. Personally, I like this family much more!
Byeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!😛
Luv,
Garima 😳
You're comments were soo sweet!

Originally posted by: im_charmed

Hi Deepika.

Hi hon!!
that was awesome👏 i liked how they all had good support to keep them going after they left home and that they're all successful.

I'm glad to know that you liked how the story is shapping out!
aww, i love kunal, hes sooo sweet😃 n the other families are really nice aswell.

Kunal truely is lovable!! I'm glad you accepted this family too!
poor neel, he's being troubled about marriage now😆
im guessing it was prem who caught heer😳 that was such a nice entry.
can't wait to read more. your fanfic is sooo addictive.

Addictive!?! Awww....i'm glad you love this ff! You're sooo sweet!
please continue soon 😃

Originally posted by: Thapanee

hey mannat 2 is a great idea....i enjoyed this part...kunal is so cute...cant wait to read next part