FF: Mannat II (Ch 51-Pg 38) 7/7 - Page 10

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

good luck for ur exams
awesum update
ash lied to preet
loved preet ash scene

Originally posted by: premeer928

hey
the update was awesome. 👏 poor preet...hope he finds out soon that ash is just lying and doesnt break her heart as she thinks. loved premeer scene...even though there was only one. 😛 good luck on your exams. continue soon. 😊

Originally posted by: zaibun

totally understand n cant w8 for da next part

gud luk

tc

Originally posted by: ~nikki1992~

hey di. amazing update.

i loved the motherly side of both women in the beginning.

the ash-preet story is interesting, i wonder how ur going to develop their story,

but its going to be amazing as u u give justice to all the couples in this story.

love the lines u gave preet, love it ...love it...... love it..!!!

i love love love the prem-heer scenes u include in each update, love it..

good luckk on ur exams, and i noe forsure u'll pass with Flying colors..

cant wait for the next, and till then take care..

~nikki😳🤗

Originally posted by: kis desh Rocks!

very nice update.. everyone's love story is moving ahead,,, it was nice reading the update.. waiting for next update and also waiting to read more of prem and heer's....

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Hey Deepu!

So the love story between Kiran and Neel is moving forward, and poor Preet! *sigh* I wanna hit Ash with something right now. But I guess I can see where she is coming from. But I love Preet so much. *pulls cheeks*

Love,

Radz

Originally posted by: munam_13

hey deepika... read your ff after a very long time and was surprised with the developments... it was so much for me to digest in a single day... must say everything and all the parts were really awesome and sorry for discontinuing to read your ff... *pouts and holds ears*

Originally posted by: destinny

great great part. stories are getting their new points and new beginning. lol anyways best of luck for ur midterms

Originally posted by: Garima93

*Reserved*

*Edit*

Aw Man!! I'm not first to comment this time!! Boo-hoo😭😭 LOL, it's okay, there's always next time!!😉

Aww..it's okay, maybe next time!!

Omg! Thank god nothing happened to Kunal and Nick!!! They are safe and sound!! Aaj kal ke bache bhi na...itne shaitaan hagaye hain!! Very bad...but then again, both are so adorable, that u can't even scold them!! hehe!!
Aaj kal ke bache bohat shararti hai😆! Though they are extremely adorable, which is why their mom's didn't scold them.

Oooh!! So they're having a party!! Sounds very very interesting, that means more drama!!! hehe!!

Drama!?! I don't know about that, but it'll definitely be interesting.

I loved how Neel and Kiran shared their thoughts to eachother!! Sho cute!!! now they're teamed up!! Reminds me of what happened with Premeer back in Mannat I...alas history repeats itself!! Poor Preet, I feel really bad for him, unknowingly he got rejected by Ash. I don't think she shouldn't have done that, it really hurt Preet's feelings, but most likely you have something good planned for them!!😳😃 Will wait to see what happens with their love story!!!

History isn't really going to repeat with them, they're just going to help each other out if one of them gets stuck in a sticky situation caused by the ladies. Yes...there is something good planned for PreAsh.

Awww, the litte cute Premeer scene at the end was so adorable, leke har baar yeh besharam Preet kabab mein haddi banjaata hai!! grrr!!! LOL, but I still love him!!!! Otherwise, your update was mindblowing!! simply fabulous!! Can't wait to read your next chapter!!!! 😳😳😳 Take care!! Byeee!!!
Preet toh hai besharam and he's not shy about it either😆! Thank you for the sweet comments! They were very sweet to ready. And yes, my next chapter will be up in a few hours.

luv,
Garima😊

A big hug to you...🤗

Originally posted by: ..kashish..

hey di hope u continue soon!