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Posted: 16 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: baanisings

nice FF😛
PART 1 is too good...👏👏
just seein forward to its further updates
"har pal ke saath ek umeed bandh jaati meri dhadkano ke saath..har saanso mein tumhare hi intezaar hai..prem'ab aa bhi jao"
this show heer's wait nd her love for prem

do continue soon...



thanks tannu..
glad u like my FF...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: maniasings

hey nice story dear!!!!!!!!!1

lyked it alottt...its mine 1st story in this forum kis desh main hai mera dil......on othere forums i read many mnay story ......on this forum i lyked ur story.......1 st story!! others i'll b staring now........:):):).



FIRST OF ALL WECOME TYO THIS FORUM...
glad u like my FF...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13

THANKSS FOR THE GOOD RESPONSE...


~*~* PART 2~*~*

Next morning'

A guy standing near..window'

Someone calls from behind..

Voice:prem beta'prem beta..

Prem:good morning maa'(touches her feet)

Maa:good morning beta'jaldi tayaar ho jaa..college ke liye dair ho jayegi'

Prem:maa im ready'

Maa:jaldi se dinning hall main aaja..

Prem:I'l be ther maa'

Maa leaves..

Prem goes near a maniquine'inbridal dress..veiled..

Prem:good morning heer'..and again'I love soo much'pata hai heer kal maine kisi se bhi baat anhi ki kal saara din library main bhi beet gaya'aur ab bas ek maahine main humare final semesters hai..aur finals ke baad main seedhe tumhare paas..

A voice from behind:waah bhai!!maa ke baad bas heer bhabhi???

Prem:arrey raji'tu yahn??

Raji:kyun main nahi bat kar sakti apni bhabhi se??

Prem:kar sakti hai na..

Raji:waise maa aapko bula rahi hai..

Prem:haan main abhi aaya'aur ab tum jao'

Raji:how mean bhai..????now u go nad ill talk to bhabhi'

Prem:huh???

Maa from downstairs:kulraj..prem jaldi se aajao beta'

Raji:dekho maa bulava aa gaya'.

Prem:haan chalo'

They both go down'

Maa:kitni dair laga di beta'aur kulraj tu bhi??

Raji:maa main kya karti wo bhai hi busy thay bhaaaa'.

Prem:wo maa main notes check kar raha tha..

All are having their breakfast..

Prem:tu chal tera bata ta hoon'

Raji:haan bhai bata dena'

Preet:good morning maa'good morning pb..god morning raji..

Maa:raji di keh badi hai who tujhse ..aur yeh pb kya laga rakha hai'??prem bhai keh..naam hai..

Preet:maa its cool..

Maa:cool??kya hai..prem ko koi prem hi nahi kehta..koi pb toh pj'pata nahi..koi ussey prem bhi bulayaeja ya nahi..

Preet/raji:don't worry maa..heer bhabhi keh degi..aapki khwaih poori hojayegi..

Maa:haan bas who hi keh sakti hai'

Prem:maa aap bhi..??

Just then haary comes..

Harry:good morning aunty'good morning preet'good morning raji'

Maa:good morning Harman beat..

Preet/raji/harry:harry'

Maa:okay harry..

Harry:chal p.j late ho rahi hai'meet bhi humey college main hi mileyga..

Prem:aur dheer..???

Harry:who humara bahar intezaar kar raha hai..ab hum chaley????

Prem:oaky maa bye..

Harry nd prem leaves..

At college..

Meet:mahi tum bhi na'

Mahi:kya main bhi na'

Meet:tum kitna bolti ho'kisi aur ko bhi kehna ka maukha diya karo'.dekho pari kitni acchi sabko kehne ka maukha deti hai..

Mahi:pari???wo kabhi kehti bhio hai kya???har waqt to chup rehti hai'

Meet:main bhi to wohi keh raha hoon..kuch seekho apni behan se..

Mahi:very funny meet'main nahi rahungi chup..aur rahi chup rehne ki baat wo tum rahoge'

Meet:mahi ii'oh god issey thodi akal de de..

Mahi:wat do u mean??

heer:ab tum dono chup bhi karo'.class ka time ho raha hai..yeh apna jhagda baad jaari rakhna'

Meet:see tahts likea good girl'mahi kuch seekho'

Mahi gives a cold look'

Meet:I mean mujhe kuch seekhna chahie pari se'

Meet:okay bye pari..bye mahi main abhi yahan se chala jaata hoon warna..main pagal ho jaunga'

Mahi:kuch kaha??

Meet:nahi main toh bas yehi keh raha tah..class ke liye dair ho rahi hai..

Meet leaves'

Harry..prem nd dheer arrives..

p.j:hiii mahi..hii pari..

mahi/heer:hii pj..

p.j:meet kahna hai??

Mahi:wo class main gaya hai..

p.j:itni jaldi??strange..wohi sabse last aat hai class main..

heer:nahi wo actually mahi aur meet ke beech choti si bhehass ho gayi thi..

harry/dheer:haan haan we know kitni choti hogi..

mahi:harry..dheer..

p.j:ab humey bhi class chalna chahiye..

they also leaves..

heer:mahi ab hum chaley??waise bhi aaj first painting hai.,..

mahi:pari'mujhe nahi aati painting nd I hate'miss liya'wo kitna sarr pakati hai..

heer:bas one month wait karlo'tumhare problem solve'

mahi:haan haan pata hai..ab chal..

heer:haan chal'

they both go to their painting class..

heer:mahi late ho gayi..

mahi:parii'liyaaa'marr gaye..

heer:ecuse mam

mis liya:you both are late by two minutes..

mahi murmur:aisey chilla rahi hai jaise 2 ghantey late ho gaye hai..

liy:maii..did you say sumthing??

Mahi:no mam'

Liya:get in..from next time be on time..

Mahi murmurs:aise baat karti hai ajise military mai ho..

Heer:mahi chup kar..

Mahi:don't worry pari..ussey humari language nahi aati..

Miss liya:mmuje todi baut indi aati aai maii..now get back to painting..

Mahi and heer..on their canvas..

Mahi:"muje todi indi aati aaiii"'yeh hindi thodi hai??

Heer:mahi painting kar warna wo tujhe punish karegi'

Mahi:punish karegi..????uski toh main bandd baja dungi..

Miss liya standing in front of mahi..

Liya:maii..i wanna see ur painting today..

Mahi:sure mam..

Heer:mahi'ab painting kar..

Mahi:thik hai mummy ji'

After sometime..

Heer paints a girl waiting for someone..

Liya:nice painting her..

Heer:thanks mam..

Liya:nd wheres ur painting maaii??

Mahi:mam..here it is..

Liya:wats this maii..

Mahi paints sumthing like monalisa in veil'

Mahi:mam its Indian mona lisa..

Liya:ur impossible maii..

Miss liya leavaes'

Mahi:shukr hai baba ji ka'yeh aafat gayi..

Heer:mahi'

Mahi:pari'ab cahl caf chaltey hai ..waise bhi meet mujhe gussa hai..they both leave..



HOPE U ALL LIKE IT..


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Edited by sweetshab - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
luved it very gud so heer n prem are in da same college but heer knw him as pj n not as prem an he knw heer as pari
o boy r dey in for a shock
luved it do update soon
luv ya lots
bye cya
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: zaibun

luved it very gud so heer n prem are in da same college but heer knw him as pj n not as prem an he knw heer as pari

o boy r dey in for a shock
luved it do update soon
luv ya lots
bye cya



thanks dear glad u liked it...
yup premeer r in same coll..
but seems like their destiny isn't in their favour...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
thnx cant wait for da next part update soon waiting luv ya
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
hey shab..

i really loved ur FF..
its different...premeer are togethr but don't know each other..that really very interesting..


continue soon.......me waiting......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
yaar come on plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update cant w8 to read
thnk you
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
hey
nice update
premeer r in the same college wow
they don't know each other
wonder what will happen next
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: baanisings

hey shab..

i really loved ur FF..
its different...premeer are togethr but don't know each other..that really very interesting..


continue soon.......me waiting......



thanks tannu..
glad u liked my FF
hmm...they together but don;t know each other..

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