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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweta2005

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I WILL TRY TO UPDATE ON SUNDAY😛😛 dear thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago
amazing superb update as always!!!
loved when heer was fooling around with prem!! hahaha it was sooo cute when he was getting jealous of himself as mr ajnabi!!
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waiting for the update Neha
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Hello guys

Here is the update..this is a short update I have to go and study for my test so kindly bare with me this stime sorry for mistakes as I typed it in a hurry''.

Part 24

The next morning after the karvachaut celebrations 'Everyone is having there breakfast When gay3 informs them that tomorrow they all are going to Ambala Because It has been ages that the family has spent some time together

Prem:-ma likin kal mere aik important meeting hai mai kaise'.

Preet:ha mai aur Pb tu nahii chal sakti app sab log chali jaye..

Heer and meher becomes sad and gay3 notices that

Gay3:-parivaar kaam si pehli aata hai samjhe ..aur maine kaha na kal hum sab Ambala jarahi hai matlab jarahi hai''.

Prem:-Maa likin..

Kulraj:-likin waikin kuch nahii prem'.Home minister ki order de diya tu matlab dediya'samjhe'

Lalit:-haa baita kaam tu hota he rahiga ''Aur waise bhii bohut time hogaya hai hum sab picnic ki liye kahee nahii gaye'..

Ashlisha:-ha jeju'bohut mazza ayega''bachpan ki yaadon mai phie se koh jayengi hum sab'us ghar mai jaakar rahingi jaha Heer DD,meher aur maine apna bachpan guzara hai'''

Armaan:- Maine bhii bachpan wahee guzara hai (making ash realize that he is also present winking at her,Ash glares at her while other giggles at them)

Prem looks at Heer who is waiting for his answer ..He smiles and says '

PRem:-Ok '..fine hum sab kal Ambala chalinge'.

Preet:-theek hai prem bhaiya maan gaye hai tu phir mai bhii chalonga''

HEer and meher bursts into a big wide smile '.gay3 also informs veer and nihall to join them for picnic

YEHHHHHHHHHHHH'.. Everyone one shouts'''''happily..

All the male members leaves for office while the ladies start preparation for going to Ambala for picnic''''

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AT Night

Prem comes from office''its late as usual heer was waiting for him'''Heer was packing her clothes happily smiling and singing'.slowly'prem entered the room and smiled at her wife.

He hugged her from back and placed his chin on her shoulder ,his hands wrapped around her bare waist 'and placed a kiss on her cheeks'.Heer smiled'

Prem:-kiya baat hai?ajj koi bohut khush lag raha hai'.

Heer:-Haa'mai bohut khush hoon''

Prem:-Kyon? (rubbing his cheeks aginst hers)

Heer:kyonki kal hum sab Ambala ja rahi hai,tumhi pata hai prem.(placing her hand on his cheek)Ambala mai maine apna poora bachpan guzara hai '.yeh woo jaga hai jaha maine tumhara 15 saal intizaar kiya''',jaha maine apni zindagi sab se anmol pal guzari apni maa papa jee ki saath,apni rishti daaro ki saath,apni DOSTOO ki saath,jaha ,maine apna school parha,college aur phir University bhii..jaha maine apni Law ki Degree haasil kee'I became a lawyer'maa papajee kitni khush thii us din (sighing a tear rolled down her cheek remembering her parents)

Prem:-Hey'Mrs.juneja..please app roye mat'(turning her to face him) Heer tumhi apni maa papajee ki yaad karki khush hona chahiye unhi muskorahat ki saath yaad karma chahiye..naki in ansoowo si ..jis si tum unhi bhii takleef dedtee hoo aur mujhe bhii..(making a sad pout)

Heer:- I am sorry..(holding her ears)

Prem:- Well ab tum itna maafi mang rahee hoo tu'.(pulling her closer towards himself from holding her waist like he always do in show)

Heer:-phir si badmaashi shorro'''

Prem:-BADMAASHI kaun kar raha hai mai tu bas Pyaar karni ki koshish kar raha hoon'

Heer:- (hits him playfully on his shoulder) tumhi khana nahii kana..kiya ..mai tumhari liye khana latee hoon

Prem:-mujhe bhook nahii hai..(holding her more tightly..)

Heer:-Premmmm''

Prem:-Heerrrrrr'''' (pushes her on the bed and Now he is on top of her'and carenessing the corner of her lip with his finger'''before heer could utter a single word of protest..Prem locks her lips with his .he kisses her passionately and she kisses him back and they both get lost in the world full of passion and love for each other ''..(samjdar ko isharaa kaafi hai))

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MORNING''''..

Everyone has got ready For there trip or family picnic to Ambala'.They all hired a bus so they can be toghether

''they all enjoyed the way to ambala by singing and joking ,playing Antakshree in the bus and having lots of fun'''

After 3 HOURS''

After 3 hours the all reach to AMBALA'''the bus stops infront of Balraj's home'''they all came down from the bus 'meher ,heer ,meher and ash has got very emotional by seeing there house after a long time ,lalit too gets teary remembering his friend ''

Armaan:-yeh kiya hum yaha enjoy karni aye hai ya phir roni'''

Everyone wipes there tears and smiles''prem put his hands around heer's shoulder and gives her a concern lok,preet slowly moves forward and holds meher's hand '.which make them smile'' A Guy opens the door'' and walks forward to them''

He is the care taker of House '..He welcomes them all in the house''

They all get fresh'''and they servants has already prepared food for them'''they ate it together and then gay3 says she and lalit are going to the house of a close friend of them'..so they all can enjoy alone''After they leave'''Meher and ash take heer,kulraj and veera with them somewhere'..the guys are left behind'''they were getting bored in home so Armaan says

Armaan:- dekho bore honi se tu achcha hai ki hum sab bahir ghomni jaye '''

Nihaal:-likin yeh sab loog humi akela chod kar gaye kaha.?

Kiran:-yeh aurtoo ko samajna kitna mushkil hota hai '.humi yaha family picnic ki naam par laye aur khud he gooom gaye'

Prem:-I think unhi yaad karni si behtar hai hum sab kahee ghoomni chali'

Preet:-likin PB humi yaha pehli baar aye hai humi tu kuch malloom bhii nahii hai yaha ki baari mai

Armaan:-arri mai hoona Come on mai tum logo ko Balraj uncle ki zameeno ki sair karata hoon.

They all agree and make there way to THE FIELDS'''''''..

Its looking beautiful all around..armaan were showing them the land which is on balraj's name ''''''the all were enjoying there BOYS day out but somewhere still missing there ladies''..

Suddenly kiran sees a girls wearing a white shalwar kameez with yello dupattta running across the GREEN fields,,HE thinks the face is very familiar ..Aftyer clearing his vision''..HE sees that SHE WAS HEER>''''.."Heer" kiran takes her name looking at her..all the boys turn around at kiran's voice and saw that HEER was running'fastly..They all also move a little nearer to them,........

HEER runnned and HUGGED a guy wearing a black jacket,black hat and jeans ''She hugged him saying'..They guys are unable to see his face cause his back is facing them




Heer:-I LOVE YOU RAHUL'..I LOVE YOU'mai tumsi bohut pyaar karti hoon'''(she is hugging him her eyes areclosed and all this scenery was watching by the guys'WHO WERE ALL SHOCKED and most especially PREM''''''..He was shocked his wife was hugging someone and saying those three precious word to him'''That she love him'''..His blood began boil'He clutched his fingers to fist'..it was unbearable for him''.HOW CAN HIS HEER SAY I LOVE YOU TO ANOTHER MAN>''''''..His anger grew by every second'''Preet,kiran,and nihaal were also shocked

But only armaan was smiling seeing HEER'''''''.Prem started moving forward with anger like he is going to kill that b*****

Who is hugging his wife''.

Heer and that guy broke apart from hug''Heer was smiling unaware that prem is coming towards them'''''

The Guy removes his hat and his hairs fall open''WAIT''..

HIS hairs are long like a girl''..Prem stops mid way'..

Meher:-DD rahul nahiii RAJ'..app hamisha bool jaate hai 'SRK ka naam RAJ hai DDLJ mai RAHUL nahii''''''''

That guy was meher ,,MEHER WAS DRESSED like a boy'''

Veera:-bhabhii yeh appka dosra take tha aur app phir si bool gaye..

Kulraj:-bhoolna tu thaa na..veera HERO ka naam agar prem hota tu kabhie nahii bhooltee (heer blushes)

Ash:-hum aik phir try karti hai''.

Heer:-dekho mujh se yeh sab nahii hoga''tum loog''

All the guys are still in a state of shock especially poor prem who is still standing like a statue'

Armaan:-nahii hoga '''''Sun shine si nahii hoga''(smiling)

Ash:-Why are you discouraging my DD?(pointing towards armaan ,armaan places a kiss on her finger)

Armaan:-I am not discouraging SUNSHINE'.likin pichli 15 saal mai jo nahii huwa who ab kaise hoga

Kiran:-15 saal se kiya nahii horahahai?

Armaan:-Inka yeh drama?

Prem:-DRAMA? Kaisa DRAMA''.

Armaan:-DDLJ ka drama'.yeh sab meher aur ash ki karastaani hai..Sun shine ko hamisha DDLJ ka simran bana kar us bichaaree ko kheto mai dawrati reh ti hai..aur heer hamisha'SRK ka naam bhool jaate hai..kabhiie rohan kehti hai tu kabhii rahul''(laughs)

Prem:- (sighing) Yeh hh drama tha'.

Veera:-kyon bhiya appko sach laga'..

Preet:-aur nahii tu kiya'.humi laga patta nahiii bhabhie kis se gali mil rahee hai '''

Veera:-Bhaiya boliye na appko kaisa laga''.(heer was waiting for his reply looking at him)

Prem:- aise koi baat nah nahii''.(he lies)

Kulraj:-Tera chehra dek kar kart u kuch aur he lag raha hai humi'''.(they all laugh at him heer also smiles)

Prem turns his face and starts to walk away''Heer goes behind him''''and holds him by his arms

Heer:-prem tuni veera ki sawal ka jawab nahii diya'..

Prem:-HEerr'

Heer:-please batawo na prem tumhi kiya laga'ki mai kisse aur se''I love you keh rahee thee'

Prem nods''..a yes sadly

Heer smiles:- tumhi patta hai prem ,,tumhari yahee addatien mujhe bohut pasand hai''..tumhari U bachcho ki tarah root jaana'..aur phir aise roondee shakal banana'' aur tum fikar mat karo mai tumhara peecha itni jaldi tu nahii chorne waliii'kam az kam is janam mai tu bilkul bhii nahiii''''''''''''''.

He smiles and hugs her she hugs him back'.

Then they all walk along the fields for a while and then goes back to home''''''''..

Someone calls armaan

Armaan:-Hello......what?.................appp yaha'''..appni batay nahii au raise''''I am really happy'''''''Will be waiting''''BYE'..

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THE END OF PART 24

PRECAP:-- preet is asking heer:- batayena bhabhii kiya ppki zindagee mai prem bhaiya si pehli koi tha''.U know like college mai '..jisne appjo propose kiya hoga''.HEEr replies :-YES. there was someone in my life'''''.PREM and all the other family members get shock'''.

LOVE NEHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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Edited by Additi... - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part loved it waitingggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Prem bechara to buddhu ban geya😆
Nice update😊
Keep it up😃


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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update as usual from you 👏 👏 👏
loved it ...
waiting for the next update
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow neha awesome update and precap seem's interesting cant wait for the next part

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