New FF: Jab Luv Hota Hai {part 1-pg.3 dec.24}

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Salaam Namaste everyone!!!!!! *waving* I'm sonali, if some of you dont know me!😃 I'm starting my third FF which is completely different from the first and second FFs i wrote. It's gonna be hard writing two FFs at the same time but i'll manage somehow. Please please comment/criticize!!!!!!😳
take care,
luv sonali

Prologue

Chan, Chan, Chan...Still wearing her engagment sari, Heer Mann walked down the aisle of the train, looking for an empty seat. She ignored the people's questioning looks and took a window seat beside a young guy who was asleep. She put down the suitcase with a thump causing the guy to wake up with a jerk. He turned to give Heer a glare but his eyes softned as he gazed at her. Looking at her from head to toe, he quickly turned away as heer spoke. Are you like, checking me out? Heer asked with a smirk as his face turned red. Trying to change the topic, he asked Shaddi sai bhaag kar ai ho kya? Thumse sai matlab? Heer asked angrily and quickly.
A bit embarrassed, Heer stared out the window and her thoughts drifted off to Meher. Suddenly she felt guilty, leaving Meher alone to face her parents and Manmeet but what else could she do? Heer just wanted a few weeks of freedom before she married Manmeet. Her whole life she had been trapped in her house by her over-protective parents and a few weeks ago, Heer had been surprised by her parents that she was getting married to Manmeet Singh. Of course, Heer hadn't been able to say anything to her parents and was now engaged to Manmeet earlier today. She quickly wiped a tear away and looked at the guy who was sitting beside her.
He was now listening to his Ipod with his eyes closed and was moving his head up and down, slowly with the music. Hmm....he's not that bad heer thought and giggled. he looked cute with the light stubble on his face, ruffled up hair, a white see-through t-shirt with black jeans. The guy suddenly opened his eyes and gave her a lopsided grin. Are you, like checking me out? he said, imitating Heer. Heer's eyes filled with surprise and could feel her cheeks turning red. Pointing to Heer's expression, he burst into laughter while Heer crossed her arms and stared ahead. He laughed even more and soon Heer joined in. As they stopped laughing. awkward silence filled the atmosphere. Soon, he stuck out his hand. Hi...I'm prem. Prem Juenja. Heer smiled and was about to stick out her arm, adorn with bangles but hesitated. Gazing into his deep chocolate coloured eyes, she smiled. Joining her hands together, she spoke. Namaste, I'm Heer Mann.
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part 1-pg.3
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey sonali di
u r starting another ff
wow interesting

Edited by pooji123456789 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy...really nice...
sounds different and very interesting...
post the next part soon 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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VERY NICE!!!!!!!!! .......................PLZ cont. soon!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww thats sweet... plwase update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooji123456789

hey sonali di
u r starting another ff
wow interesting

hey poonam! yeah the idea just popped into my head last night and i just had to start an FF. you know how i am....i forget things easily!😆😳

Originally posted by: xpremheerx

heyy...really nice...
sounds different and very interesting...
post the next part soon 😊

aw thanks! yeah its different from other FF's....but thats a good think right?!😉😳

Originally posted by: Iqra238

VERY NICE!!!!!!!!! .......................PLZ cont. soon!!!!!!!

thanks iqra! i'll try to update tues or wed!😊

Originally posted by: rag-ran4ever

awww thats sweet... plwase update soon

thanks 4 commenting!😊 i'll try to update asap
Edited by sonali09 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG SONALI!!! ANOTHER FF??!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!! following the same footsteps as me lolz.....aakhir dost kiski ho??...*pops up collars* LMAO!!!

No but seriously congrats on ur THIRD FF!!! WOOHOO!!!!
And this one is just as amazing and wonderful and fantastic and great and...uhhh...(sorry ran out of words) as you other two!! The concept of this one is REALLY AWESOME!!! i mean i have no words to describe your excellency...i mean ur such a great writer...thats all there is to it!!! great job sonali im so proud of you!!!👏

lol...."are u like checking me out?" was SOOOO FUNNY!!! LMAO!!!!!!😆
^got that from dhoom 2 rite?? lolz.....*sigh* im such a mind reader...lolz😆😆😆

I can already tell that this story is gonna be FANTASTIC!!!!! cant wait to read on!! keep up the great work hun!!!

luv,
Garima😊
Edited by srklover93 - 16 years ago
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OMG SONALI!!! ANOTHER FF??!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!! following the same footsteps as me lolz.....aakhir dost kiski ho??...*pops up collars* LMAO!!!

yes yes garima another ff!!!!😆 lolz your comments bring a HUGE smile to my face!😃😃😃 omg i just remebered a song...here's a small song for our friendship:
yeh dosti tere dum se hai
yeh dosti tere dum se hai
tu zindagi kasam se hai
saari khushi tere dum se hai -
tu zindagi
yeh dosti tere dum se hai
yeh dosti tere dum se hai


No but seriously congrats on ur THIRD FF!!! WOOHOO!!!!
aw thanku!!!! a big hug to you!🤗

And this one is just as amazing and wonderful and fantastic and great and...uhhh...(sorry ran out of words) as you other two!! The concept of this one is REALLY AWESOME!!! i mean i have no words to describe your excellency...i mean ur such a great writer...thats all there is to it!!! great job sonali im so proud of you!!!👏
*blushing* aw thanks garima!!! your comment really made me speechless! lolz your just sooooooo sweet!!!!! a big hug to you again🤗🤗 aw i feel sooo special now! since i've got garima's blessings!!!😆😆😳 lolz garima! dont praise me so much right now! abhi picture bakhi hai meri dost!😆


lol...."are u like checking me out?" was SOOOO FUNNY!!! LMAO!!!!!!😆
^got that from dhoom 2 rite?? lolz.....*sigh* im such a mind reader...lolz😆😆😆
lolz one of of my fav dialogues!!!! i can just imagine heer saying that to prem! no wait! actually i cant...she's too sweet to be saying that...just like me and u!

I can already tell that this story is gonna be FANTASTIC!!!!! cant wait to read on!! keep up the great work hun!!!
garima! aur ktina mujhe sharmo gi!😆😳 im sooo lucky to be friends with you!😳🤗

luv,
Garima😊

Edited by sonali09 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey!
I swear i read the prologue i guess i forgot to comment....soz!
Loved the prologue!
"Are you checking me out?"....loved that line!
Can't wait till you update the first part!
xXx
Sunayna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey !!! Awesome prologue !!!!!!!!!👏
Will be waiting for part 1!!!!!!!!!😊

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