FF: Dosti [Part 19 pg. 83] [Aug 6th]

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Ravjot

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hello Hello Hello.

I've decided to write a FF mostly cuz Ariba told me to and Shabo made me😆 Hope you like it and tell me what you think😊

Part 1

Why couldn't I have lunch with my friends? It was the beginning of my final year at high school and I had wanted to spend as much time as I could with my friends before going off to university next year in the fall. Was that too much to ask? And why can't mom ever pick me up on time? Since I didn't want to sit in the cafeteria like a loser I chose to go home for lunch.

"Heer slow down!"I turned to see my friend Nida calling me.

"Hey Nida what's up? You have this lunch?" I asked. I hadn't seen her since last year in art class. That class was fun. We barely got any work done and the teacher loved us.

" Yeah I have lunch right now. What about you? Are you going home for lunch?"

"I go home for lunch cuz I couldn't find anyone but that's going to change" I told her. Beats being picked up late everyday and being bored at home. I noticed a girl beside Nida. "Aren't you going to introduce me to your friend?"

"Oh yeah. Sorry this is " Before Nida could answer a guy yelled out "DIDI!"

I turned to face a guy coming towards us. He was fairly tall and had chocolate brown eyes.

"There you are. I was waiting for you guys." He said

"Hey Prem. Heer this is Prem and his sister Piya" said Nida, introducing the boy and the girl who was with her.

"Hey. Nice to meet you guys. I gotta go now. My mom's probably waiting outside. Bye"

Shoot I'm going to be late. "Mom I'm going to be late. Hurry up!" Apart from never picking me up on time, she could never drop me off on time either.

"Coming! Hold on. You should've woken me up earlier" trying to put the blame on me.

When I reached school the national anthem already started playing. Shoot now I'd have to give a quarter. The school had this rule that if you're late you have to pay 25 cents. I turned to see Nida's friend from yesterday.

"Hey. Prem right?" I asked.

"Yeah. You're Nida's friend right? Sorry I'm bad with names." he replied as we started going towards the teacher to give her money.

"It's Heer. So you're late too? Where's your sister?"

"Yeah I over slept. Didi tried waking me up but she left without me" he said as he gave his quarter to the teacher "see you at lunch? Or are you going home again?" I guess Nida told them I had the same lunch when I left.

"Yeah sure." And I walked of to class. He seemed like a nice guy. Even though it was the second time I saw him and first time I said anything, I was pretty good at judging people. There was something about him that I couldn't explain. Oh well. It would have to wait. Right now I had to hurry to math.

Well here's the first part. Lemme know if you guys like it or not and if I should continue😊

Oh and before I forget I would like to thank Shabo for the idea. *gives Shabo and Iced cap* That's your little treat. I just thought of it cuz we were talking about Timmies😆

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[Index]

Part 2 pg.3

Part 3 pg.5

Part 4 pg.7

Part 5 pg.9

Part 6 pg.12

Part 7 pg.16

Part 8 pg.20

Part 9 pg.23

Part 10 pg.27

Part 11 pg.31

Part 12 pg.38

Part 13 pg.44

Part 14 pg.48

Part 15 pg.52

Part 16 pg.54

Part 17 pg.67

Part 18 pg.78
Part 19 pg. 83

Edited by -Ravjot- - 16 years ago

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Batameez.

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Posted: 16 years ago

wow ....sounds intresting ..aww shaboo ..made u to do that .....wow shaboo ....👏forward to see ..continuation 😳😳i mean to say parts😳

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-Garima-

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Posted: 16 years ago

heyy!! great start...really liked it!! sounds interesting...plz continue soon!!!

Garima

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Kiran

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Posted: 16 years ago

Good job shabzz! Makin Ravzz start a fic. (Get it, get it, get it!! Shabzz and Ravzz, i'm so clever. )

Anywayss.. Godo thing you started, cuz now I can comment on your fic. I think your the only one who's writing a fic from Heer's point of view, most FF's are 3rd person. And I like how it is too.

Eww, they have a rule in their college that they have to pay 25 cents if there late? Aah.. man I would be broke by the end of the year if I went there. I liked Prem-Heer intercations. The part was awesomee! Contintue soon!

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Meera

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Posted: 16 years ago

Ravs....you started a PH FF??? I'll reserve this, and then comment after! 😃

*edit*

Commented on page 2!😃

Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago

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Ravjot

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Lavarnia
good idea plzzz continue👏

Thank you. I shall😊 maybe next week when my exams are done

Originally posted by: srklover93
heyy!! great start...really liked it!! sounds interesting...plz continue soon!!!

Garima

Thanks Garima😊

Originally posted by: pisces26
great start plz up date soon

Thank you I will😊

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Ravjot

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kimmu
Good job shabzz! Makin Ravzz start a fic. (Get it, get it, get it!! Shabzz and Ravzz, i'm so clever. ) LOL. Yes you are.

Anywayss.. Godo thing you started, cuz now I can comment on your fic. I think your the only one who's writing a fic from Heer's point of view, most FF's are 3rd person. And I like how it is too. Aww thank you. Yah it's goin to be in her point of view cuz well...I dunno that's how I feel like writing😆 Yay I'm different😃😆 I just woke up so I am a bit hyper at the moment.

Eww, they have a rule in their college that they have to pay 25 cents if there late? Aah.. man I would be broke by the end of the year if I went there. Yes they do unfortunately. But the money goes to charity. Maybe I should mention it so that it doesn't sound that bad....And they're in high school😆I liked Prem-Heer intercations. The part was awesomee! Contintue soon! Thank you! I shall. Most likely I'll forget about this but I'm sure one of you guys will remind me. I had actually written this part like weeks ago but forgot to post it😆

@ Meera: yes I did. I shall wait to read your comment😊

Edited by ravioli_11 - 16 years ago

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poonam

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Posted: 16 years ago

interesting
awesum part 1
do cont soon...

good luck for ur exams

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Sunayna

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey!

Love your FF!

It was an awesome start!

Looking forward to reading more!

xXx

Sunayna

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Kiran

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: ravioli_11
Good job shabzz! Makin Ravzz start a fic. (Get it, get it, get it!! Shabzz and Ravzz, i'm so clever. ) LOL. Yes you are. Good you admitted it, now get Shabz and Rinki to admit it too... They think i'm a fox. *crosses arms and pouts* But I think that means I'm clever... 😆

Anywayss.. Godo thing you started, cuz now I can comment on your fic. I think your the only one who's writing a fic from Heer's point of view, most FF's are 3rd person. And I like how it is too. Aww thank you. Yah it's goin to be in her point of view cuz well...I dunno that's how I feel like writing😆 Yay I'm different😃😆 I just woke up so I am a bit hyper at the moment. Ooh, thats nice then. I think thats a good thing though, never got to read a FF with a POV. The only other one i've read is rinki's where she switched POV's, which was nice too. Lolz, don't worry, happens with me all the time. 😆

Eww, they have a rule in their college that they have to pay 25 cents if there late? Aah.. man I would be broke by the end of the year if I went there. Yes they do unfortunately. But the money goes to charity. Maybe I should mention it so that it doesn't sound that bad....And they're in high school😆 I'm pretty sure they use it for there funds or something. Whatever that goes to "charity" in out school is always actually for their funds. Schools in USA are broke these days. OMG! Its highschool! They can do that? SOO glad I'm not in that school. I liked Prem-Heer intercations. The part was awesomee! Contintue soon! Thank you! I shall. Most likely I'll forget about this but I'm sure one of you guys will remind me. I had actually written this part like weeks ago but forgot to post it😆 I know I'll be getting at you for continueing. But Shabz will most probably do it more often. 😛😆

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