FF When love finds a way PREM RETURNs UpDt..Pg44.. - Page 14

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey...both parts are nice... prem reached mumbai.... great...
plz update soon....😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx d@niy@ .................Glad u enjoyed this one too..................Haan atlast ladka Mumbai pahonch hii gaya😊.................Next part agle weekend.................kyunkii abb kal se toh Prem hai naa entertain karne ke lye................seriously yaar it feels soooooooooooooooo gr88888888888888888 to say this after such a longgggggggggggg time😳..................Prem is back!👏.....................Anyways till then take care...............😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
omg great update hpe the meet will hapn sooon cant wait do continue plzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey
super part
yay prem reached mumbai
can't wait till premeer met
cliffhanger
oh u r right abt the weekend sach pata hi nahin chala
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome update... seriously hope premeer meet soon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx zaibun................glad u liked this part too dear.................I'll be updating the next part this weekend.................Hope u enjoy the story line coming up................Thanx once again................. 😊
Edited by leothebest9 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx pooji.................Glad u enjoyed this part too.............haan they will be meeting soon................Hope u like the coming track of the story too..................I'm soooooooooooooo glad KDMHMD is till fridays abb.....................anyways thanx once again......................😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx sunehari.................glad u r enjoying the FF...............and a very warm welcome to u dear................keep sending in ur valuable comments and suggestions.................thanx once again.................😊
Edited by leothebest9 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx rag-ran4ever .................Glad u r enjooying the whole track..................yaa they both will be meeting soon................face to face...............Hope u like that sequence too................anyways thanx once again dear.....................😊
Edited by leothebest9 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Alright guys................I know its not weekend yet...............lekin aaj kaa episode was kind of boring.................except ofcourse when Prem scolds that rude Veera telling him-- Rishton kii ehmiyatt samjho Veera...................Awsomeeeeeeeeee and well said.....................Anyways here's the next part..................Hope u all will enjoy thisone too....................

Its evening……………..Heer is back……………she finds Veera sitting alone…………..she goes upto him and says sitting besides her---- Kaisi ho Veera?...............

Veera smiles replying------Theek hoon bhabhi………….aap kasi hain?................

Heer replies------Theek…………..yeh baaki sab kahaan hain?...............

Veera fumbles at first kyunkii everyone had warned her not to utter a single word……………she says-- Vo Bhabhi……………actually………….Preet bhaiya baujii aur Kiran jeeju ke saath site dekhne gaye hain…………..Harman bhai pata nahiin kahaan hain……………Ash, Meher bhabhi aur KD……………bachcha party ko lekar park gayi hain……………..aur mera baahar jaana toh aajkal band kiya hua hai………….u know naa…………..bas abb Nihaal aate honge………….phir main bhi chaloongii…………..

Heer smiles embracing her face----- Tujhe khush dekhkar bahot achcha lagta hai Veera…………..aur abb yeh chotu bhii aa jaayega………..phir humaari Veera kii zimedaariyaa aur bhi badh jaayengii…………….(Veera smiles)…………….Chal main upar jaati hoon aaj shaam ko flight hai………….packing bhi karni hai………..kal miloongi tujhse theek hai?...................

Veera nods while Heer leaves from there……………..

Its late in the evening…………..Heer has reached Mumbai…………..she gets into a car waiting for her to get her to the hotel…………….

There she reaches and also does another car……………the two cars reach the netrance at the same time……………its Prem in the other one………….the windows of the car r tinted…………the driver gets down and is having an argument with the other driver…………..

Heer intervenes……………while Prem who was in the car talking to somone says--- I don't know…………yeh driver kya kar raha hai…………..anyways I'm here in Mumbai for a day………………tomorrow I'll be leaving for Ludhiana…………..yaa………….Ok…………I'll ses u there………………

He keeps down the phone…………….just when he is about to get down…………..tthe driver is back and he scolds him-- Kya tum bhi……………itni akkal nahiin hai……………..if that car wanted to go first…………..jaane dete………….idiot!.................Abb chalo main late ho raha hoon……………….

The car enters as Heer watches it go in…………..trying to see who it was………….the cool breeze blows across her face……………….as the car moves in………….she thinks to herself-- - Yeh kya ho raha hai?......................Aisa…………aisa kyun lagaa…………..jaise…………..nahiin………….yeh nahiin ho saktaa…………yeho ho hii nahiin saktaa…………….

With that she asks the driver to go in………………

There Prem is in his room……………He is talking to someone-- Ya………….alright…………I'll be there in an hour…………then we can sit and talk…………alright then…………have a nice day……………

He keeps the phone down……………taking one last lookk at himself in the mirror…………..moving his hand through his hair……………he moves out of his room………………..

Its scene inside the hotel……………….Heer is dressed in a green coloured salwaar kameez…………….she walks down the staircase at one side of the hotel……………There from the ther side…………….Prem is walking down the staircase talking on his cellphone…………..

In the background plays the song Hum hain iss pal yahaan………………….

The two reach the lobby at the same time…………….just when Heer loses her balance……………she is about to fall……………..

Prem shouts out from the other end-- Hey look out!..................

Kaisa laga?

Jaldi batao..................

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