Yeh Wada Raha FF-PART 7:PG.12-NEW UPDATE!!-3/15/09 - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey palchin that was an awesome update....loved the way premeer confessed their love to each other...so only 7 days left for their wedding??? cant wait...post soon...
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hi palchin,ur ff is very cute and loving.add me to ur pm list.waiting for upcoming cute and romantic scenes.continue soon

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PART 6

After about 10-15 minutes, they both are ready and are heading towards Prem's car. Heer held onto the "shaadi ka card" that Lalit and Balraj had made when Prem-Heer were little.

Heer wore this:

Lovely beige kameez with sequins and cream resham embroidered round motifs. The daman is made gorgeous with sequins and resham embroidered floral and paisley design. Bottom in dark peach with the lower edge featuring sequins and beige resham embroidered round motifs. Comes with matching shaded chiffon dupatta in beige and dark peach with lace & gota pati along the border. Fabric used is crepe. The neckline and sleeves border does not feature lace as shown in the image. The maximum length of the kameez would be 42 inches while the maximum bust size would be 42 inches. Comes with short sleeves. The bottom could be stitched into a salwar. Comes with +4 garment fit.Due to various types of lightings & flash used while photo shoot the color shade of the product may vary. The brightest shade seen is the closest color of the fabric.

Prem wore this:

http://www.express.com/catalog/product.jsp?productId=8717&parentCategoryId=1&categoryId=49&subCategoryId=52

They both sit into the car and drive off. The car ride had been quiet but there was love flying in the air. Prem kept taking glances of Heer. And Heer kept taking glances of Prem. They were just too excited to know that they were going to be married in just 7 days. Prem finally decided to break the silence.

P: (politely asks) Tum khush toh ho naa....

H: (looks at him and then smiles) Haa.....Kyu?...

P: (gives a slight laugh) Nahi bas yuhi.....jab Kul di ki shaadi hui thi tab woh bahot ghabhra gayi thi....Bahot royi thi woh....(looks at her)....

H: Ronaa toh aayega hi naa.....itne acche bhai se joh door jaa rahi thi.....

P: (sarcastically asks) Tum bhi kya utnaa hi roogi.....

H: (smiles) Shayad......

P: (SOOOOOO Cutely) Mai tumhe roone ka moka hi nahi dunga......aur shaadi se ghabhra naa mat.....mai jaanta hu ke tumhe bahot ajeeb lagta hoga.....tum apna sab kuch chod kar mere saath rahogi.....isska matlab yeh nahi ke mai tumhe bhand kar rakhunga.....kabhi bhi tum apne aap ko akela mat mehsoos kar naa....

Saying this he stopped the car in front of the mandir. Heer was just blown off from his kindness. Her love for him was increasing second by second. They both got out of the car and walked up the stair of the mandir together. It was very windy and it already seemed as if was turning dark. The sun was setting and the dark clouds were building up in the sky. As the both walked into the huge stone structure, they both covered their heads. Heer covered it with her dupatta and Prem covered it with a white cloth. They both looked around the place. It was so beautiful, so peaceful. The mandir had a huge stone structure around it (just like in the show). While walking, and admiring the beauty, Heer somehow trips over a huge piece of stone. She is about to fall when Prem instantly saves her from falling. He held on tightly around her shoulder and waist. He had a worried expression on his face as he could never see her in pain. Heer had her eyes closed and she had her hand placed on her ankle. She had scraped her ankle and she knew that it was bleeding and causing her a lot of pain. But she didn't want to see Prem get worried so she put a fake "i am fine" expression on her face.

P: (still holding onto her-worried) Tum theek ho naa....

H: (gives him a fake smile-but still in pain) Haa...mai...mai theek hu....

P: (looks at her eyes and knows that she is lying) Aggar jhoot bolna nahi aata toh kyu bolti ho......

Saying this he picks her up in his arms. Heer was just too confused and the pain was killing her). He takes her and makes her sit on a near by bench. He bends down and looks at her innocent face. He knew that she had gotten hurt but he also knew that she would never tell him that she was in pain. Heer looks at his concerned face and smiles at him. Prem smiles at her and then looks at her right foot. He slowly touched her ankle and realized that it was bleeding. He looks at her with a worried expression. Her ankle was bleeding.

P: (realllllllly worried) Kitna khoon behraha hai.....abhi hum hospital jaate hai....

He was about to get up when Heer stopped him.

H: Mai theek hu....kyu inti chinta kar rahe ho.....maamuli si chot hai....theek ho jayegi....

Suddenly they see lighting in the sky.

H: Hum jaaldi se yeh darshna karke jaate hai....baarish hone wali hai.....

P: Lekin is haalat me.....

H: Mai theek hu....Chalo....

P: Kitni ziddi ho tum......

She got up with Prem still holding onto her. His hands around her waist and the other hand holding onto her hand. They both stood in front of Shiv ji's murti and prayed. They both closed their eyes and smiled.

P: (praying: Aap ne mere liya bahot kuch liye hai.....Meri zindagi ki sabse badi khushi di hai...Heer ke roop me.....Jaise mai chaata tha waisi hi hai.....Aab mai sirf yeh hi chaata hu ke woh hameesha khush rahe.....uski ha iccha puri karna......duniya ki saari khushiyaa usse deena aur usske saare gham mujhe deena......mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye.....)

H: (praying: Har bar mai aap se kuch naa kuch maangti hu....kabhi Meher ke liye, kabhi maa-papaji ke liye....ya phir kabhi apne liye......lekin aab lagta hai ke mai zindagi bhar sirf ek hi insaan ki khushi maanti rahungi.....Aap Prem ko woh saari khushiyaa deena jiska woh hakdar hai......Mere hisse ki khushiyaa bhi usse dee deena.....Usse hameesha mere paas rakhna, mere saath rakhna......)

They both slowly open their eyes. Their face gets hit slowly by the fierce wind which was blowing. The atmosphere was getting worse. It was turning pitch dark all around with only the moonlight shining brightly. Prem looked at Heer and she looked at him. He was still holding onto her hand to give her support to stand. Heer could feel the warnth that his hands gave off. The touch of his skin on her skin made feel complete. But she knew that she had to stay in her limit. She pushed those thoughts away and just admired their moment up close. This whole time Prem had been looking at her. Her beauty was just blwoing him away and he could feel this tinkling sensation. He held onto her hand softly and made sure she wasn't feeling much pain.

Prem then noticed his watch. It was already 7:00.

P: Aab chale....bahot dair ho chuki hai......

H: Haa chalo.....shayad tooan bhi aane wala hai....

They both turned and headed towards their war. They were only 2-3 meters away when a thounder striked and a bomb-like sound scared Heer. She instantly clung into Prem's arms. The sound scared her so much. She had her eyes closed and her arms tighty wrapped around his neck. Prem, a little suprised by her sudden action, conforted her. He wrapped his hands around her waist and hugged her back equally tight. His face was resting on her shoulder. Both of them had their eyes closed. He softly placed a soft kiss on her ear which was still cover by the dupatta she had around her head. Heer felt his kiss and felt as if she melted completely in his love. He was making her go crazy. Prem then placed another soft kiss on the side of her nack which was now exposed because her dupatta that was wrapped around her head and fallen off. He kiss her a third time. This time the kiss was soft but full of passion. He slowly and gently rubbed his lips on her neck. Heer didn't know how to respond. She stood there like a statue feeling the best sensation she had ever felt.

However, the moment didn't last for long. Prem's phone suddenly started ring. Prem and Heer both come to their senses. Heer slowly took her arms around his neck away while Prem did the same. He looked at her and saw how she had her eyes lowered and her hair being blown off her face revealing her beauty. He didn't know what happened to him. What made him want to touch her, hug her, even kiss her. But he liked the feeling of relaxation and peace he felt when she was close to him. Heer was thinking the same thing. She felt as if he was attracting her very second. They both knew that their love for each other was increasing and now there was no way back. Prem took out his cell phone which was ringing in the pocket of his white kurta. He looked at it and saw his mom's name. He pressed "TALK."

P: (avoids looking at Heer as he didn't know what to say-smiles and talks) Maa....

G: Prem.....beta tum dono kaha ho?.....

P: Hum abhi nikal hi rahe the.....(looks at Heer and saw her looking at him-he smiled and she smiled back to him.)

G: Jaldi aa jaa beta.....abhi abhi news me dekha ke bahot bada toofan aane wala hai.....

P: Hum abhi atte hai....

G: Heer theek hai na......

P: (looks at her and then at her sprained foot) Maa woh usse chot-

Heer knew that he was taling about her so she nodded a "NO" expression telling him not to tell his mom about her ankle.

G: (sounding worried) Kya hua usse.....Chot lagi hai kya.....

P: (hesitating) Nahi maa....woh woh..theek hai....

G: Usse baat toh kara....

Prem hands the phone to Heer. Heer takes it smiling back at him.

G: Heer...

H: Ji maa....

G: Beta darshan kar diye naa....

H: Haa....

G: Accha kiya....aur sun....Prem ko bol ke woh tujhe jaldi se ghar le aaye.....bahot zaroori baat karni hai....

H: Theek hai maa.....

They both hang up. Prem and Heer sit in their car and drive off to go home. When they reach home, they find the Maan Niwas being decorated with lights and drapery from the outside. That too at 8:15 at night. Prem parked his car in the rear side of the drive way. They both got out of the car wondering why the house was being decprated and why there were rumbles of people coming in and out of the house. They both look at each other and then walk inside. Prem and Heer both walk into house and just freeze when they see the view inside. Everything looked so beautiful, so elegent, so sparkling. But why was the house decorated this way. They both notice Preet and Veera sitting on the sofa, calling people as they go down the list. Harman was helping Gayatri with the flower decoration. Ash and Meher were busy decorating the mandir. Balraj and Lalit were giving instructions to everyone. Teji was making some type of list on the dinning table. The only thing going through Prem and Heer's mind was " What is going on?".....

Preet notices Prem and Heer standing there all confused, staring at everything. He runs up to them and hugs both of them. They pulls out from the hug and gives them his cutest smile ever.

P: (smiling at his lil bro) Yeh saab kya hai......

Pt: (grinning) Meri bhabhi ko officially meri bhabhi banane ke liye....

H: (confused) Matlab....?

Pt: Kal aap dono ki sagai hai.......

Prem and Heer just freeze.

P: (in his mind) I am dreaming.....no, I can't be…..I want this to be true…..But is it?

Preet spanned his fingers in front of him.

Pt: Kaisa laga surprise?....

P: (in his mind) This is really happening.....Wow.....

Prem smiled at his brother and they both hugged each other. Heer couldn't understand the feeling that she was going through. Her face was glowing with happiness but she didn't know how to react. She looked at Prem and she founf him looking at her with a smile. He gave her an assuring look that told her that he was very happy. And this made her happy. The brother pull of from their hug. Everyone comes and gathers around them to congratulate them on their new journey in life. After everyone congratulated them, they went back to the preparations. Prem and Heer were restricted from helping and so they were sent to their rooms. Gayatri told Heer that there is is a dress designer in her room and that she can pick out any dress she wants for her engagement. She also tell Prem that his suit designer is in his room and that he can pick out whatever he wants to wear for the engagement. Preet goes with Prem to decide the clothing and Meher with Heer. After about an hour of trying on dresses and picking out their favorites, Prem and Heer finally decide on one. Everyone meets up at 9:00 for dinner. Since they were busy all day, Balraj had ordered dinner from a famous restaurant. They all ate their dinner while chatting about what they were going to do at the engagement and what they were going to wear. It was as if they were counting down each second for the time to come. But Prem and Heer didn't know what feeling was going through them. A mixed feeling of nervousness, excitment, enjoyment, and so much eagerness. They didn't even touch the food that was served to them in their plate. They had no desire to eat or drink anything. All they wanted was to be with eachother alone for sometime so they could share their feelings with each other. Preet and Meher noticed that Prem (sitting on one end of the dinning table) and Heer (sitting on the orther end) were no eating anything. They were just looking around at everyone smiling. Preet got up and decided to feed his bhabhi the same way she feed him the other day. He bent down to her right side. She smiled at him and gave him a suprised expression. Preet took a little piece of the golden colored jalebis that were resting in her plate and placed it near her mouth. Heer smiles at him.

Pt: (whispers to her) Aap please kuch kha lijiye verna mera bhai bhi kuch nahi khayega.....

Heer smiles at him and eats the piece. She then takes another piece and feeds it to him.

Pt: Aab aap yeh sab kha lijiye.....(saying this he heads back to his seat and continues his chatting with Kulraj. Meher does the same thing that Preet did to Heer. She feeds Prem and tells him to finish his dinner. Prem pulls her soft cheeks and feeds her a little ladoo. She was so cute. He had already bonded with her and he loved her as much as he loved Veera. They all finish the dinner and then decide to go to sleep as they had to do many preparations the next day. But Prem had an urge to meet Heer, alone. He wanted to ask her about how she felt. Was she nervous? Did she think that she was ready to live with him the rest of her life? But he had no clue on how to meet her. At around 11:00, everyone was in their room peacefully sleeping. But Prem and Heer were far away from being sleepy. They were both looking at the moon from their window. Heer takes her dark blue shawl and heads to go to terrace. She reaches the terrace and walks over to middle. The wind was blowing peacefully making her hair blow softly and her dupatta trailed behind her. She looked up to the glowing moon that brought a broad smile to his face. She looked at the moon and she only saw Prem's face in it. She kept looking at it and enjoyed the moment to herself.

Prem felt suffocated in her room. He needed some fresh air so he decided to go to the terrace where the open place would give him a relaxing feeling. He slowly went up to the terrace making sure he woke up no one. He slowly opened the door leading to the terrace and walked out into the open. The sudden swift of cold air hits his face gently, making his hair blow. This refreshing feeling brought a smile on his face. He looked around the terrace and his sight got glued to one spot. There she was. Standing there under the moonlight. Her back was towards him. He had waited all day to talk to her, to ask her, to just be alone with her. And finally, he got the time to do so. He slowly approached her, barely making any noise. He had his eyes staring at her. He knew that she was looking beautiful even without looking at her. He had a sudden urge inside him that made him want to be close to her, want to touch her.

Heer had a sudden feeling in her heart which she instantly knew was for Prem. She felt as if he was near her, close to her. She closed her eyes and smiled to herself thinking that she was going crazy over him, feeling his presence everywhere. The cool freeze hit them both once again. This time, a little harder making Heer's dupatta slide smoothly over her shoulder and behind her. Heer instantly opened her eyes to catch her dupatta. She turned around to get it but suddenly froze.

Kaisa Laga......Jaldi Bataooooooooooooo!!!!!
Palchin
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74
that was tooooo goooood super
fantastic update
preet feed heer and meher feed prem scene
soooo sweeet
loved it every bit of the update
thanks for pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
hey pachin...that was such a sweet update loved the mandir scene... loved how you are showing the building love between them...cant wait to read abt the engagement part
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76

hey! palchin updt was shooooooooooooooo shweet😛.i luvvvvvvvvvvvved all the scenes.can't wait for terrace scene plzzzzzzzzz continue nxt pt soon

-sugi

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
that was awesome. 👏 they got engaged....so happy. continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg great update luved it do continue soon cant w8 to read more
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Posted: 16 years ago
#79
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOV U!!!!!!!!! :)
quickly update the next part!!!
Pawani <3
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 7

There he was. Her pinkish colored dupatta had covered his face but that was not going to stop her from knowing who it was. Yes, it was her Prem who was standing in front of her. But wait, what the heck was he doing here, so late at night. Was he like stocking her everywhere. She backed off her thoughs. Prem wouldn't do that. She knew him too well that she couldn't even doubt him. But why was he here?

All they could here was the fierce sound of the wind blowing. Prem approached his right hand towards the dupatta that had been covering his face. He removed it and revealed his face to Heer. He slowly opened his eyes and saw HIS Heer in front of him. He felt as if she just knocked him out by her looks. She looked so beautiful under the moonlight. What was it that made him want to be close to her. He looked at the dupatta in his hand and then looked at her. She instantly lowered her eyes when I looked at her and wrapped her hands around her arms. She was clutched onto her shawl when was laying on her right shoulder. All he knew was that the cold air was attacking her smooth, soft skin. He approached his steps towards her and he saw her shiver. He smiled to himself.

P: (in his mind) Wow....She nervous.....Par yeh itna gabhra kyu rahi hai.....(then the thought suddenly hit him) ....Sh*t.....What can I expect.....Main raat ke ek baje isse akele yaha milunga toh aisa hi soochegi naa....I hope yeh kuch galat naa sooche....

Heer looked at him and then at her dupatta in his hand. Prem took the dupatta and handed it to her. She looked at him and slightly smiled while taking the dupatta. I saw that she was feeling a little uncomfortable so I tried to lighten the atmosphere.

P: Woh.....mujhe nahi pata tha ke tum yaha thi....Mai toh sirf yuhi aaya tha....tum galat mat samaj naa....mai sirf-

Before he could finish, he saw her give out a little laugh.

H: (smiling) Tum toh aisa daar raho ho jaise maine tumhe chori karte huye dekh kiye hai.....(stopped laughing and just smiled) Tum chinta mat karo...mai aisa waisa kuch nahi soch rahi thi....

P: (relieved that she wasn't doubting him) Yeh sab mazak tha....

H: (answers him while putting her dupatta around her neck) Haa....tum bhi naa....waise tum yaha kya kar rahe ho....

P: ( smiles and stands next to her) Kuch nahi....neend nahi aa rahi thi issiliye yaha aaya.....

They both look at the beautiful moon. Prem then looks at her. He knew that the moon was beautiful, but he also knew that the girl he was going to married to was the most beautiful of all.

P: (husky tone) Tum khush toh ho naa.....?

H: (looks at him-a little suprised) Haa...kyu?.....

P: (smiles) Nahi yuhi.....saab kuch inti jaldi ho raha hai......soch ne ka bhi waqt nahi milla tumhe....Kya tum tayaar ho mere saath apni zindagi bitane ke liye....

H: (smiles back at him) Koi paagal hi hogi joh tumse shaadi nahi karna chahegi.....maine toh ussi din tumhe pasand kar liye tha jab maa ne mujhe tumhare baare me kaha tha.....(comes closer to him) Mai haar zindagi mai tumhari thi, hoon, aur hamesha rahungi.....

P: (suprised but sooooooo happy to hear this) (he whispers to her) Itna vishwaas....tum kaise kar sakti ho.....sirf teen din me....

H: (whispers back) Pehli nazar me hi pasand kar liya tha....joh insaan khud se phele apno ke baare sooche woh galat kaise ho sakta hai.....par tum toh khush ho naa.....

Heer didn't know if he liked her as much as she liked him. But she knew that she had made a place in his heart. But was it just a friendly place or LOVE.

P: (he looks at her suspiciously and decides to fool around with her) (makes a "I am sad" type expression) Mai khush kaise ho sakta hu....(looks away from her) Kitni koshish ki ke tum mujhe na pasand karo lekin.....

Heer was shocked to hear this. What did he mean?

H: (in her mind) Aab yeh kya....hey bhagwan, yeh bol kya raha hai.....mai isse na pasand karu....kaise.....mai toh isse itna pyaar karne lagi hu ke pasand na pasand ki gunjayish hi nahi hai......kya yeh mujhse shaadi nahi karna chata.....par kyu....issine toh kaha tha ke yeh mujhe pyaar karne laga hai.....

P: (continues) Maine soocha tha ke tum muj jaise seedhe saadhe insaan ko pasand nahi karogi.....issiliye maine usse din tumhe yeh kaha ke mai tumhe chane laga tha....woh natak bhi kamiyab nahi hua.....

Heer walks over to him and faces him.

H: (angry) Natak......! Woh sab jhoot tha.....tum mujhse shaadi-

P: (looks at her with an angry expression) NAHI KARNA CHATA.....

Heer is taken aback by this.She feels her heart almost stop.

P: Aab tum bhi iss shaadi se khush ho.....matlab mujhe yeh shaadi karni padegi verna saab yehi samjhe ge ki mai galat ho....

H: (on the verge of crying-barely able to speak) Koi kuch nahi kahega...ag..aaggar tum...shaadi nahi karna chate toh mai maa se keh dungi ke tum...tum mujhe pasand nahi ho.....(lowers her eyes as they start to well up) tumhe koi galat nahi samjhe ga....

Prem looks at her feeling guilty for doing this to her. He didn't know that this would hurt her so much. He had never met a girl that had fallen so deeply in love with someone, especially for a simple guy like him. He decides to stop this natak.

P: (starts laughing).

Heer looks at him in shock. And by just looing at him, she knew that he was joking around with her.

P: Hisaab barabar.....

H: Kya?

P: (cutely says) Tumne mujhe ullu banaya.....aur maine tumhe....

H: (S H O C K E D) Tum natak kar rahe the.....

P: Aur nahi toh kya.....

Heer gets angy at him and throws her shawl at him. He continues to laugh and she decides to leave as she didn't want him to see her tears. She turns to leave but couldn't move forward as he held onto her hand. She stayed in the same position without moving or saying anything. Prem slowly pulls her towards him and wraps his other hand around her slender waist. She had her eyes lowered but he knew that he had brought tears in them. She slowly looks into his eyes and sees something special in them for her. Prem felt as if a sword had been put through his heart.

P: (very worried and feeling guilty) Tum....Tum roo kyu rahi ho?....

H: Aisa mazak koi karta hai kya.....mujhe laga ke tum mujhse pyaar hi nahi-

P: (cuts her off) Main tumse saccha pyar karta ho.....mujhe maaf kardo is mazak ke liye.....lekin mai nahi jaanta tha tumhe itna bura lagega.......

Heer smiles softly. A tear rolls down her eye and Prem slowly approaches his right hand towards her cheek. He gently wipes her tears away with his finger. Heer closes her eyes instantly at his touch. He held onto her precious tear as to never let it go. He then moved forward and softly kissed the spot where the tear had been. This soft kiss made her melt instantly. He wrapped one of his arms around her delicate waist and the other rested on her soft cheek. Heer moved her right hand and rested it on his cheek while the other rested on his strong shoulder. The nervousness on her face disappeared and a smile appeared on her face. Prem again kissed her but this time he kissed her gentle eyes. He traced his lips up to her forehead and placed another kiss. All these actions were making Heer feel the love she had always strived for. She didn't want him to leave her. Prem loved her soft skin which made him want to touch her even more. A blow of wind make Heer dupatta fly over their face. This sudden blow made Prem realize what he had been doing. He opened his eyes and slowly took himself away from her. Heer opened her eyes sensing no contact. She looked into those gazing eyes which were clearly showing guilt. She lowers her eyes remembering the way he was kissing her.

P: (feeling awkward and somehow guilty) (he softly whispers) Sorry......

Heer looks at him and gives him an assuring smile. He smiles back.

H: (whispers to him) Chalo yaha se....bahot raat ho chuki hai......tum so jao......

Prem smiles at her and the both head inside after taking one last glance at the moon.

P: (before he heads towards his room) (whispers to her) Good Night.......

H: (whispers back) Good Night......

They both reach their rooms and instanly fall asleep.

NEXT MORNING

At around 7:15, Heer hears her alarm clock. She wakes up with a smile and heads to take a shower. After about 20 minutes, she comes out of the bathroom wearing a

white bathrobe. She was drying her long, sikly hair with her towel. While doing so, she walks over to her closet to pick out something to wear. She pick out a simple but cute salwar suit and wears it.

This is the salwar she wears:

Prem wore this:

http://www.express.com/catalog/product.jsp?productId=17383&parentCategoryId=1&categoryId=49&subCategoryId=52

After getting dresses, she goes to her dresser and puts on some kaajal. She puts on her favorite perfume. She combed her hair quickly and headed downstairs. As she walked down the stairs, she spotted EVERYONE busy doing something or another. It seemed that everyone was happy doing what they were assigned. She spotted her mom making fresh tea in the kitchen. She saw Gayatri maa making a beautiful rangoli with Kulraj di in front of the mandir. She saw her dad making fresh ghee wale ladoos and Lalit eating one by one each ladoo. She smiled at them when she saw Balraj yell back at Lalit for eating ladoo even though he had such a high diabetes. Then she spotted Preet hanging red colored drapery everywhere and Meher telling him where to hang the piece. She was really irrating him because Meher was never able to make her mind. She laughed as she saw Preet's pity looking face. She she Harman doing the same thing with Ash ordering him on how to hang the drapery.

She looked around everywhere but she didn't know where he was.

Preet got so irrated by Meher that he just quit doing his job.

Pr: (getting down from the ladder) BAS!!! Aab yeh sab tum hi lagao......kabhi right kabhi left.....ek jaga select nahi kar sakti......

M: (annoyed) Arre mai kya karu.....tum theek se laga hi nahi rahe ho.....aur waise bhi.....yeh tumhare bas ki baat nahi hai.....

Pr: Acchaa....tu yeh tum hi lagao naa....mujhe kyu keh rahi ho....mai toh chala....

He pulls her chubby cheeks and then goes towards his bhabhi.

Heer smiles at him as he approaches her. Preet smiles back and bends down to touch her feet. Bu Heer stops him.

H: Arre mai itni bhi budhi nahi hu....

Pr: Jaanta hu...lekin mera bhai mera bhagwan hai.....toh uss hisaab se aap bhi mere liye bhagwan jaisi hai.....

H: (smiles at him) Bahot pyar karte ho usse.....

Pr: (winks and grins) Baahhhot!!!.....Par aapki iss behen ne toh mera saraa mood hi bigad diya.....

H: Kyu...

Pr: Woh baad me batauga.....abhi mujhe bahot zyada kaam baki hai.......Mai abhi aata hu.....

H: Theek hai.....(she pats him on the cheek and then heads to go towards the mandir.As she came closer to the mandir, she saw the person she had been looing for. There he was with Shubham. Shubham was feeding a small ladoo to her mamu.

Heer couldn' herself from smiling at the cute scene. They looked adorable. Shubham sees Heer and runs to her. Heer bends down and they both give each other a bear hug. Prem turns around to see where the little one was going. He instantly smiled when he saw Heer with Shubham. Heer ran her hands through Shubham's hair and kissed him on his forehead. Prem stood there smiling at her affection. She looked at him and gave him a sweet smile. Suddenly, Prem and Heer heard Kulraj calling Shubham. Hearing his mom, Shubham instantly hid behind his mami and held on tightly to her hand. Heer somewhat comfused cleared her confusion when she saw Kulraj coming towards her holding a glass of milk.

K: (smiling) Arre Heer.....tu aa gayi.....(traces her hand on her cheek).....Jaa ja ke nashta kar le.....maa ne banaya hai......

H: (smiling) Haa didi.....

K: (turning to Prem) Kaha hai woh shetan?......Phir pata nahi kaha chala gaya.....Itna tang karta hai naa yeh......

P: (hesitant) Pa...pata nahi di....yahi kahi hoga.....(takes the glass from her) Mujhe di jiye mai usse pila dunga......

K: Theek hai pila denaa......Verna nah woh mera haath se bachega aur naa hi tu.......

Gayatri calls Kulraj.

G: KULRAJ!!!...

K: AAYI MAA.......(to Prem) Pila denaa theek hai.....

Saying this she leaves. Seing her leave, Shubham uncovers himself from Heer dupatta and makes the saddest face ever.

Prem comes closer to him and kneels down.

P: Jaldi se yeh pilo.....

S: I hate milk mamu.....yuck.....mom is crazy....aur aap yeh ganda doodh mujhe kyu pilana chate hai.....

P: Aagar nahi piyuge toh strong kaise banoge.....

S: Ganda hai.....

Prem looks at Heer. She could see it in his eyes that he wanted her help. She took the glass from him and went into the kitchen leaving Prem wondering what she might do. She came back after 2 minutes with a glass full of light brown colored milk. She kneels down to Shubham and hands him the glass.

S: Mujhe accha nahi lagta.....

H: Arre try toh karo.....doodh nahi hai....

S: Toh kya hai.....

H: Pi keh toh dekho.....

Shubham looked at Prem who gave him a smile. Shubham took the glass from Heer, closed his eyes tightly and drank from it. The minute he tasted the drink, a "HAPPY" expression came to his face. It was chocolate milk. The best choco milk he had ever tasted. He gulped down all the milk and handed the empty glass to Heer. The milk had formed a tine line over his upper lip. Prem and Heer both smiled at his cuteness. Heer took her dupatta andgently wiped his mouth making him all clean and tify. Prem just adored the way she was with everyone, especially with Preet and Shubham.

S: Bahot accha tha...

H: Accha theek hai tum jao.....mumma apka intezar kar rahi hai......

S: Ok....(he gives her a cute kiss on her cheek and leaves).

Prem and Heer both watch him go. Then Heer turns and looks at Prem. He looked at her smiled back to her.

" Um.....Tumne naasta kiya....." she asked feeling a little awakard.

" Haan....." he politely answers.

Silence builds up between the two. But the silence is easily broken with Preet entering the mandir. He ran and quickly hid behind his bhabhi.

" Bhabhi....bachao......aaj takluu kuch zyada hi gusse meh hai....." he pleaded to her.

Heer sees Lalit coming in with an angry expression.

" Ruk....abhi batata hu.....aaj mai tujhe mar mar ke teri chutney bana dunga" he said as he approached Preet who was hiding behind Heer. Prem just stood there grinning.

" Bauji....main main isse samjati hu..." Heer told Lalit to calm his anger down.

" Hat jaa beta....yeh nalayak aise kabhi nahi manega" said Lalit glaring at Preet.

" Please bauji jaane dijiye naa......meri khatir" Heer pleaded to him.

Lalit calmed himself instantly after seeing this girl help her devar-to-be. She was just like Prem. No wonder they were both destined to be together.

" Theek hai beta, (he smiles and runs his hands over her head).....Sirf tere liye, (looks at Preet) Maggar phir se koi shetani ki naa....toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga" Said Lalit as he warned Preet.

Lalit leaves saying this.

" Aapse bura aur koi ho bhi nahi sakta" said Preet when the coast was clear.

Prem gently hits his on his shoulder.

"Sorry" Preet said giving Prem a smile.

" Oh....and thank you sooooo much bhabhi.....aapne toh PB ko bhi piche kar diya.....mujhe bachane ke liye".

Heer just smiles at his cuteness. Prem looks at Heer and admires her even more for respecting her relations with everyone and helping Preet the same way he would have helped him.

" Arre mai toh batana hi bhol gaya" said Preet panicing."Bahar ek halwai wala khada hai....(Grabs Heer's hand) Chalo hum khate hai"......With this he started pulling her with him.

" Arre lekin ruko" Heer said stopping. " Mujhe nahi khana....tum tum....Prem ke saath jao....(looks at Prem) Usse mithai bahot pasand hai naa......"

" Yeh bhi theek hai.....(he goes and grabs Prem and literally drags him out) " Jaldi bhaiya verna taklu phir se vapas aayega aur bhashen deena shuru hojayega". Saying this they both leave to eat some freshly made sweets.

Heer finishing praying and then heads out to help others in the preparations for her engagement tonight. Some type of wierd feeling had crept her up and she wasn't in the mood of eating or drinkng anything. But no one allowed her to do anything. Veera took her to her room and spent some time with her picking out what she would wear for Heer's angagement. Veera wanted Heer to choose her dress. Meher came in and then Heer had to decide what she would wear for the engagement. Heer helped them pick out everything and it all this took her about 3-4 hours to do. After she finished she went downstairs to eat something because she hadn't eaten anything from the morning and all of a sudden she was starving.She went straight to the kitchen to grab a bite. Everyone was in the mandir preparing for the ceremony. The kitchen was now empty because the cook were done cooking. It was around 5:00 pm and all the preparations were done. The helpers had left leaving the family members in their room deciding what they were going to wear. The actual ceremony was to start at around 6:30 pm. No one was around much so just decided to eat am apple. She entered the kitchen and went to the fruit basket. She picked out a rose colored apple and went to wash it. She dried it off and used a knife to cut it into little pieces. She took a slice and was about to eat it when someone's hand came and grabbed it out of her hand. Sh turned around and was suprised to see Prem in front of her holding the piece of apple.

" Finally tum aayi.....pata hai kitni bhook lagi thi mujhe?" Prem said with a grin.

" Toh....tumne ....kuch nahi khaya" Heer said still a little suprised and confused on why he didn't eat anything yet.

Prem gave her a smile "Kaise khata? Tumne bhi toh abhi tak kuch nahi khaya......"

Heer looked at him and her respect for her increased. He didn 't anything because she hadn't eaten anything. She couldn't stop ansking herself. How sweet can this guy get?

He came a little closer to her "Pata hai maine pehli baar Preet se jhoot kaha ke mujhe jalebi nahi khani" he gave her smirk. " Trust me....that was hard to do because I don't leave jalebis at any cost.......except for-" He paused and looked at her face which had a cute smile on. She looked so innocent. And he knew that she catched the fact that he could do anything for her.

Heer looked at him and then walked towards the fridge. He watched with twinkling eyes. She opened it and took out a plate full of yellow sweet. Wait not just sweet, they were jalebis. He grinned even wider. Heer looked back at him and then walked towards him with the plate. She stopped in front of him and gave him a lovable smile. She took a piece of the jalebi and approached it towards his mouth. But he held on to her hand and moved it towards Heer.

He softly said " Pehle tum khao...."

Heer looked at him. He had to stop being this nice. Each time he did this, she fell even deeper in love with him. And his politeness was making her go C R A Z Y.

He indicated her to eat it and he fed it to her. She just kept staring at his face. He smirked at her and he knew what effect he had on her.

" Aab mujhe dekhti hi rahogi ke mujhe bhi khilao gi".

Heer broke from her trance and picked out another piece to feed him. She fed it to him. He ate it and just loved the way it tasted, especially when SHE fed it to him. But he could see that she had sometype to nervousness in her lotus eyes.

He now had a serious expression on her face " Tumhe daar lag raha hai kya....?"

She looked at him " Nahi toh......mai...kyu darungi..." Trying her best not to show her uneasiness.

He grinned "Lagta hai Preet se jhoot bolne ke lessons leena padega"...."And don't worry, I will give you time to adjust.....Just 4 more days left until-." He paused. He approached his hands and cupped her face. " I will make sure that you don't ever regret being married to a guy like me.....I promise.....Hum jab tumhe itna pyaar denge ke tumhe apne maa-bauji ki kami mehsoos kabhi nahi hogi......yeh mera tumse waada raha"

Heer knew that her eyes were welling up and she tried her best not to cry. But how can he know every single feeling she was going through. Prem then smiled and took one jalebi from the plate. He tried to make her not cry so he changed the topic.

" Woh Preet mera intezar kar raha hai.....mai jaata hu...." He gave her a warm smile. She smiled back to him as he left. Heer put the plate back in the fridge and from no where he pooped his head and said " Oh....I forgot to tell you.......You look preety sexy today" Hearing this from him, she hit him on his shoulder and he ran seeing her expression. She stood there laughing to herself. The only thing going through her mind was " I LOVE YOU PREM" over and over again.

Phewwww......This was super long and it took me a super long time to write it. I am so sorry guys but this whole week was wacked out. A busy school week and plus party arrangements at home. I am just to weak to do anything. But I finally thought of posting today. My hearty sorry to everyone who waited so much. Sorry sweta2005. But I hope you guys like this part. Hoping to get LOTS AND LOTS OF COMMENTS!!!!!!!!! LOVE YA ALL

Palchin P.S.- didn't edit so sorry for any mistakes.
Edited by Dr.Smart - 16 years ago

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