FF: Pyar dil se hota hai...demag se nahin..PART 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Guys!
I hope that you like my new fanfic as much as you liked my previous ones for Kasamh se...I hope I can make this one just as good.....anyway, please feel free to write any comments/suggestions. Here it goes....
PART 1:
"Main is shaadi ke liye tehyar hu babuji"
Meher suddenly looked up at those words towards the man who she had longed to hear them from......Did he really....? ....Was she imagining....no...what?...How?...........
Tears were begining to spring to her her eyes, she had to blink them away....she had to think....the room was beginning to close in on her....the air suffocating....she had to get away from here....had to get to the one place she could be alone....alone?...she was always alone....even when she was with all these people she was still alone...an outsider in their midst.....an unwanted entity.....she had no one...no one who she could call her own...her parents were long gone......her sister was broken in her own grief....her own worries...the burden of this family....and the one person that Meher had thought she could trust......the one person she unknowingly gave her heart to.....he....how could....how could he betray her like that......and now....marriage?
She whirled away from the two men embracing and hurried through the dark corridor...she had to get away....she needed to think...need to let the tears come...she could only hold them for so long...
She remembered their conversation from a few days earlier where he referred to their friendship as a "deal".......was she so unsuitable for even friendship???
How could I be so stupid?....she thought to herself as she raced through the darkness....he doesn't want me....doesn't need me....why can not think of anything other than him....his happiness....and now marriage?....No...no...we can't......he doesn't love....no...no....I can't go through with this.......why does everyone play with my emotions?.....Have I no rights to feel?....Why does no one care what I think?...what I feel?....my needs...wants...?....
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Harmon saw Meher's retreat from the room...Saw the glistening of the tears she had held at bay...the confusion that marred them....the pain that knifed through them...
He felt that pain when it sliced through her into him...when her piercing gaze had riveted on his face before she turned away from him......he wanted to go to her.....hold her......kiss those tears away..........
When had these thoughts entered into him?....why was he so sure of his need of her...when for so long he could think of nothing other than Maya and business....when had Meher become a part of him....a part of his thoughts...when had this need to be near her grown so profound.......he knew Meher had many questions....he saw them in the confusion of her eyes....but how could he explain them to her when he didn't fully understand himself.......but...but.....
Edited by tbabhra - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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nicely wriiten
ur idea is new
i dont remember reading too many harman meher ffs
personally their not my fav
anyways nice start
continue asap i wanna see how this ff goes
amana
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 2:
Harmon hurried through the door that Meher had just retreated through....he knew where she would go...he knew her....understood her....just as she understood him.....
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Meher hurried faster through the corridor....the darkness closing around her.......gasping ....the tears that were treatening for so long could not be held back any longer.....
when she suddenly collided with something....strong hands grabbed her arms to steady her......she quickly blinked to clear the tears away before she looked up....
"Meher...Meher...tum teekh ho..?" It was Preet...."Tum is tara....?"
"mein teekh ho....woh bas...."
"Lekin...yeh ansoo..?"
"Meher!" Harmon's voice echoed through the corridor......Preet felt Meher stiffen before she pulled away and ran further leaving him standing there watching her....dazed and confused....what was that about?....
"Preet? Preet!"
"Ji....Ji Bhaiya...?"
"Woh ....Meher...?"
"Ji...woh us taraf....Sab teekh to hai na?"
"Haan...bas..mein aata hoon.....tum jao"
......
Meher hurried up the stairs to the rooftop, she knew Harmon wouldn't be far behind...she could feel his footsteps with every beat of her heart....please God make these feelings stop....make me stop loving him....make him go away.....
She looked up to the moon pleadingly......her tears flowing freely....please let every ounce of this wrethed feeling wash away with these tears.......please help me.....
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Harmon walked slowly through the doorway leading to the rooftop...he knew she was here...he could feel her presence......
As he entered he saw her standing by the balustrade looking up at the moon....weeping silently......the silence knifed at him.....how could he have hurt her...abused....used her innocence for his own selfish needs....how could any girl...no woman....be so pure...be so giving and tolerate so much....and be valued so little.....he wanted to make right everything that was done wrong to her.....
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He walked up behind her silently.....
"Meher............."
"Kyun?....yeh shaadi nahin ho sagti......aap...aap..ko sabse...sach batana chayi...ke aap...aur Maya....mein..nahin..."
He turned her towards him "shhhh....." he silenced her with his finger
His hands framed her face forcing her to look up at him....He looked into her eyes and bought his face closer.....
Edited by tbabhra - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 3: Harmon bought his face closer still....every thought had flown from his mind...all he wanted was to relieve the pain from Meher's face...to kiss the tears that were falling from her eyes....he felt the tension in Meher's body...the breathlessness that had assailed her as he drew her in...his own breath was becoming ragged......he slowly closed his eyes as his lips softly caressed her cheeks tasing the salty wetness of her tears.....
The soft touch was all Meher need to break free of the hypnotic gaze that Harmon had held her in...What was this that had suddenly assailed her?...him...them?.......how could he do that to her so easily...? she broke out of the embrace...and turned away from harmon trying to gather her breath, wits and thoughts into place....
"Harmon Ji...."
"Nahin Meher....kuch mat kaho....bas itna jaan lo ke mein tumse shaadi karna jaata hoon..."
"Lekin....Maya aur...."
Harmon turned her around sharply and hauled her against him.......
"Maine kaha ke main tumse shaadi karna jaata ho...har haal mein.....tumara pas sirf 18hours hai yeh decide karne ke liye ke tum mujse shaadi karogi ke nahin...."
Meher broke away from him.,.....
"Bas...bas ke jiye...." she wept....."kyun aap sab mere feelings ka masaak banate hai.....aap ko yeh shaadi majboori mein karni pari hai...lekin main janti ho ke aap....aap..Maya....aur..aur..main nahin jaati....ke mere kahtir kisi aur ka dil toote...kisi aur ke sapne......main kudh Nihaal bhaiya se baath...."
"Meher!" Harmon pushed Meher against the wall and placed his hands around her stopping her being able to escape....leaving her no choice but to look at him.... "Tumari feelings ka masaak??" he asked in anger....."tum janti ke mere mann mein...mere dil mein kya jaara tha jab mein us hill pe tha....?? Nahin na....to mein bata ho....mein sirf tumare bara mein soch raha tha..."
Meher's eyes shot to his....disbelief clear in them....
"haan...mein sach kehra raha ho...mein tumare bare mein soch raha tha aur phir tum achanak waha pe aayi aur mujhe laga ke tum ek pari ho...aur ...aur...bas meine bhagwan se oos waqt kuch manga to sirf tumhe manga,,,,,aur aaj...aaj...jab babuji ne humhe yeh kaha ke aaj hi humari shaadi to mera dil yeh soch raha tha ke aaj pehli baar meine dil se bhagwan se maanga aur bhagwan ne mere sun li...main tumse jhoot nahin bolunga...main nahin janta ke mere mann mein tumare liya kya hai....kyunki jo feelings mere dil mein tumare liye hai woh maya ke liye nahin the....mein sirf yeh janta hoon...ke na jaane kyun mere har waqt tumara paas aane ke dil karta hai...tum kaise ho yeh jane ke mann karta hai...tumhe dard ho to woh dard ko door karne ka dil karta....tumare yeh aansoo..."
He whispered in her ear "tumare yeh ansoo...." he kissed her tears again........"ko kiss kar ke tumare chera ko phir se khushiyon ke saath roshan karne ko jee karta hain..."
"hmm...mmm....." They turned at the interruption, Meher hidden behind Harmon's back, her cheeks flaming at the thought of who could have witnessed what Harmon was doing to her......
Edited by tbabhra - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey!
That was an awesome update!
Do continue!
Loved it!
?xXx?
Sunayna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i like the way ur story is going
its different im not a big fan of harman but i like it
pls cont. soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 4:
"ahh...Di aap?"
"Kyun?....thoda intezar nahin kar sagte kya?....Thodi dher mein to tum dono ki shaadi hoy jayengi..."
"Nahin...di...aisa na..."
"Bas Harmon....ab Meher ko jaane do....isko tehyar jo karna hai...chalo Meher..."
As Meher followed Kulraj back towards the doorway leading into the house she felt a tug on her dupatta causing her to look back at Harmon.....their gazes locked a silent communication flowing from one to the other....
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As Harman began to get ready for the wedding ceremony...he couldn't get the images of Meher out of his mind....he could still feel her heartbeat as he stood so close to her....he could still taste her tears....the softness of her skin...still feel her....
"Bhaiya?...."
Preet's quiet call broke into Harmon's thought....
"Haan...Preet bolo.."
Preet told Harmon all about how he mortgaged the house and was tricked into mortgaging to Rishab.....
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Meher was also in deep thoughts....she couldn't get away from the feelings that Harmon evoked in her....the more she tried to fight them the harder it became.....
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Harmon couldn't get Preet's words out of his head....what were they ging to do?...how could they overcome this new obstacle?.....
rrrrrrrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnggggggg...rrrrrrrriiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnng....
The insistent ringing of his mobile erupted in the room....reluctantly Harmon reached for it and without looking at the caller ID answered it.....
The call had come from Maya's father....Maya had attempted suicide...........what?...why?....mujhe jaana ho ga....?
Harmon rushed out of the room and towards to his car.....he had no ideas that someone had been listening to his conversation and had witnessed his retreat.........
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"Kya mujhe yeh shaadi karni chayhi?....Kya Harmon...mujhe..mujhe pyar....." The flashes of Harmon holding her....kissing her broke into Meher's thoughts......her heartbeat wouldn't stop racing....she felt...confused?.....overwhelmed?.....anxious?.......she couldn't identify it...she felt everything...but more than that she felt fear.....a fear she could identify......there was no one she could talk to....the only one who had grown close to her in the last few months.....who could understand her.....was the one person she couldn't talk to.....he was the cause of all these feelings............
"Meher....tum yaha tehyar ho rahi ho...aur waha Harmon..." It was Kuljeet chachi...
"Kya hua chachi....?"
"Kya? Tumhe nahin pata?...Tumhe to pata ho ga na.....ke is ghar ko ghirbi (mortgage) rakha gaya hai...aur humare pas to koi paise....."
"Yeh aap kya kehri hai chachi...?"
"Aur ab...bechari Veera ki shaadi......."
"Veera ki shaadi...? Mujhe kuch samaj nahi araha hai ke aap kya kehne ...."
" Abhi Harmon ko phone aya ke Maya ne kudh kushi karne ki koshish......"
"Kya Maya..."
"Haan...aur uske papa ne Harmon ko yeh shart di hai ke woh Maya se shaadi kare to woh usko is ghar ko bechana ke liye paise.......Anyway...tum yaha tehyar ho jao...main abhi athi hoon..."
With that....Kuljeet left the room with a sly smile......she would ensure that no one in this family would get what they wanted...and this Meher and her sister.....the cause for the humiliation of her sister...ha!
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When Kuljeet left the room...Meher became too restless......She knew that Harmon was in love with Maya....he would feel responsible for what Maya would have done....and he would need to protect this family....but he because of his promise to Babuji and his sister Veera....he would feel compelled to wed Meher........what should she do....?...... She had to go speak to him....had to find him.....
She quickly made her way to Harmon's room......
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Upon finding the room vacant of its occupier she knew he had gone....and knew exactly where he had gone...and to whom......he had chosen.............
Edited by tbabhra - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 5:
The events of the last few days kept flashing through Harmon's mind....he looked at Maya's still sleeping form recovering from her suicide attack....he thought of all they had been through.....then he remembered Meher and his heart beat ...he remembered her courageous confession of her love for him and how he had abused her.....he remembered her saving his life and a smile appeared on his face.....a sense of calm enveloped him.....strength seemed seep into him...he shook his head slightly....
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The ceremonies were underway.......Nihal had insisted that his sister be married before him....the couple had completed their pheras and were bowing to receive blessings from their elders.......Nihal and Veera had also started their ceremony.....everyone was happy...they had recued their honour.....
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Harmon entered the hall......he saw his sister and Nihal completing their marriage.....a felt elated.....his siter's wedding had gone without incident....he walked into the crowd closer to the couple...wanting to give them his blessings before he went to prepare for his opwn nuptials......
As he walked further a strange excitement had settled within the guests....they were all looking at him and whispering....
What was going on...? he thought, ..had they realised where they had gone?
"HArmon?...Tum yaha...toh phir...?" It was Kuljeet chachi.....
"phir kya chachi..?"
"Meher ki shaadi kise hoi thi?..." She said this loudly so that all the attention was now focused on them.....
"Meher...ki.....shaadi...?" He asked in quiet disbelief ...before he turned to look at the couple that was standing towards the back of the podium....."Meher ...ne shaadi....?" Tears were filling in his eyes as he walked towards the couple....."Tumne shaadi....?" He asked the silent bride standing in front of him....her face covered with her ghoonghat..."Tumne shaadi...KISSE?" He shouted...
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CLAP CLAP CLAP CLAP.....
It was Rishab..........
"hahahaha....toh aap apki beti Veera ki izzat bechane is Nihal ke saath..aur aap ka yeh beta...is ladki ne is ko dhoka... hahaha...."
"RISHAB!"....Babuji could not hot hold his anger anymore....
"Kyun prahji...?"
"Kuljeet?...Tum bhi...?"
"Haan haan mein bhi......aap ne to meri behen Daljeet ko shrap dhiya tha na...ke usko aulad ka sukh nahin milega.....aaj dekho.....maine aap ki is laxmi Meher ki shaadi kaise kisi aur ke saath karva di...aur aap ka yeh beta....ab aap hi bathaiye...aap ko kaise aulad ka sukh naseeb ho deh sagti jab aap hi ne meri behen se yeh hakh cheenah...."
Edited by tbabhra - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Guys!
I hope that you are enjoying this FF.....please leave your comments.
Thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago
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"Are prahji....kya aap jana nahin jaate ke maine akhir Meher ki shaadi kisse kar vadi?" Kuljeet asked sarcastically......
When everyone looked at her....she laughed again and pronouced..."oos pagal Manmeet se...aur kisse?"
Both Rishab and Kuljeet laughed at the Juneja family that was standing in front of them with shocked expressions.....
"Are Chachi.....kam se kam aap ne pehle check kiya hota ke yeh dulha sach mein Manmeet hi to hai?" Asked an amused voice behind them.....
"Preet...tu...?...tuhne...Meher ke saath....shaadi.........? ......" Asked Harmon...unable to believe that his brother had married the girl he had just realised he loved above all else....he was breaking inside....but at least...least....it was Preet...and not Manmeet...he told himself....
"KYA?" Kuljeet whipped around to face the couple......
"Are chachi...aap ne to Manmeet ke saath yeh shaadi nahin....humari saath fix kar vadi!"
"Dekha Kuljeet....kaise mere bete ne tumari yeh chaal bhi...."
"Khush mat hoye prahJi.......Meher ki shaadi to Harmon se to nahin hoye na...jise woh pyar karti hai...aur jis aap ka beta Harmon pyar karta.....toh phir bhi mera yeh nakaam ki chaal phir bhi kaam kar gayi na!"
"Sachi chachi....?" Again Preet asked in a sarcastic and amused voice..."Aap ko sach mein lagta ke mein apne hi bhai ka pyar unse door kar dhunga?"
"Preet...?" Asked Harmon quietly...did that mean that he didn't.....Harmon thought to himself...
"Haan bhaiya......aap sahi soch rahe hai....maine Meher ke saath shaadi nahin ki hai...."
"Kya?" Asked Harmon, Babuji and Kuljeet in unison...
"Haan..maine to isse shaadi ki hai.....please may I introduce you to my wife ChachiJi....Mrs Ashlesha Preet Juneja!"
As Preet said this....the girl that had been standing quietly behind him walked slowy forwards and lifeted her veil.....
Happiness erupted within Harmon...his Meher...was still his!...
"Dekha Kuljeet...tumare yeh nakaam chaal nakaam hi rehgayi.....ab tum dekho ke mein kaise Harmon aur Meher ki shaadi bhi karonga!....Ab mujhe lagta hai ke tumara is ghar mein rehne ka waqt katham ho gaya....tumhe mein abhi aur isi waqt sabke samne is ghar se bahar nikal tha hoon...aaj se tumara is ghar mein ahna manna hai..."
"Are Mr Juneja....aap humhe aur is Kuljeet se yeh ghar se kaise nikal sagte hai...jo ghar ab aap ka hai hi nahin!"
"Mr Rishab ..." Spoke Nihal...."Aap bhi gahlat hai.....kyunki,,,is ghar to abhi bhi humara hai,....agar aap humhe believ nahin karte to pooch li jiye aap ke motgage wale nu...maine is ghar ki keemat bhar dhi hai.....aur is ghar ke papers bhi humare pas hai...is liye ab aap log please...."
The shocked look on Rishab and Kuljeet's face made the Junejas laugh in merriment....things were finally starting to turn their way again.....
Edited by tbabhra - 16 years ago

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