My 3rd caption...

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Posted: 16 years ago

hi every1....this is my 3rd caption....its not tht much funny lyk the previous caps....its a Premeer scene....& i'll try 2 make a caption on Harshitti dance (on DRK) soon...nywayz c this 1 now😊...& dont 4get 2 comment....whether its gud/bad....& here's the link of my 1st cap : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/1056741/my-1st-caption-u-can-c-the-pics-now

& here's the 2nd one : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/1064091/my-2nd-caption

Heer : aaj mai tumhare saath romaaance karungi

(Prem jus came from office)

Heer : hii mera cute jaanu!...

Prem : Salam mera Heer....aaj kya baat hai, tum blue/pink chorke red dressme?

Heer : voh, kya hai na...mai aaj bohut romantic mood mei hoon...tumhare saath romance karna chahti hoon😳...

Prem : oh, toh yeh baat hai...lekin ek problem hai...

Prem : kya?....😕

Prem : yehi ki, tumhare saath romance karne ke liye....mujhe tumhare aur paas ana parega...and then tumhare lice mere saarpe ajaega...😆

Heer : hmm....jao ab...mujhe tumhare saath koi romance nai karni hai...hameha mazaq karte rehte ho...

Prem : are maine mazaq kab kiya...jo such hai vahi to bol raha hoon...ok ok, aur kuch nai kahunga...aaj lice ko aane do...kaal hum lice marne ka shampoo kharid lenge then hamare saarpe istemaal karenge...aur lice vanish!....😆

Prem : ok baba sry...

Prem : vaise tum aaj bohut khubsurat lag rahi ho....baas tumhare bal khule rehti, toh aur bhi zyada sunder lagti...

Heer : mai to khule rakhne chahti thi....lekin mera hair straightner kharab hogai hai....so i cudn't set my hair...c thts y...

Prem : are, yeh bhi koi baat hui....mai abhi market jaake tumhare liye straighner kharid ke lata hoon....then...u'll luk more beautiful....

Prem : so chalta hoon...

Heer : nai nai, abhi maat jana....kaal jana...abhi abhi toh office se aye ho....

Heer : mera cutesa pagalsa hone wala hubby😳...mujhe sunder lagne ke liye kitna kuch karna chahta hai..paar abhi nahi....kaal jana hmm...

Prem : ok kaal jaungi, mai to bhulhi gayatha ki ab hamme romance karna hai...

Heer (thinking) : wow i can c ur muscles....cant wait 2 open ur shirt😍

Prem : toh kaha se shuru kare hum?

Prem : 4head se...

Prem : ankho se...

Heer (thinkin) : are Prem 4head, ankhe chorke lipske baat karho..mai to tumhare lipme kiss karneke liye bechaaan hoon....

Prem : ya phir....ayo pardeme chup jaye hum...& then...

Heer : oh Prem, stop teasing me...sharam laag rahi hai😳....

Prem : oho, itne der baad sharmane lagi ho😆...tumhine to kaha tha ki tumhe romance karni hai...

Heer : hun, lekin...

Prem : ab lekin vekin kuch nahi...

AND THEN THEY KISSED EACH OTHER....a few moments later...

Prem : kya dekh rahi ho?

Prem : mera body dekh raha tha...

Heer : kyu?

Prem : kya hai na tumhare aur mere shadi hai kuch din baad...so u kno...

Heer : Preeeem😳...

Prem : i luv u Heer😳

Heer : i luv u too Prem😳

hope u guyz lyked it😊

Edited by S.Nisa - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

i think nobody lyked it😔

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Zahra

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Posted: 16 years ago

I like it- I like how you showed them talking like husband-wife!! plus the headlice part made me laugh!! Your captions always bring a smile to my face!! xx

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ruexangel

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Posted: 16 years ago

haha i loved it!😆

nice cute sa story! very creative, & captions went gr8 wif pics👏

well done, keep it up

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shabs_89

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Posted: 16 years ago

ha ha ha - lol

i loved the whole story tellin thing - it was amazing!

that was too good - please do it on some of the older pics we hav in the pics gallery, cos u were soooo good i wanna c more of ur work - the ones between prem and heer are much better!

:)

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ruexangel
haha i loved it!😆
nice cute sa story! very creative, & captions went gr8 wif pics👏

well done, keep it up

thanks 4 commenting Rue😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: shabs_89
ha ha ha - lol

i loved the whole story tellin thing - it was amazing!

that was too good - please do it on some of the older pics we hav in the pics gallery, cos u were soooo good i wanna c more of ur work - the ones between prem and heer are much better!

:)

thanks alot😊....i'll try my best 2 do it 4 all of u guyz😊

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Tasha.Natasha

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Posted: 16 years ago

luvd them to bitss..

romantic nd funniii

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Pyari_Zahra
I like it- I like how you showed them talking like husband-wife!! plus the headlice part made me laugh!! Your captions always bring a smile to my face!! xx

thank God, it brought smile on ur face...i do these 4 all of ur smiles...i alwayz wanna c this forum happy & smiling😊