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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey dt was fantastic start, very entertainin & cute, 😆
cont wen u cn plz, & plc add 2 me ur pm list, thanks!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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kay then miss_hyper and rue, ill add u both rite now!!
thanx for letting me know, and for liking the story!!
rinkz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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NOTE! read for info on things going on or to happen soon!

---hey guys i need to tell or rather ask you all something---
im planning on making the whole story move to Greece...for the location, well actually rite now i think heer and rinki are in USA but heer's gotten a acceptance letter to a business owned by prem...and i just wanted to make them move, away from their current home due to some reasons that fall into the story as it will start progressing, they will be revealed...anyway i wanted to let you all know that heer's going to her first day but at her office she'll be given the choice to move to greece to work under prem juneja, their boss and she takes it in a heartbeat due to some personal reasons and then the story will continue in GREECE!! 😳 i've never been there and nor do i know anything about it, but it sounded like a beautiful place to check out, so im gonna find info and make mostly everything up in the story, the language used there will be English cuz i have noooo clue how to speak or write a language that isn't english, spanish, hindi, or punjabi so english is the safest na! 😆😆 so its pretty imp that you know this little move to Greece...or else you might get confused so im writing this to tell ya'll that!
And another thing, most of you noticed that im back....permanently as of now...so the stories will be continuing real soon! next week i will be posting parts for all the stories going on, but am not sure of what day exactly....so be on a look-out for the update! 😃 will pm all the ppl that have asked me too rite after i post the part, so mite take like 15 mins for me to send the pms to all that asked, cuz i need to know who so yea lolz 😆 most are prolly wondering why am i not updating this week...well the answer is this: this whole week something is going on in my skool every single day! its homecoming week, so the homecoming parade, rally and dance are this week and then having classes and all that...doesnt give me time to write a lot...so there ya go! but know this...i AM writing a bit day by day so that i have something to post nxt wk...and hopefully i wont need an excuse to use for not updating! :]
see you all later!
Rinkz
Edited by ~Rinki~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

kay then miss_hyper and rue, ill add u both rite now!!

thanx for letting me know, and for liking the story!!
rinkz

Can u add me to teh PM list?? I really liek ur story!!!!!!!!!
Cant wait for some P/H scenes!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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k rinki dinki😆(hope u dont mind my calling u dat)......
will wait 4 ur update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: rag-ran4ever

Can u add me to teh PM list?? I really liek ur story!!!!!!!!!
Cant wait for some P/H scenes!!!

no prob! will add ya rite now!
thanks for liking it 😳
ah yesh that'll be coming up in chapter 2 or 3 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashpush

k rinki dinki😆(hope u dont mind my calling u dat)......
will wait 4 ur update

nah its kay call me watever ya want 😆 as long as i know its me ur tlkin to lolz
im updating rite now!
:p
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68

Chapter. 1B

Heer raised her hands above her head as she sat up in the bed, the blanket falling down and showing her black tank-top. She turned to look at the picture of Guru Nanak Ji and folded her hands in a prayer after covering her head with a shawl. After her daily prayer, she went to get ready after pulling back the curtains. The dark sky peeked into the room as she took her clothes to the bathroom. After 15 minutes, she came back dressed in a white blouse tucked into a black skirt coming to her knees, she towel-dried her wet hair before using the hair dryer. Soon she was ready for her first day at the office, to work under the prestigious Prem Juneja. With her hair pinned back in a sophisticated french-braid, and wearing black heels matching her clothes, she looked like the perfect picture of a working woman. Placing her jacket on, she moved to leave the room with her purse. She entered Rinki's room and smiled at her little sister sleeping with a teddy bear held close. 'Yeh ladki bhi na! Sone lagi hai lekin blanket tak nahin use karti!' Heer mumbled to herself while walking towards Rinki who was busy sleeping without the blanket, cuddling the bear closely. She leant down and kissed Rinki's head lovingly and turned to leave, when a slight groan stopped her. Looking back she noticed that her sister was waking up slowly. "Unhh...di what are you doing up so early? *yawns* bahar dekho puri taran se andhera hua hai aur tum tayar hoke baithi ho?" Rinki spoke up, hands rubbing her eyes as she yawned tiredly once more. "Uffo Rinku i have to go to office na! since it will take me almost an hour to get there normally but im leaving a bit sooner because of traffic and freeway jams...anyway main toh chali, tu soja aur haan, dont forget to eat your breakfast, ya hear?" Heer announced while glaring at Rinki, her habit of not eating breakfast and lunch irritated poor Heer to the core. Rinki rolled her eyes and nodded her head, burying herself back into her bed. 'Will try to remember!!' She spoke up as Heer was leaving, making Heer sigh and shake her head, knowing that it meant, 'If im hungry only then will i eat!'. Heer soon left, leaving Rinki to sleep while she paced through early traffic.

*Tring Tring Tring* After the third ring of the phone, Rinki finally picked up her cell and without looking, answered in a groggy voice. 'Hello Rinki...kaisi ho?' A man's voice came and entered her ears, her eyes forced to open wide and alert. She sat up straight, holding the phone to her ear in a tight grip, her eyes filled with shock. She moved to hang up on the person when his voice came, 'Please dont hang up Rinki!! Tum meri baat toh suno, i really need to talk to you...it's about Kiara...she's pregnant again'. There was a hint of regret and pleading in his voice as he confessed to her his reason for calling. 'Toh main kya karoon? Im not the one that got her pregnant, its not my problem Rahul, you deal with it and please for god's sake dont call me again unless its about Kris...mujhe sirf uski parwa hai...you and Kiara can go to hell for all i care!' She hoped that he would take the hint and leave her alone...its been two years since she last saw him or heard from him and now out of the blue he decides to call her just to tell her that his lover is pregnant with his kid...for the second time! Feeling slightly pissed off, she decided to hang up before she said or did something that might come back and hurt her later on. 'Rinki main jaanta hoon ki meri waja se tumhe bahut dukh aur takleef sehni padi hai lekin iss waqt mujhe mere dost ki zaroorat hai, tumhari zaroorat hai Rinku!' He spoke up before she could hang up, his words forcing her to close her eyes and sigh tiredly. 'Please Rahul...baghwan ke vaaste tum mujhe Rinku mat bolao...only my loved ones can call me that...aur tum toh mere dushman ho right? You were the first guy i trusted after my father...and look where that blind trust got me Rahul...aaj tumhari waja se main apne khud ke dad se nazar nahin mila sakti...only because of you did i have to leave my house, and have my sister come with me! Everything you did Rahul...has made me a different person, the old Rinki was ready to trust someone that could just simply make her smile...but this Rinki will never trust anyone again...especially a guy like you now please get over yourself and dont call me about your personal life, actually don't call me at all! I have Kris's nana to call me and let me know about him, and that is the only thing connecting me to you...got it, now keep it locked in your mind!' She hung up without listening to his stuttered reply, falling back on the bed with an exhausted sigh. She turned over on her stomach, burying her face in her arm, letting the tears finally escape as the past memories flashed through her mind.

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Heer sat in her cabin and typed up the messages to post on the bulletin. A smile stayed on her lips the entire time, she was shown complete respect when she arrived at the office. First she had to do some normal things to settle in before starting on some big projects that she was eager to do. A knock sounded and she glanced up at the door, watching as an elderly man entered with a file. 'Would you like to go to Greece Ms. Maan?' He asked with a kind smile. 'Greece?' Heer asked curiously as she stood up to show him some respect. 'Yes, since you were selected to work under and with our boss, thats your field of work, but he lives in Greece now so, if you would still want to work with him as his secretary and be the head of the creative team, you will need to move there. But if you don't want to, then you can stay here and just work as a creative helper. Its all upto you, and we know about your sister studying her junior year in college so we will take care of all the priorities about her education and your living quarters will need to be near the boss and thats all arranged, but the final call is yours'. The offer sounded so tempting to her, the need to leave this place was immense but especially for Rinki...she needed to leave this place, the place that held so many bad memories, yes it was time to start a new beginning and begin their lives the way they want, without having to worry about anything in the past. 'Uh, can i have some time to think about it please?' She asked, sounding hopeful to get some time to clear this out with her sister. He smiled and nodded his head before leaving her to think deeply.

'Greece? Sounds like a great opportunity but...kya Rinki yahan se jana chahegi? Kitni sari yaadein judi hain iss jaga se, so many things she wants to do here, like go to that one club on her birthday and that restaurant with Kris and me...itni sari cheeze baki hain jo woh karna chahti hai...is it right for me to take that away from her?' Heer thought out-loud while pacing around the cabin. Pushing her bangs behind her ear, she moved to the window and glanced outside at the quiet atmosphere. Ten minutes went by with her thinking deeply, finally she came up with a decision. She dialed Rinki's number moving to sit in the seat, shifting nervously. 'haan di?' a tired voice sounded through the speaker, making Heer instantly worry. 'Rinku kya hua? Tum theek toh ho na? did something happen? I'll be home right now!!' Heer spoke up, not letting Rinki speak up. She was all ready to get up and leave the office at that moment. 'DI! Calm down, main theek hoon, just sleepy yaar, what else? Anyway tum bolo, why did you call me? Need something?' Rinki finally managed to get Heer to listen and calm down. 'Uhh woh kya hai na...mujhe ek bahut acha offer mila hai Rinku...lekin hume Greece move hone hoga! Main na kehne ke liye tayar hoon, bas tu ek baar kehde ki tu kya chahti hai! Aise offers toh baad mein bhi aajayenge na?' Heer explained in a quiet voice, ready to hear a loud NO from her sister, but she was really surprised to hear something else entirely. 'Greece?? Wow di! That's great man! Uffo tum bhi na! why wouldn't i wanna go? I mean come on this is Greece, its such a beautiful place na? anyway these offers come by rarely di, take advantage of em when there here right in front of you, or else you'll regret it later! Now go and tell them yes! Tell me the details when you get home, im going to make briyani today...its 'cooking mode' today for me!' Rinki's voice genuinely sounded excited, a smile rose on Heer's face as she silently thanked her little sister's understanding nature. Both sisters hung up at the same time, one with a huge smile while the other had a sad smile...silently eating her chocolate ice-cream.

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'Mr. Juneja? Here are the files you asked for,' a woman said in a quiet voice as she stood in front of his desk nervously. He always scared her, his eyes seemed to look straight though you and could read your deeply hidden secrets, or atleast thats what it felt like every time his light brown eyes connected with her blue ones. Lisa has been working under him for a while now, enough time to get used to his antics and habits, yet somehow he always managed to make her feel like an elementary girl with just some few words and gestures. The chair was turned around and in view came a man in his mid twenties, looking handsome in his white buttoned shirt with a blue tie, the sleeves rolled up to his elbows showed a hint of comfort in his cabin. His black hair fell against his forehead, casting a light shadow to fall on his cheeks and nose. He lightly rubbed at his stubble and motioned her to leave the files on his desk. She turned to leave but was stopped by a silky voice, 'Lisa, get Mr. Rao on the line asap'. She nodded without looking up at him and left the cabin, sighing relieved to be out of there. He rolled his eyes at her behavior, 'you would think im a vampire about to suck her blood the way she gets all scared around me, im not that scary am i? ah, i guess i should stop wearing so much black around my employees...nah! that would ruin the fun!' his voice sounded so hypnotizing, it could make anyone fall in love with it...fall into a trap, ready to do anything he asked for. He spent some time talking to Rao and at the end of the conversation was yelling at him to 'get that file on my desk in one hour!'. The door opened and he glance up, his face reflecting his anger as his eyes burned with fire, that cooled down at the sight of his younger brother. 'Preet, what are you doing here?' He asked, smiling and standing up to greet his guest. Preet smirked and shrugged his shoulders, both brothers moved to sit on the sofa and spent the afternoon talking. The workers didn't dare to interrupt in fear of getting yelled at by the prestigious Mr. Prem Juneja.

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here's the part 1B, hope you all enjoyed it, im sure many have questions about some things but dont worry they'll be cleared as the story starts progessing 😃
yea yea im pretty sure there are tons of spelling mistakes in this part but plz ignore them and enjoy ur reading!
do comment and tell me whether you enjoyed this or didn't understand/liked a certain part so next time i can make it likable 😳
comments: like always 5+ comments before next part is up!
lub to all
rinkz

edit add- thanks kimz, i wasnt using word so no wonder i had so many mistakes! but thanks a lot! 😳
Edited by ~Rinki~ - 16 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago
#69
YAHHHHHHHH!

*reserved*

*unreserve*

Just got off the phone.....no...it wasn't the look alike....it was my mommy asking if we had milk or not...🤔Kimzie, shopping.....*parties*Me going next week, I need new shoes....😉

I agree with Kimmi, the getting up of Heeru reminded me of......☺️Mayanku.....☺️☺️☺️*ahem* OK moving on....praying like a good girl...! Did she pray that you update faster or do I have to relay on my own prayers for that?😕

"Prestigious Prem Juneja...."☺️*drools over keyboard* Give me a minute...this weekend was a whirlwind for me...☺️

Hayye...*pinches cheeks* Choutu Rinkz Uncle sleeps with a teddy bear?😆Do you have printed pj's and a nightlight as well???😉😉So sweet though how Heer is all worried about her younger sister eating breakfast...thank god my mom goes ot work before I get up....she never see's my no-existenct breakfast...!

Chalo Kiran...lets go get out knives and guns....I'm not liking the sound of Rahul..and what does he have to do with Kiara? And what is Rinki helping htem with...uff this is confusing..I don't know if I'm talking ot Rinki YOU or RInki the FF rinki....ahh well I love both...☺️☺️TOo much suspense Rinkz....tell me!

Ahh I have ot go...but beofre I go...Greece......hayye....lots of romantic settings there...😳and me lovey Premu...enough said...☺️☺️☺️

Can't wait too see what happens...and if you need us...bring me and Kimmi in here too hurt Rahulll I'd be mre then happy😃
Edited by shabo24 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Rinki..how u doing?very nice update there..yeah u r right about few doubts but like u said it'll be hopefully cleared up soon..so Heer-Rinku chale Greece eh??nicey nice😉..aur wah Prem Juneja ke tevar😛he he he..u've described everyone very well..like everyones's attire n stuff like that..good going..looking forward to the next part!
Edited by ranrags - 16 years ago

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