FF: Pyaar Ishq aur Mohabhat part3 pg 4

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poonam

@P.Kamaljit.Sean

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Posted: 17 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: angel82
interesting...college lovestory, is it? but it was short...I was soo excited reading it and after one scroll i found the precap...😭 but still it was good start...👍🏼

next update will be long
thanks

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poonam

@P.Kamaljit.Sean

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Posted: 17 years ago

#22

part 2

university of sydney

heer in her mind read university of sydney smile
heer- hi prachi tu kaise yeh (how r u)
prachi-mein tik hu tu ( i am fine u)
heer- i am fine as usual smile
prachi- ab chale class ke liye late ho ra hai (getting late for class)
heer- smile and nod her head
scene shift
prem- hi neev how r u my friend
neev- i am fine u
prem good smile
both at the same time read univesity of sydney and look at each other
prem- neev do u believe in true love
neev yes yaar
prem- me too did u find ur love
neev- not yet u
prem- no but i don't know why but today i have wierd feeling
don't know what kind of feeling
neev- well maybe u will find her today
prem-smile
they both leave for classes
prem and heer classes are upstairs (all classes toghther)
neev prachi downstaris(all classes toghther but one class with prem heer)
heer is walking upstairs (behind her is prem) and
random gril is going downstairs bumps into heer
when someone caught her with muscular arm yes
it's prem

background music playing
pehli nazar mein kaisa jaadu kar diya
tera ban baitha hai mera jiyaa
jaane kya hoga, kya hoga pataa
iss pal ko mil ke aa jee lein zaraa
main hun yahaan, tu hai yahaan
meri baahon mein aa, aa bhi jaa
o jaanejaa, dono jahaan, meri baahon mein aa, bhool ja
o jaanejaa, dono jahaan, meri baahon mein aa, bhool ja

baby i love you
baby i love you

baby i love you
baby i love you, so

baby i love you
oh, i love you

i love you
i love you so
baby i love you

har dua mein shaamil tera pyaar hai
bin tere lamha bhi dushwaar hai
dhadkanon ko tujhse hi tarkaar hai
tujhse hain raahatein
tujhse hain chaahatein
har dua mein shaamil tera pyaar hai
bin tere lamha bhi dushwaar hai
dhadkanon ko tujhse hi tarkaar hai
tujhse hain raahatein
tujhse hain chaahatein
tu jo mili, ik din mujhe
main kahin ho gaya laapataa
o jaanejaa, dono jahaan, meri baahon mein aa, bhool ja
o jaanejaa, dono jahaan, meri baahon mein aa, bhool ja

kar diya deewana, dard-e-faasle
chaen chheena ishq ke ehsaas ne
bekhayali di hai teri pyaas ne
chhaya suroor hai
kuch to zaroor hai
kar diya deewana, dard-e-faasle
chaen chheena ishq ke ehsaas ne
bekhayali di hai teri pyaas ne
chhaya suroor hai
kuch to zaroor hai
ye dooriyaan jeene na dein
haal mera tujhe na pata
o jaanejaa, dono jahaan, meri baahon mein aa, bhool ja
o jaanejaa, dono jahaan, meri baahon mein aa, bhool ja

baby i love you
baby i love you

baby i love you
baby i love you, so

baby i love you
oh, i love you

baby i love you
i love youheer papers are all flying in the air
they have an eye-lock session for a while
then heer moves and start picking her paper
prem helped her.their hand touches
prem is amazed by her beauty
prem in his mind neev was right today
i finally found my princess
both are lost in their own world and both
came to the reality when someone called
heer
new entry
ayesha from kayamath prachi sis
heer and ayesha dress

(heer dress on the left blue one and ayesha dress right)
ayesha- hi heer
heer- ayesha tum how r u omg what r u doing here
ayesha- i got scholarship here
heer that's so good
ayesha and heer are so happy to see each other
heer looks at prem (smile) and leaves with ayesha
prem-kya naam hai heer (nice name)
prem stare at heer
scene shifts
there's a tap on prem
shoulder it's neev
neev- my friend kya hua
prem- u were right abt that feeling
neev- u mean u found her
prem- yes i did just right now
neev- omg who is she
prem- heer
neev- nice name then he leaves to his classes
scene shifts
ayesha- kaun tha woh ladka (who was that boy)
heer- i don't know who ever was that he helpd me
i am alive because of him
ayesha- has tears in her eyes
heer is thinking abt that moment
so does prem

precap: when heer walks in class room
she is shocked to see

plz leave a comment
good or bad
forgive me abt my hindi or any mistakes

Edited by pooji123456789 - 17 years ago

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Ravjot

@rainydays.

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Posted: 17 years ago

#23

awesome update! loved how preem and heer met. can't wait to read ur next update.

btw happy birthday😃

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poonam

@P.Kamaljit.Sean

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Posted: 17 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: ravioli_11
awesome update! loved how preem and heer met. can't wait to read ur next update.
btw happy birthday😃

thank u sooo much

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Rani

@-Rani-

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#25

that was nice dear..looking forward to read more..college love stories..hm hm..

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poonam

@P.Kamaljit.Sean

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: -Rani-
that was nice dear..looking forward to read more..college love stories..hm hm..

thank u sooo much
haven't updated in a longtime so will try to update asap
thankz for the lovely comments

Edited by pooji123456789 - 16 years ago

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poonam

@P.Kamaljit.Sean

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: happybrar
awesomeeee
nice ff

continue soon

hey
thankz glad you liked it
will continue soon...........

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Minita

@xxxxminixxxx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

Hey just read ur ff
loved it
both thinkin bout eachother at the same time WOW!!!!!!!!!!!1

👏
continue soon
pm me if u could thnx

~minita ⭐️

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poonam

@P.Kamaljit.Sean

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Posted: 16 years ago

#29

precap:heer walks in to the classroom and is shocked to see...

~Part 3~

heer walks in to the classroom and is shocked to see
prem sitting in the blue chair
heer(thinks in her mind) why prem is sitting right next to where i sit
heer slowly walks up to her desk and take a seat right besides prem
prem turns around and looks at heer
prem: hi heer
heer: hi prem do you have this class?
prem:yes
heer:oh that's mean that we both have the english class in the morning
prem: smiles and thinks in his mind what is wrong with me?
heer: stares right in to the chocalety brown eyes
and so does prem
prem heer starest right in to each other eyes lovingly( eye-lock session)
background music
Pehli Nazar Mein
Kaise Jaado Kar Diya
Tera Ban Baita Hai
Mera Jiya
Jaane Kya Hoga
Kya Hoga Kya Pata
Is Pal Ko Milke
Aa Jee Le Zara
Mein Hoon Yahan
Tu Hai Yahan
Meri Bahon Mein Aa
Aa Bhi Ja
O Jaan-E-Jaan
Dono Jahan
Meri Bahon Mein Aa
Bhool Ja Aa
O Jaan-E-Jaan
Dono Jahan
Meri Bahon Mein Aa
Bhool Ja Aa
mrs.khan(teacher): good morning class
prem heer break out from their beautiful eye-lock-session
heer blushes and says in her mind am in love...
no i can't be i just met him today
heer(in her mind): love at first sight
prem:(in his mind): is it love at first sight
prem(in his mind):i will tell heeer if she feels the same as i am feeling
heer thinks the same thing( i will tell prem if he feels the same as i am feeling
the class bell rings
the students starts to go except prem and heer
heer is packing her books in her red and pink bag
prem ( in his mind): should i tell her my feelings yes or no
or should i wait till i get to know her
ayesha: heeeer
prem: i will tell her tomorrow
ayesha sees prem says hi
heer and ayesha leaves the classroom
prem : no matter what i will tell her how i felt

precap: prem tellls heer..............

please forgive for any mistakes
and the story will moves fast
please comment/criticize

Edited by -Pooji- - 16 years ago