Mere Jeevan Saathi FF PRT17 pg29 sept19 updated - Page 16

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Posted: 17 years ago
Oh poor harman....hope prem and preet somehow help him out....Lallu always had to be an ullu.....DJ is the worst mother on earth...And what is Meher upto?....cant wait for the next part..........
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was really nice..feeling bad for Harmaan-Vishaka..but aakhir kaar DJ is turning Vishaka into a -tive character..I think now even Meher will be heartbroken..come yaar..pls fix everyone soon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
amazing update
wonder what will happen next
do cont soon.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
it was mindblowing :) harman sound pretty cool...poor vishaka..how can her OWN mother do that...prem is the best...so is heet...lallu is never gonna change...not so surprising..meher sounded a lill to me...whats up with her now...
anywyz continue soon :)...loved ur ff...its great!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
i love the cliffhanger .......pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
That was a great update, poor vishaka and Harmant! That DJ is too much, poisioning Vishaka's mind the poor thing! Whoa, that Meher listened to everything that Heer said and didn't want to back out of the marriage! Continue soon!
Love Vibs x
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks for the lovely comments every1 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
luved d update.. veri interesting.. hmmm.. cliffhanger hey?.. lol.. will b waiting for d next update.. continue soon.. sho anxious to find out wat's gunna happen next! =P
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: guju_angel

luved d update.. veri interesting.. hmmm.. cliffhanger hey?.. lol.. will b waiting for d next update.. continue soon.. sho anxious to find out wat's gunna happen next! =P

i am glad u liked the update.... i am anxious too..i wanna find out wat will happen😆😆😆hehe...i need to think and decided how to unfold the story now😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

PART 14 "DO YOU LOVE ME?"

After Prem told all the truth of vishaka and harmant to Heer.Prem spoke to her nicely and explained the whole thing. He said that she should talk to Meher. Heer approached Meher and she was feeling symapthetic towards her sister who was so happy. Meher with a broad smile on her face was talking to her friends. Heer knew that it was very important for Meher to know the truth. Heer said "Meher mujhe tujhse kuch bohat important kehna hai😕" Meher turned around and said "Kya hau di..aap bohat pareshan lag rahi hain...??" Meher said"Paar main aaj bohat khush hoon...aur aap jaanti hai kyun😳😛..." Heer was feeling bad that she had to give her such a bad news😕. Heer said "Meher...Harmant Vishaka se pyaar karta hain..woh tumse shaadi nahin karna chahta... tumhe ees rishte se maana karna hoga.." Heer explained to her the whole situation that was going on. Meher did not seem that shocked, she had a lukewarm expression on her face. Heer said "Tu hi kuch kar sakta hain...tujhe hi lallu chachu se baat karni hogi..." Meher simply said "Main aisa kuch nahin karoongi deede.." Heer was shocked and amazed at her sister. Heer questioned "Kyunn..???!!!" Meher pointed towards lallu and ballu and said "woh dekhiye..woh dono kitne khush hain...mujhe koi haq nahin baanta ki main unse unki khushiyan chinoon.." Heer with concern said "Main samajh sakti hoon meher.... paar agar tu papa ji aur lallu chachu se baat karegi toh woh log zaroor maan jaayenge..kyun ki harmant ne koshish kar li hain par lallu chachu apna waada nahin todna chahte..leken tumhe unhe samajahana hoga ki ye unke bete ki zindagi ka sawal hai..." Meher angrily said "Aur mere zindagi...mera pyaar kuch nahin!!!" Heer was shocked,all this while she tohught that this was an arranged a marriage. Heer said softly "Maatlab tu harmant se...?" Meher said smiling soflty "Pehli nazar mein hi..." Heer said "Leken wohkisi aur se pyaar karta hai... tu uske saath kabhie khushnahin reh payegi!!!" Meher replied "Mujhe mere pyaar paar pura bharosa hai. Heer was getting a little frustarated and could not believe her sister "Meher... ye sirf tera ek tarfa pyaar hai!" Meher angrily said "Mujhe usi pyaar par bharosa hai...aur waise bhi di mera dil eetna bada nahin hai...main apne pyaar ka eetna bada baalidan (sacrifice) nahin de sakti!!!"Heer turned meher around roughly whose back was to heer. Heer frustratedly said "Meher ye teri kaisi zid hai..tu 3 zindgaiyan barbaad kar rahi hai..." Meher calmly said "Leken mujhe aisa nahin lagta...aur waise bhi mujh mein kya kaami..vishaka toh phir bhi aphai---" Heer scremed angrily "Meher!!!"Heer disappointedly said "Maine kabhi socha bhi nahin tha ki tu apne pyaar mein eetna aandhi ho jayegi.."Meher said obssesively "Main apne pyaar ko eetni asani se jaane nahin doongi..." Heer knew that there was no point in talking to Meher, she realized that meher would not understand. Heer stormed off angrily.... While walking off she tohught to herself "Aaabh main kya karoon..kaise meher ko smajaho...lagta hai mujhe aabh papa jii se baat karne hogi..." She went to find Balraaj.Now the party was almost ending,all the guests were leaving. She tohught "saare guests jaane ke baad...mujhe akele mein paapa ji se baat karni hogi..."
Ashlaisha angrily apporached Daljeet and said "UNbelievable mom..ur just unbelievable...aap ne aise ghatiya haarkat kyon ki..woh bhi apni beti ke saath!!!" Daljeet innocenlty said "Arrey meri jhalaan..ye tu kya keh rahi hai..mujhe kcuh samaj mein nahin aa rahha hain.." Ash angrily said in a high voice "Oh mom! Common!!! Eetni bhi bholi maat baniye...main saab jaan chuki hoon...maine aap ki aur vishaka ki baatein sun li thi aur phir aap jaab khud se bhi baat kar rahi thi... kyon mom?? akhir di ne aapka bigada hi kya hai!! pehli baar maine di ko itna khush dekha tha..aur apne! ur disgusting!!"Daljeet roughly turned Ash around holding her hand and said "Main us NRI ko aapna damad nahin ban ne doongi!!kabhie nahin!! haan tujhe toh main hi buri lagti hoon na!! koi aangrezi jahal mere chand jaisey beti se shaddi karein..aise mein haargis nahin hone doongi........arrey beti main vishaka ka bhala chahti hoon..." Ash knew her mom too well to belive her "Oh mom...ye naatak aap kisi aur ke saamne kariye!! Leken main aapni behan ke saath aisa nahin hone doongi... she deserved the best and you know what she is gonna get the best!"
Ash walked up to Vishaka who was standing alone in a corner. Ash said "Di.." Vishaka looked up with her red eyes full of pain"Haan...?" Ash said "Di..aap ko harmant se baat karni chahiye you should -----" Vishaka interrupted Ash and said "Kis baare mein..." Ash said "Di main saabh jaanti hooon..." Vishaka knew that her sister knew everything but she started pretending and demaned "Kya jaanti ho tum...???"Ash said "Di..you love harmant!" Vishaka again pretending "Tumhe misunderstanding huey hai..main aur harmant se pyaar..nahin!!" Ash said "Acha..toh yahi baat aap mere aankhon mein dekh kar kahiye..." Vishaka could never look straight into someone's eyes and lie. Befor Vishaka could respond Ashlaisha said "Nahin bol sakti..aapki aankhen keh rahi hain ki aap harmant se kitna pyaar karti hain!" Vishaka atlast said "Harmant mujh jaisey ladki se kyun pyaar karega..kyun shaadi karega..! after all...." Ash sqeeezed her sister's hand smilied and said "Di...khamiyan(faults) toh haam saabh mein hoti hain na? aur aap ek bohat hi achi eensan hai..." Vishaka looked at Ash and said "Acha..eetni badi kaami(fault/imperfection)..." Ash said "please di..." Vishaka sternly saying "End of discussion" and walked out. Vishaka could no longer lie to her sister anymore. Ash called after he sister "Di..." Now Ash had no idea what to do. She had to do something quick.😕Ash had to tell someone..someone who was very close to Vishaka and she knew that person was Heer!Ash started looking for Heer
Vishaka now had to go talk to Heer. She had to go and lie more😕 Vishaka had heard Prem and her's conversation when Prem told her everything. Vishaka knew that Heer would not keep quiet. Vishaka knew heer too well and she knew that Heer will defintely do something.Heer found Vishaka and confronted her.Vishaka had to lie very confidently to Heer because Heer would completely understand. Heer started reassuring her and said "Don't worry..aabh baas party kahtam hoti hogi..main papa jii se baat karoongi..." Vishaka casually said "Kya baat karoge Heer...?" Heer said "Ki yehi meher aur harmant ka rishta nahin ho sakta kyon ki.. ki tum aur ahrmant ek sure se pyaar karte ho..." Vishaka again casually said " What..tumhe kya lagta hai..ki main aur harmant..no way!" All this lying was hurting Vishaka deep down but she knew she had to do this. Vishaka confidently said "Main Harmant se pyaar nahin karti! Idon;t love him..." Heer was now really confused. Heer had no idea that Vishaka was lying bcoz that's how good she was lying. Vishaka said " Main ahrmant se bilkul pyaar nahin karte..i think use kuch musunderstanding ho gayi hain.." Heer said "Are you sure.." Throught that painful face, Vishaka managed a fake smile "Ofcourse i am sure.." Heer was now really confused. She had to figure this all out. She tohught "Maybe Harmant jsut loved Vishaka but she does not love him. Maybe there is a misunderstadning"
Heer walked into the room where the three brohters were seated. Prem got up when he saw Heer come in and apporached her and softly said "Kya hua...tumne Meher se baat ki??" Heeer knew that what Meher said was not as importand as what Vishaka said. Heer said "Haan..leken maine Vishaka se bhi baat ki..." Harmant jumped into the conversation and said "Kya kaha vishaka ne..?" To him what Vishaka said was wayyy more importannt than what Meher had said. Harmant said "You know what Mujhe hi Vishaka se baat karni hogi..leken jaabh tak bauuji nahin maaneyge..main kya karronnn..." He was hurt,confused and had no idea what would happen. Harmant was about to leave when Heer stopepd him. Heer said "Vishaka ne yeh kaha ki..ki woh ... woh tumse pyaar nahin karte." Harmant felt like someone had pulled the floor from under his feet. He felt like someone had jsut reached into him and ripped his heart out. He was shocked,amazed and most of all HURT deeply. He could not manage to speak. Prem and Preet jsut looked at Harmant sympathetically. Harmant finally managed to gather some words and said "Aisa..aisa..aisa kahan us ne...usne...maatlab...yeh kahan..ki..ki woh mujhse pyaar nahin karti..." He really could not believe it, for some reason he was so ure that she felt the same way about him. He could sense a connection between them. Heer sadly nodded her head.Just then Ashliasha walked in and said "Heer tum yahan ho!! main tumhe kaabh se dhund rahi hoon..di needs you heer...woh mere baat nahin maan rahi hain..." Heer responded "Maine aabhi aabhi us se baat ki" heer told ash all that Vishaka had said about not loving Harmant. Ash was shocked ..she said "Woh jhoot keh rahi hain...mom ne di ko bhaad kaya! aur heer tum toh jaanti ho na ki di baaton mein kitni jaaldi phas jaati hain.. she is so gullible..unhone..." Ashlaisha told preet,prem and harmant and heer everything about daljeet. They were all very shocked. Ash said turning to Harmant "She loves you.." Harmant knew that now no matter what he ahd to talk to Vishaka! He walked out.
Vishaka was walking in the hall when she felt someone pull her into a room. Harmant pulled her tightly against him roughly and passionately😳He was holding her wrist. Vishaka had a frowwn of amazement on her face. Vishaka said "Ye tum kya kar rahe ho? Chodo mujhe...?" Harmant said confidenelty and he meant it "Pehle tumhe mujhe saach kehna hoga.." Harmant asked that question. The question he readed to askk all thi while, and now due to circumstances he had to ask her. He needed to know. He could not rely on the other people. Harmant lightly pushed her against the wall and he stood in front of her, not even an inch away. Vishaka could feel his breath and hear his rapid heartbeats.She finally managed the courage to look up at his passionate and loving eyes whihc tonight demaned an answer. Harmant asked "Kya tum mujh se pyaar kari ho? Do you love me?"
***PRECAP***--- Vishaka looked into those eyes that were full of pain. There was a tear on his cheek. While hodling his one side of the face with one hand and with the other hand she reached to wipe his tear. HE was holding her clsoe to him. He did not want to let go of her, especially after what she had jsut said. he was caressing her cheeks and looking into those hazel eyes which were filled with tears that he had given her. While they were consoling each other..... Balraaj started walking up the stairs and headed tow ards the guest room where Harmant and Vishaka were...

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