Premeer Valentines story to cheer us up! :)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Here goes my creative writing:

It is Valentines day, Prem walks into Heer's room they swing from one side to the next Heer is shy and tries to avoid eye contact with him. Later on Prem bumps into Heer in the house and holds her hand tightly up against the wall and she tells Prem koi dekhlu. Prem tells her that he doesn't care koi bhi ajeh and that he wants to say something to her and then Gaya3 and Lallu walk in and Prem lets go and Heer looks down in shame and Prem smiles and says woh, woh (he smiles with panic) and Heer walks off and he looks at her. Lallu and Gaya3 look at each other and laugh and Gaya3 says to Prem ma samaj gayee holding his face in her hands and Prem smiles and goes off. Later, Prem leaves a package and note outside Heer's room and he knocks on the door and Heer opens the door (prem disappears). She looks down picks up the package and then looks around to see who dropped it off but there is no one ; on the note it says meet me upstairs (from prem) on the balcony and open the package and wear what's inside it. She looks at the package, opening it slowly and it is a red sari with jewellery and bangles. She wears it walks towards the top of the balcony where the balcony is lit with lights and the sky pitch black when you can see the stars, there lies a candle lit dinner table, roses in a circular shape surrounding the table in pots. Heer looks around and walks toward the balcony and looks up at the sky as she waits. Prem comes up behind her and Heer turns around and they gaze into one another's eyes and then she looks down shy and she tries to walk towards the table and he stops her path and she looks up at him again. Music comes on and Prem's hand reaches for Heer's hand and he slowly raises it up to dance with him and their eyes lock and they dance. Prem and Heer stare at each other and finally Heer gives in and puts her face on Prem's face and closes her eyes.

I hope you enjoyed !!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thnx tht cheered me up alot
thank u once more
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aww that was cute....😳
did cheered me up for a while...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aww hahah that was nice 😳
- Deena
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that wass soo cute, your a good writer you should write more :)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lol i sent it to the balaji telefilms e mail ad told them they can use it if they want. hahahha
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That made m feel much better!
?xXx?
Sunayna
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey..that very nice..
my dil goes mmm...mmm..mmm after reading ur creative writing
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awwwww...damnnn datttss soo cutee....
thankss for dizz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very nice plz i want another epi tommorow plz

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