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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am back after long with the story ahead
I am so inspired by Kekta style shows and therefore I have created a Kekta style story ahead for this show. I have made Saachi suffer a lot coz I am so irritated with her.

Please read it .

No no...neither do I want the story to actually become like this.
Here it goes...

  • DV and Saachi reach their fully decorated room at SR.
  • Saachi is all nervous as Dils has told her all how every SR is and being the chaste woman Saachi is, she doesn't want anything with DV.
  • Saachi sleeps while DV still hasn't entered the room.
  • She wakes up in the morning to see DV sleeping on the sofa.
  • She gets up and changes to prepare tea for everybody...leaving DV there.
  • She makes Aadu's favourite milkshake, aaji and naani's favourite tea and poha.
  • DV wakes up and gets ready. He comes down and Saachi asks him what he likes for breakfast.
  • DV starts thinking and Saachi cuts him out saying that she is getting late for office and DV can have what is already made. She will make him something special at dinner.
  • Saachi gets buzy the whole day and disconnects DV's calls as Mr Mehta has come for an order and Saachi's farms are everything to her.
  • DV comes at evening to take Saachi home but she is so buzy to notice him.
  • He calls her name when Saachi is buzy discussing the agenda for tomorrow and waves her staff bye stating that tomorrow she will be office by 7 am as the order is really big.
  • DV makes a face and asks her why she required to attend the office right after marriage, they could have taken a couple of days off.
  • Saachi replies that this is her fathers dream, and can't let it suffer for any thing in life. Nothing is more important than this.
  • DV feels hurt but hides it. He wants to take her out for dinner but she rejects that aaji and naani are alone and she doesn't eats without them.
  • They return home and Saachi again asks everyone what they want to have for dinner. She herself suggests Naani's favourite aloo gobhi and capsicum.
  • DV wanted to say that he doesn't likes capsicum but she never even looks at him for his choice. He keeps mum and goes out to Dils house.
  • Dils asks DV the matter and he says he is only there to take his stuff.
  • Dils brings DV his favourite Rajma chawal and gives him a plateful.
  • DV feels so much more wanted with Dils, he thanks her but doesn't eat saying that he will dine with Saachi.
  • Dils understands and gleefully wishes him good for his married life.
  • DV reaches home and sees everyone waiting for him to have dinner. He feels nice and joyfully tells them that he is hungry.
  • Saachi serves naani aaji and aadu and at the end asks DV also to which he innocently tells her that he doesn't like capsicum.
  • Saachi gets annoyed that he is and always will remain a kid. How can he not tell when she was Cooking dinner and what is like eating something and not eating other things. He should not behave so kiddish.
  • DV takes the plate and serves himself with gobhi aloo and doesn't starts eating. He makes gestures to Saachi to come and have food with him in his plate but Saachi doesn't notices him and sits near aaji and starts eating not even realising that DV is not eating. She finishes and goes rushing to her room saying that she needs to go early to office and will sleep now.
  • DV doesn't eats anything there and goes to Dils house. He asks her if she still has rajma chawal.
  • Dils give him the plate and serves for him. SHe gives him chutney also to add on taste and immediately prepared salad. DV thanks Dils from heart after having food and leaves.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fun reading your post but it seems that DV is the one suffering and NOT Saachi here 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Raleighbcat

Fun reading your post but it seems that DV is the one suffering and NOT Saachi here 😊


Yeah I removed fun from the title and the post as it's not funny at all...I will make her suffer after some more scenes.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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u have imagined a lot...too many fans for kekta in our forum...😉😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hawww vinee...
u destroyed the whole SR fun :'(
saachi cant b that mean nd dv cant let him...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: tinatartari

hawww vinee...

u destroyed the whole SR fun :'(
saachi cant b that mean nd dv cant let him...


I had written this before today's episode and precap.
Aaj to Saachi took a 360 degree turn...
How come she instantly grew so mature?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinee_vinee

I am back after long with the story ahead

I am so inspired by Kekta style shows and therefore I have created a Kekta style story ahead for this show. I have made Saachi suffer a lot coz I am so irritated with her.

Please read it .

No no...neither do I want the story to actually become like this.
Here it goes...

  • DV and Saachi reach their fully decorated room at SR.
  • Saachi is all nervous as Dils has told her all how every SR is and being the chaste woman Saachi is, she doesn't want anything with DV.
  • Saachi sleeps while DV still hasn't entered the room.
  • She wakes up in the morning to see DV sleeping on the sofa.
  • She gets up and changes to prepare tea for everybody...leaving DV there.
  • She makes Aadu's favourite milkshake, aaji and naani's favourite tea and poha.
  • DV wakes up and gets ready. He comes down and Saachi asks him what he likes for breakfast.
  • DV starts thinking and Saachi cuts him out saying that she is getting late for office and DV can have what is already made. She will make him something special at dinner.
  • Saachi gets buzy the whole day and disconnects DV's calls as Mr Mehta has come for an order and Saachi's farms are everything to her.
  • DV comes at evening to take Saachi home but she is so buzy to notice him.
  • He calls her name when Saachi is buzy discussing the agenda for tomorrow and waves her staff bye stating that tomorrow she will be office by 7 am as the order is really big.
  • DV makes a face and asks her why she required to attend the office right after marriage, they could have taken a couple of days off.
  • Saachi replies that this is her fathers dream, and can't let it suffer for any thing in life. Nothing is more important than this.
  • DV feels hurt but hides it. He wants to take her out for dinner but she rejects that aaji and naani are alone and she doesn't eats without them.
  • They return home and Saachi again asks everyone what they want to have for dinner. She herself suggests Naani's favourite aloo gobhi and capsicum.
  • DV wanted to say that he doesn't likes capsicum but she never even looks at him for his choice. He keeps mum and goes out to Dils house.
  • Dils asks DV the matter and he says he is only there to take his stuff.
  • Dils brings DV his favourite Rajma chawal and gives him a plateful.
  • DV feels so much more wanted with Dils, he thanks her but doesn't eat saying that he will dine with Saachi.
  • Dils understands and gleefully wishes him good for his married life.
  • DV reaches home and sees everyone waiting for him to have dinner. He feels nice and joyfully tells them that he is hungry.
  • Saachi serves naani aaji and aadu and at the end asks DV also to which he innocently tells her that he doesn't like capsicum.
  • Saachi gets annoyed that he is and always will remain a kid. How can he not tell when she was Cooking dinner and what is like eating something and not eating other things. He should not behave so kiddish.
  • DV takes the plate and serves himself with gobhi aloo and doesn't starts eating. He makes gestures to Saachi to come and have food with him in his plate but Saachi doesn't notices him and sits near aaji and starts eating not even realising that DV is not eating. She finishes and goes rushing to her room saying that she needs to go early to office and will sleep now.
  • DV doesn't eats anything there and goes to Dils house. He asks her if she still has rajma chawal.
  • Dils give him the plate and serves for him. SHe gives him chutney also to add on taste and immediately prepared salad. DV thanks Dils from heart after having food and leaves.



Oh, this was hilarious!!! I actually won't be surprised if this happens too...

BTW, you seem to have studied EK type serials extremely well.

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