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Posted: 17 years ago
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"The violet sunshine slides through the window panes, reminding me of you my dearest soul. I have tried to not love you, but then my heart does not know no boundaries. Though I say it several times that you are good, it is not your goodness that made me love you. It is you, only you!"

Milind's dry eyes have forgotten even to shed those unbidden tears.

The light of his life is walking by and he knows no way to get her to shine in the darkness of his life.

Life's beautiful jasmines have begin to bloom but he knows no way to make them bloom in his garden.

The fresh dew is glistening in the violet sunshine but he knows no way to make it quench the thirst of his soul.

Until the break of dawn and a new day bring hope sizziling forth!



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Posted: 17 years ago
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kwl. really nice to read! 👏 👏
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👏 👏 👏 WOW, beautiful start.
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Oh that was superb hun do write an ff please I'd love to read your written work. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: pradyam

"The violet sunshine slides through the window panes, reminding me of you my dearest soul. I have tried to not love you, but then my heart does not know no boundaries. Though I say it several times that you are good, it is not your goodness that made me love you. It is you, only you!"

Milind's dry eyes have forgotten even to shed those unbidden tears.

The light of his life is walking by and he knows no way to get her to shine in the darkness of his life.

Life's beautiful jasmines have begin to bloom but he knows no way to make them bloom in his garden.

The fresh dew is glistening in the violet sunshine but he knows no way to make it quench the thirst of his soul.

Until the break of dawn and a new day bring hope sizziling forth!



Splendid👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
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very beautifully written 👏 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ooooooooh.......thank u, thnx to evryone who appreciated 🤗
Edited by pradyam - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That was well written dear. 😊

Welcome to the forum.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: $weet Ema

That was well written dear. 😊

Welcome to the forum.



Thank you so much Ema. I was really scared. This is the first time I wrote a article after a long time and posted.
Edited by pradyam - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thankz for the beautiful peom. U r good as

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