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Posted: 17 years ago
Munee...I remebered to come back 😆 ...though it took me a while...

but what can I say... 😃 Amazing...I loveddddddddd it so much...my fav bit was actually when Saadia ties the rakhi on Milind...

I was also touched by how quickly Ali has accepted Prachi as family. 😊

ahaha...Michi moment on the bike...when she pressed her face into his face and smile... 😳 😳 I was seriously grinning like a maniac...I'm going to make sure not to read it when people are around now... 😆 or else they'll think I've gone bonkers... 😉

I LOVEEEEEEEEEEED Absolutely just adore Prachi and Preeti... 😊 What a beautiful relationship they have.

To be honest, I was a little surprised when Prachi told Milind he looks good when he smiles, but I guess that the time they spent together made her more comfortable around him?

But thank you hun for an awesome awesome update...keep them coming 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
Munee hun,sorry for the delay in commenting hun.

Part 14
Loved the small talk between Milind and Ali.Aww...Ali relating Prachi to his sister Sadia.Prachi hain hi aisi,an adorable sweety pie.The conversation between Ali's mom and Milind was so heartwarming,it brought tears to my eyes.Awww..Preethi baby having a ball of a time durin meal time. Milind and Prachi tucking closer to keep Preethi at bay,chalo kuch tho reason mila to get closer.
OMG yeh kya Milind knew Prachi even before she landed up at his company.This is a big surprise to me.Looked like Inder knew Milind very well.And OMG Milind saw Prachi while she came with her father to the police station!!It's amazing how much faith Inder had in Milind and that he could never be the murderer.You are right hun,my Milli baby would have never done that.The conversation between both of them in the prison was so touching.

Part 15:
Awww...I am touched by Inder's confidence in Milind.Though he knew Milind only for a little while
it's surprising to see the immense faith he had on him.How I wish he was alive to see Milind reach greater heights.
OMG how dare the cops behave like that with my Milli baby.Thank God he confided in Inder about him not being the culprit.
I looved the conversation between them in the prison hun.The dialogues were awesome.
Aww...Ali asking Prachi to tie the Rakhi to him.I am loving the bonding between these two.Ali hun,please try to do something to get these duffers closer soon.
OMG Prachi is scared of sitting on the bike,she is like me then.
"Merey hotey huey bhi?" "he had questioned and she saw the defiant look in his eyes.
That was totally Milind Mishra style.Ok Prachi chalo I know that you are frightened of sitting on the bike like me,but that's ok you need not worry when MM is around.Awww.....the bike ride was 😍😍😍 .
So Preethi is going to stay over at Prachi's place for the night.I am sure she would enjoy it too.I hope OMG finally Prachi ne bata diya Milind ko ki he looks good when he is smiling.I hope he does it more often now,humhara bhi din ban jaayega na.

WOnderful wonderful part hun. 👏 👏 You are being more hitchcocky na by not unravelling the past. 😆 I am dying to know what could have happened.
When you updating next?And you awake hun,sorry for the lamba comments dear.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome FF 👏!
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Posted: 17 years ago
loved part 13 Muneeza, milsi seemed so relaxed round ali's house, he really adores that family and they adore him 😃 its nice to see how easily prachi adjusted to the environment, did milsi's wife ever get on with Ali and his family?

i loved the scene between milsi and Ali's mum, it was so touching, milsi was at his most vulnerable state awwwww. and the cutest part was prachi and milsi sitting close by with preeti in the middle 😳

cant wait to read part 14, i'l definately post my comments soon. thanx for the update 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Sorry Muneeza. I missed the update for so long. But you understand.

oh boy i loved this chapter. Because...of the bike ride...and no not because Prachi and Milind were both close and enjoying it...but because i love bike rides...and i could feel the thrill both of them were probably feelings. Me feeling nostalgic...i miss riding on it. It was beautiful. Thankyou...once again i am reminded of how good you are with painting a perfect picture with your details. Honestly i could see the curizing the empty roads at night and envision their good bye outside her house.

Another moment i loved...was Ali telling Prachi to tie Rakhi and what Prachi felt that moment for Ali and his family...it was beautiful...i don't know how to better explain what i felt but i guess it would do to say that i felt exactly what Prachi felt (i had a tear in my eye too)

As for what Inder did for Milind, i am glad you gave us that explaination. Allows me to respect Inder a lot and also appreciate what Milind must have gone through. Oh poor baby 😭 my heart bleeds for him.

I truly loved this chapter. Thankyou so much. 👏

PS. I won't ask whose blame Milind had taken upon himself as i know eventually you'll reveal it. But i just want to enjoy your FF thoroughly as you give it. Am loving it dear.
Edited by jinc118 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Munee...I remebered to come back 😆 ...though it took me a while...
I'm happy you did hun... 😊
but what can I say... 😃 Amazing...I loveddddddddd it so much...my fav bit was actually when Saadia ties the rakhi on Milind...

I believe Milind to be a very caring and sensitive person but only when he chooses to be so. 😊

I was also touched by how quickly Ali has accepted Prachi as family. 😊

I guess her father's actions levelled her way to his heart, as they say "Like father like daughter."

ahaha...Michi moment on the bike...when she pressed her face into his back and smile... 😳 😳 I was seriously grinning like a maniac...I'm going to make sure not to read it when people are around now... 😆 or else they'll think I've gone bonkers... 😉

😆 That's the only feeling one can have in such perfect a situation, she , him, the loneliness, the proximity it was worth the smile.😊

I LOVEEEEEEEEEEED Absolutely just adore Prachi and Preeti... 😊 What a beautiful relationship they have.

I know they've bonded real well children desire love hun and Preeti is just like the father hungry for genuine sentiments.😊

To be honest, I was a little surprised when Prachi told Milind he looks good when he smiles, but I guess that the time they spent together made her more comfortable around him?

In all honesty I surprised myself but it goes with the flow it's important for the chain of events to follow. Yes she's rather comfortable around him and wants him to be that way too. You can call it an attempt to break the ice.

But thank you hun for an awesome awesome update...keep them coming 😉

I will I'm enjoying writing this a lot. 😊 Thx for the lovely comments.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: madhu_vasireddy

Munee hun,sorry for the delay in commenting hun.

I understand sweety you hardly get time in the office now so no probs wat matters is that you remember to comment on each part, really very encouraging for me.😊

Part 14
Loved the small talk between Milind and Ali.Aww...Ali relating Prachi to his sister Sadia.Prachi hain hi aisi,an adorable sweety pie.The conversation between Ali's mom and Milind was so heartwarming,it brought tears to my eyes.Awww..Preethi baby having a ball of a time durin meal time. Milind and Prachi tucking closer to keep Preethi at bay,chalo kuch tho reason mila to get closer.

Ali and Milsi share a long time friendship which is bound to be tied by deep rooted sentiments hun. As for Prachi he knew her father so was kinda indebted to him for pulling Milsi out of that hell called prison thus the soft spot for her. Same's for Ali's mom they spent quality time together she and Milsi so the feelings are deep rooted. Preeti darling is doing her work just fine of bonding Papa with nanny. 😆


OMG yeh kya Milind knew Prachi even before she landed up at his company.This is a big surprise to me.Looked like Inder knew Milind very well.And OMG Milind saw Prachi while she came with her father to the police station!!It's amazing how much faith Inder had in Milind and that he could never be the murderer.You are right hun,my Milli baby would have never done that.The conversation between both of them in the prison was so touching.

Yes our Milli baby could never kill Inder as I have always believed had an eye for the right thing. In the serial too he never went against Milsi till the Suki Alaap case came up. Then he was forced to choose sides. Prisons can be bad places hun.... Inder was a ray of hope for Milsi there.



Part 15:
Awww...I am touched by Inder's confidence in Milind.Though he knew Milind only for a little while it's surprising to see the immense faith he had on him.How I wish he was alive to see Milind reach greater heights.

If he were alive hun Prachi would never have stepped out of her house. But yes I too feel he should've been there to see them well his soul can now, hope that's consolation enough.


OMG how dare the cops behave like that with my Milli baby.Thank God he confided in Inder about him not being the culprit.
I looved the conversation between them in the prison hun.The dialogues were awesome.

Cops are cops hun they don't care about anyone, thx for liking the dialogues I wanted them to be touching.😊


Aww...Ali asking Prachi to tie the Rakhi to him.I am loving the bonding between these two.Ali hun,please try to do something to get these duffers closer soon.

Yeah he noticed her looking at Milsi and Saadia deeply moved so he thought she should get a chance too... thoughtful of him.


OMG Prachi is scared of sitting on the bike,she is like me then.
"Merey hotey huey bhi?" "he had questioned and she saw the defiant look in his eyes.
That was totally Milind Mishra style.Ok Prachi chalo I know that you are frightened of sitting on the bike like me,but that's ok you need not worry when MM is around.Awww.....the bike ride was 😍😍😍 .
So Preethi is going to stay over at Prachi's place for the night.I am sure she would enjoy it too.I hope OMG finally Prachi ne bata diya Milind ko ki he looks good when he is smiling.I hope he does it more often now,humhara bhi din ban jaayega na.

Prachi is one scared cat, but she has faith in Milsi darling. I'm glad you liked their moment of happiness together. Yes Preeti will be staying over to get familiar with everything... Milsi does look charming wen he smiles.😳

WOnderful wonderful part hun. 👏 👏 You are being more hitchcocky na by not unravelling the past. 😆 I am dying to know what could have happened.
When you updating next?And you awake hun,sorry for the lamba comments dear.

Well I'm trying to keep the mystery alive helps keep the reading interesting . I'll be updating soon. Thx for your in depth analysis on the parts I really like the way you comment covering each and everything. 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jinc118

Sorry Muneeza. I missed the update for so long. But you understand.

I understand sweets no need to clarify anything, I'm just glad you commented.😊

oh boy i loved this chapter. Because...of the bike ride...and no not because Prachi and Milind were both close and enjoying it...but because i love bike rides...and i could feel the thrill both of them were probably feelings. Me feeling nostalgic...i miss riding on it. It was beautiful. Thankyou...once again i am reminded of how good you are with painting a perfect picture with your details. Honestly i could see the curizing the empty roads at night and envision their good bye outside her house.

😊 See hun now you've made me smile, thank you so much for your kind words. I never knew you rode a bike, well if you get the chance do it again. Life is about simple pleasures, and making the most of them. 😊

Another moment i loved...was Ali telling Prachi to tie Rakhi and what Prachi felt that moment for Ali and his family...it was beautiful...i don't know how to better explain what i felt but i guess it would do to say that i felt exactly what Prachi felt (i had a tear in my eye too)

Oh hun I'm all emotional here 😳 Prachi poor soul needs such loving characters though she has her mother and family but we must remember she's lived a sheltered life and her interaction to ppl besides associates and business ppl has been very little. Thus the genuine love Ali's family bore for her pulled at her heart.I'm glad it was relatable. 😊

As for what Inder did for Milind, i am glad you gave us that explaination. Allows me to respect Inder a lot and also appreciate what Milind must have gone through. Oh poor baby 😭 my heart bleeds for him.

I believe without knowing the background sentiments the readers would remain clueless in regards to Inder's actions for Milind.Milsi had some bad days poor soul but now it's time to forget it all. 😊

I truly loved this chapter. Thankyou so much. 👏

Thank you hun for taking out time to read it and then comment. 😊

PS. I won't ask whose blame Milind had taken upon himself as i know eventually you'll reveal it. But i just want to enjoy your FF thoroughly as you give it. Am loving it dear.

Thx for the patience it's a prized asset I tell you especially when you just want to flip on the last page and read if it all turned out well or not. I know the feeling. 😊 Thx once again.

Edited by blind horizon - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
munee waiting for update jaldi karona please. any rommance or michi moments in ur update letme know 😛
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Part 16

As he rode back to his own house Milind had felt a satisfaction etch over him one that was inexplicable yet very much relatable. He admitted to himself that having Prachi around him made him forget his past it did wonders to him. She somehow helped him understand the world in a better way, he wondered how she had come to acquire the mind of a savant in that fragile body of hers. He laughed remembering her fright for the bike ride she looked so cute when her eye lids fluttered in confusion and her smile made the most beautiful dimple on her cheek.

Parking the bike in the garage he had sprinted to his room checking on Baba before retiring to bed. Lying on the master bed he placed his hand on the empty space besides him, he certainly missed Preeti. He wondered how Prachi must be coping with his brat of a daughter in her house. Back at the chawl Premlata was shocked to see Prachi arriving with Preeti that too in the middle of the night she took Preeti from Prachi?s hands as she related the evening?s events to her mother. Premlata had been waiting for Prachi anxiously she usually returned home early but tonight she had been late and she hadn?t called her mother to inform her about her whereabouts either. Bobby had been staying over at a friend?s place his exams had drawn nearer and he had been studying extremely hard to clear all subjects in one go, tough he had thought but not impossible. If he'd been home he certainly would've traced Prachi, Premlata had just been about to go to the shop at the corner to call her at the office when she arrived .

Preeti had instantly taken a liking to Premlata she remained quite sombre as the elder woman changed her and gave her the bottle. Premlata had caressed her cheeks affectionately as she lay between her and Prachi that night. Somehow Preeti had pulled at her heart strings and she felt very much drawn to her. When Prachi had narrated about Preeti?s mother being no more Premlata had been deeply touched, her heart was instantly filled with love and empathy for the little girl. Prachi had been worried about her mother?s reaction to Preeti staying over but her fears had been put to rest when she saw Premlata kiss Preeti lovingly on the forehead as she lay asleep on the bed with her. She had closed her eyes in contentment little did she know that it was short lived as her dreams were yet to haunt her.


Milind had hurriedly gotten ready for office he hoped to escape his father who would inquire about his grand daughter the minute he laid his eyes on him. Milind did not want his father speculating on his relationship with Prachi, ofcourse anyone who?d come to hear of it would be shocked. Ever since Preeti had been born Milind had not left her side even when he went on trips abroad he?d take Preeti with him, being a single parent it caused him sleepless nights and much agony but he had borne it all with patience. And yet he had entrusted her to Prachi someone he had known for just five months. He sometimes reflected on the way Prachi invaded his thoughts, it was as if she had seeped into his system, his day seemed incomplete till he met her or talked to her.

Chiding himself on his obsession with her thoughts he rummaged for a decent shirt through his wardrobe, he found one that went with the suit but it had been kept in a corner of the wardrobe and had wrinkles on it. He didn?t have time if he waited to get it pressed he?d be in big trouble. Putting it on hurriedly he had sprinted down the stairs Ramu Kaka had tried stopping him for breakfast but he had denied the offer. Pulling out his silver Camry on the drive way he had fled through the open gates of his house once outside he had breathed a huge sigh ofrelief...Saved!!! he had thought.

Parking near the chawl he stepped out in the early morning sun ascending the stairs to her house, he?d thought he?d collect them both just to be on the safe side. The door to her house was open he had an excellent view of the inside from his vantage point. Premlata had seated Preeti on the small dining table in the lounge and fed her spoonfuls of rusks dipped in tea. He watched enraptured his daughter who fended breakfast off like a disease was willingly eating the meal. If that was the effect Prachi?s mother had on his daughter he was willing to leave her here for a couple of hours each day.

Premlata had looked up to see him stand motionless in the doorway, ?Arey beta tum. Aao betho na.? "Oh son come in." she had smiled inviting him inside the house. He had stepped in taking a seat beside her, ?Prachi to tayyar ho rahi hai.? "Prachi is getting ready." she had informed trying to keep an untidy Preeti away from him. ?Arey beta uncle key kaprey kharab ho jayeingey.? "Child uncle's clothes will get soiled." She had gently held her by the waist clearing her off the small table. He smiled at her ignorance thanking God Preeti didn?t speak yet, he didn?t want her mother knowing his position in Prachi?s life. She had handed Preeti to Prachi in the room while she bustled around completing her morning chores. ?Nashta kiya tumney?? "Have you had breakfast?" she had asked again, he had answered in the negative.

?Chalo Prachi bhi aa rahi hai saath main ker lena dono, phir office to jaogey hii tum uskey saath.? "Well then have it with Prachi, you'll be accompanying her to the office then won't you?" smiling she had said to him. He watched as she prepared the breakfast with expertise his eyes scanned the premises but she was nowhere to be seen, probably getting ready he thought. He berated himself again why the hell couldn?t he stop thinking of her, this was not good. His gaze shifted back to her mother who now laid breakfast on the table it smelt delicious.

She took a seat next to him pouring tea in the cups from a small kettle when her gaze fell on his shirt, it certainly looked as if he had slept in it. ?Beta tumhari shirt to buri lag rahi hai, press nahin kii thi kiya?? "Son your shirt isn't looking nice didn'y you press it?" ?Time nahin mila" "Didn't have the time to do it." he told her the truth. ?Acha lao main ker deti huun.? "Oh well give it to me then I'll do it." She had held out her hand for him to hand her his shirt. ?Lekin.? "But" He tried protesting how could he tell her that he intended to change it once he reached the office. ?Abhi ho jayegi jab tak tum nashta ker logey, jaldi lao.? "It'll be done before you finish breakfast, now hand it over." She commanded him and he had stood up reluctantly stripping off his shirt he sat there in his vest feeling ridiculous. Why did he do that he asked himself unhappily. She had disappeared in one of the rooms he sat put dazed at his situation. Milind Mishra shirtless that too in his secretary?s house this was the height of insanity.

The door had opened to the other room and Prachi had emerged holding Preeti who looked much civil now, her dress changed and her hair brushed back. She had looked up to see him and then her mouth had opened slightly in amazement her eyes grew a size larger as she noticed his shirt missing. How did he come to be in this position she had no clue she had been busy getting ready when her mother had handed Preeti to her calling her for breakfast. ?Aap? "You" she had managed after what seemed like ages, he stole his gaze away from her face.

She looked simply exquisite in the dress Ali had given her it added to her innocence, the white contrasting with the blues. She wore matching small earrings that dangled from her soft earlobes, her long hair flowed freely and she tucked strands of it behind her ears.Her eyes looked breath taking the kohl neatly lining them, he noticed she looked different today more beautiful he admitted. Either she was unaware of her beauty or she was too modest to acknowledge it he had thought as she pulled out a chair beside him. "Aapki shirt ....." "Your shirt..." her voice trailed off questioningly . He had refrained from answering her and focused his attention to the omelette in front of him, they had dined in silence.Premlata had appeared carrying his shirt neatly pressed and he had donned it gratefully pulling on his coat too. Breakfast over Prachi had picked up Preeti and her bag of accessories kissing her mother on the cheek she had stepped out in the corridor.

He had thanked Premlata for her hospitality and turned to leave when she had called out to him ?Beta shaam ko wappas zarur aana.? "Son come again in the evening." ?Koi kaam hai aapko mujhsey?? "Is there anything you want to get done from me?" he had asked with concern. ?Nahin? "No" she laughed ?Aaj tumhari dost ka janam din hai shaam ko ghar main hii celebrate kareingey tum bhi aa jaana. Zyaada dost to nahin isskey issi liye tum aaogey to issey acha lageyga.? "It's your friend's birthday today we'll celebrate it in the evening at home. She doesn't have much friends she'll like it if you come over." Hmmm so it was her birthday ?Kosish karunga.? "I'll try" He had promised before following Prachi?s foot steps.

"Prachi aunty!" a small voice had squeaked they had turned to find Tina standing in the corridor behind them... "Aunty mumma bula rahi hain aapko" "Aunty my mother is calling you." she had informed her before disappearing in her house again. Casting an apologetic look at Milind she had gone inside to find Krithika pulling at Tina's hair with a brush probably attempting to tame her wild mane. "Prachi acha hua tum aa gayi, der to nahin ho rahi?" "Prachi good thing you came along Ihope you'r not running late." she had asked busily tying Tina's hair with a scrunchie. "Nahin tum kaho kiya kaam tha..." "No tell me what did you call me for" ,Milind had decided to wait for her in the corridor instead of getting burnt in the sultry sun downstairs. He could hear every word that passed between the two, Krithika had noticed Preeti in Prachi's arms and inquired about her, Prachi had informed her that Preeti was her boss's daughter.
"Acha wohi kharoos boss tumhara, uski itni pyaari beti kaisey ho gayi." "Oh that grumpy boss of your's, how did he end up with such a beautiful child."


Krithika had wondered aloud. Prachi's eyes had lowered to the ground laden with guilt she knew Milind was in ear shot distance and could hear everything. "Krithika tum choro na unko..." "Krithika you leave him na." she had tried diverting the conversation. Krithika acted like she choked when Prachi said this "UNKO!!!" she stressed on the word her eyes threatening to pop out of her eye sockets. "Waisey dikhta kaisa hai tumhara boss.... smart, handsome, sexy hai keh nahin?" "Well how does he look like anyways.... Is he smart, handsome and sexy or not?" Prachi had wished she could've vanished in thin air at that moment her cheeks turned a deep shade of scarlet "Jaisey bhi hain merey boss hain tum sey matlab" "He's my boss he can look however he wants to look wat's it with you.." she had hissed how could she forget that he stood outside what if he was listening. "Wah wah...merey boss aiy Prachi sach sach bata love shov to nahin ho gaya tujhey uss sey.... Oho my boss... tell me Prachi have you fallen in love with him or what. Chal Prachi ho gaya tujhey Ishq ka bukhaar ab kiya hoga tera rey... Oh Prachi you've contracted the love fever now wat will become of you." she put her palm to her forehead in perfect filmi style. "Krithika bolo kiya kaam hai nahin to main jaa rahi hun" "Krithika tell me why you called me here else I'm leaving." .The threat had worked and laughing at Prachi she had come to the point "Tumharey bhaiyya ney program banaya hai picnic ka mujh sey kaha hai tumko bhi keh duun, saath chalney key liye." 'Your brother as in my husband has decided to take us all on a picnic and you'r invited. "Magar" "But" Prachi had tried reasoning she really wasn't in the mood to go "Agar magar kuch nahin, chalna hai to chalna hai bas. Main aunty sey puch luungi ab koi bahana nahin chaleyga." "Nothing doing you'r coming with us that's final. I'll get permission from aunty." she had warned Prachi.

Meanwhile Tina and Preeti had struck up a friendship both had found some crayons in a box and were now busy tracing intricate patterns on Krithika's lounge walls. And it had been quite some artistic display as they progressed with it it was only when Prachi had assented to join Krithika's family for the picnic that weekend had she allowed Prachi to leave. Milind had tried to dismiss it as trivial talk but he had heard it all and he couldn't help noticing Prachi's flushed face as she stepped out of Krithika's house. "Sorry aapko meri wajah sey der ho gayi." "I'm sorry you'r late cuz of me." she had apologized which he had waved off with a casual glance at her. "Chalta hai" "It's ok" he had answered as they descended the stairs together.

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Kindly ignore any typos or other mistakes this is the most hurried attempt at any pice of written literature by me....

Edited by blind horizon - 17 years ago

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