MICHI FF : Ajab Si...Last pt pg13...21/4

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey everyone this ff I have written in the KS forum and I thought why not share it with u guys but the characters will be our own Kayamath characters.

This ff will be very different from Kayamath so tell me if u want me to go ahead with it.

So here is the character sketch and if u'll like it I will post the first part ASAP.

AJAB SI…..

Mishra family

Neev Mishra: 32 years old, Milind's elder brother and takes care of Mishra Industries along with Milind. Married to Ayesha and loves her a lot.

Ayesha Shah but now known as Ayesha Mishra : A simple person and a good wife(27years old) ,is very happy with her life as her husband loves her a lot and have a lovely devar like Milind. Now she is pregnant with Neev's first child.

Milind Mishra: 28 years old, loves his bhaiya and bhabhi a lot and also his sister but is very close to to his bhabhi. Helps his bhaiya in business and is very good in what he does. Lovely person and is waiting 4 his one true love. Bobby is his best friend.

Mishraji/Baba : Neev and Milind's father…….head of the family…..everyone respects him

Shah family

Inder Shah : Owner of Shah Industries which is handle by him and his son.

PL Shah : A good mother to her children and always there 4 them.

Bobby Shah(he is elder in my ff) : The elder son of the Shah family. 28 years old and is married to Sukriti. Loves his family a lot and both his sisters and is Milind's best friend.

Ayesha Shah: Second child and married to Neev Mishra

Prachi Shah: The last child of Inder&PL Shah . 24 years old and just finish her studies in business management from London University and due to come back home after studying there for 4 years. During that period she came back only once for her sisters wedding. Loves her family a lot especially her sister as she is not only her sis but also her best friend.

Note: Milind and Prachi didn't meet each other during Neev and Ayesha's wedding cause when the wedding got fixed Milind was in abroad for business and he only came on the wedding day and Prachi went to London the next day itself cause she was having exams but they have heard about each other but never seen their pic before.

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So guys do u want me to continue this ff?

Harpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Hirpreet this FF sounds great!
Would love it if you go ahead with it!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: tweety_me14

Hey Hirpreet this FF sounds great!
Would love it if you go ahead with it!!

Thanx that u like it.....i will post the first part in few more minutes......hope u will like it.

Harpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago
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aree it sounds intresting specially neev and ayesha as milind bhaiya and bhabhi i so like this.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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neev is milsi's older bro...sounds interesting. looking forward to part 1 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Here is the very first part......hope u'll will like it.....enjoy

Part 1

It has been 4 years since Prachi has gone to London to further her studies and now she is going back to her family. She is really eager to meet her family members especially her sister as she heard that her sister is pregnant and she is going to be a massi soon. She didn't tell anyone at home that she is coming back as she wants to give a surprise. Now as she is standing in London airport to catch her plane back to India is really excited. Just as she is turning to go to the terminal to board her plane she bumps into a man.

Ouch……..she screamed as she thought that she is gonna drop back but just on time the stranger she bumped into caught her by her waist. Her face was covered with her hair as she heard the stranger ask in his husky voice "Are u alrite miss". She felt goosebumps in her body as she heard the voice that was so masculine and on top of that his hand on her waist was also making her shiver.

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Milind who was going back to India after his business meeting in London was walking to the terminal when the girl who was standing in front of him turn suddenly and bumped into him and before she could fall he caught her. Concern whether she was alrite or not as he could not see her face, he ask her the question and steadied her to stand straight.

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As the stranger help her to steady her straight, she removed her hair from her face so that she could see his face and answer his question and also apologize. As Milind and Prachi look at each others eyes for the first time, they r mesmerized witch each other that they kept staring at each other and could her this song at the background

Aankhon Mein Teri
Ajab Si Ajab Si Adayein Hai
Hoo Aankhon Mein Teri
Ajab Si Ajab Si Adayein Hai

They r brought back to reality as they hear their flight announcement. Prachi was blushing cause she has never experienced something like this before and on the other hand Milind's condition was also the same.

Prachi quickly said "I'm fine and sorry" and rushed to the terminal to catch her flight while Milind was just kept standing there staring at her retiring back till he realized that he also had a flight to catch and made his way to his plane.

During their journey back, Milind and Prachi kept thinking about the stranger that they bumped into till sleep overcome them.

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Sorry for any mistakes..........pls do comment

Luv

Harpreet

Edited by hipreet - 17 years ago
Shabz. thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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part one was gr8...so its love at first sight for michi, how romantic 😳
thanx
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow I love it thank u very much dear 👏it's looking good already 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i lyke yer FF plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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na-iiccee!! really liked it altho somehow i can't picture Neev as Milind's older brother perhaps coz Shabbir is soo robust while Jay is a lil on the skinny side...haha

ur FF's looking good already!! can't wait for the next update!:D

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