Crumb by Crumb: MP/NA FF Pt5 Pg12 - Page 2

Awww.....a new ff....loved it!! 👏 👏 👏 Plz Continue...

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Oh hun!! didn't realise it was an FF!! but such an intersting concept...please please do continue...I really like the way you intergrated NP friendship/previous love...and Milind...aww she broke his nose!! so cute!!

Please continue...very original! Looking forward to the next part.

thank you, and yea I was sorta hoping to integrate it all together, and it's not a triangle but i did think it was necessary to show that NP were...something. I and want to follow basically the old plotline (kinda)

please continue reading! =)

Originally posted by: panache

Very Nicely written...you have our support...

please do continue...but beware..you better update regularly warna the Michi gang will come after you!! 😆

thank you, and yes if you read I'll continue :)

Originally posted by: crazy_gal8390

hey

please continue soon, it was oh so good.. Dint realise when the post ended..
I really love the way ur juggling time in this..

thank you! thank you for saying "oh so good" because it goes with the "oh so right" in the fic... and i liked that you liked it and please continue reading =)

Originally posted by: shabzc1

gr8 start, please do continue 😊

thank you, and do keep reading

Originally posted by: blind horizon

Hun this is such a cute concept I loved the way she analysed Milind's eyes. Plz continue soon. 😊

thank you. don't worry, she'll analyse more things later...ahem😃

Originally posted by: Charmed...

Candy i swear you always say this at the begining of every ff!😆

I really like your ff. It's really interesting. I really like the way you started off. Please do continue

thank you. please keep reading :)

Originally posted by: Heeba

hey just read the first part...
Like the way ur coming back and forward in time...
Seems interesting....do continue 😊

thank you very much!

Originally posted by: milindkidewani

Awww.....a new ff....loved it!! 👏 👏 👏 Plz Continue...

thank you sweety!

Okay, so first of all thank you to everyone who replied. Hopefully more people will reply as well, and as usual, constructive criticism is welcome. 😊

Anyway, this IS MICHI ff and has Neev in it too because I like Neev and there is no love triangle. The timeline is the same but sometimes I've added/subtracted things from the plot. I know I am juggling back and forth in time but hope you like it! And I like to write subtly and I sometimes write from my own experience which people tend to call harsh, and if you feel that something is harsh or not right please tell me, okay? You'll find if you read carefully that I sometimes use the same words to describe two characters (meaning that I will elaborate later) and I sometimes use the same symbols or motifs for my characters.

Anyway, if you have questions, please ask me and I really hope you like the next part! 😳