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Posted: 17 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: sweety7zzz

heyyy mon amour,
je savait pas ke ma cousine savait ecrire une si belle histoire hein?! 😆 c un peu trop cutee! Merci cherie😛
i loved it...its just beautiful in every way possible! u go gurl 👏 ill call u soon!

Tasnim
xoxox

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Posted: 17 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Charmed...

I LOVED the last 2 parts!Glad u enjoyed it! Neev and Ayesha's reactions were funny! 😆 Can't wait to see Milind's reaction. 😭 that it's going to end.Don't worry, once my midterms are over...I'll start a new one and this time it will be longer😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: panache

Heeba! Hun!

OMG!OMG!OMG! 😲 This is a superb short story...i was thinking of writing something along those lines for my next FF but you've done a brilliant job!

Read the whole story in one go! You write beautifully!Thanks a lot😛 Keep it up!!! 🤗 🤗

It was really a good one! 😳 I'm happy you enjoyed it

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Chapter 6 The unfinished dance

Prachi re-entered the hall, not knowing exactly what she would say to him. As she entered, she saw everyone on the dance floor having a great time. However, her eyes searched for him. She spotted him sitting in front of the bar, having a drink. He seemed lost in his thoughts.

A smile had come across her face as she approached him. He hadn't change a bit. He still looked like the way he did 10 years back. He still had his unruly curly hair. But yes he did have a stubble. It made his look older. However, she thought it looked good on him, gave him a more sexy look.

"Is this seat taken?" she said in her small voice

He knew exactly whose voice it was. As he turned around, he looked at her not saying anything. She sat beside him and stared at him for a while. She could clearly see the pain and the guilt and the love in his eyes. A sudden guilt arose within her as she looked deep in his eyes. He had been all alone all these years, she at least had Diya with her. His share of pain was greater than hers.

She felt nervous all of a sudden. She didn't know how to start or from where to start. She looked down and unconsciously started to play with her fingers. Milind smiled at her, she was nervous. She would always play with her fingers when she was nervous.

He took hold of her hands "Prachi. I'm sor…" But she stopped him from saying anything by putting her hand in front of his lips. If there was someone who needed to say something, it was her. He had said enough today. It was her turn now.

"Milind…" she paused for a while.

"Let the past remain in the past. Just like the time never stops for anyone, like that, the past never stops for anyone. We shouldn't let our past mistakes overshadow our present" she said taking hold of his hand in hers. Feeling his touch relaxed her.

"But…Milind, there is.." before she could finish she felt his lips on hers. He had longed for that kiss for all these years. She was still in the beginning but eventually gave in. As he deepened his kiss, she had automatically put her hands around his neck.


"No buts…and no ifs" he said braking the embrace.
He looked at everyone at the dance floor dancing in couples. And the most amazing part was that the same song that had played 10 years ago during their prom was now playing. It was time to finish the dance they had left unfinished 10 years ago.

As he took her hand he asked "Shall we…" and she smiled at him. She remembered the song as well. And together they walked to dance floor hand in hand.


bin tere kya hai jeena
mere dil ki raani tum
meri khushiyon ka mausam
mere khwaabon ki taaviz
mere sapanon ki tasveer
bin tere kaisi aas
woh jeet ho ya haar
tere sang hai sab kuchh
tu na ho toh bekaar
bin tere kya hai jeena

He had held her close and tight, while her head rested on his chest.

suni khaali raaten
ruthi feeki baaten
har aahat pe chaaukun
tujhko harsu dekhu
tujhko hardam sochu
tujhko har pal chahu
tere bin toh jeevan mera hai intezaar
bin tere kya hai jeena

Dancing in each other arms they finally felt complete.

tere saath jiye jo pal
kuchh unse nahi badhkar
tere khaatir saans main loon
teri khaatir jeeta hoon
marne ki tamanna bhi
tere saath main rakhta hoon
tu hai jeene ki wajah
kar mera aitbaar
bin tere kya hai jeena...


Once the dance was over, they heard a sudden applause. Both of them came out of their world and saw the whole crowd clapping at them. Everyone was happy that the long lost soul mates were finally reunited. They both smiled at everyone and headed towards Neev and Ayesha

"Neev and Ayesha…I don't know how to thank both of you…"said Prachi

"Well…just promise that you are not going to run away again" said Neev smiling at her

This reminded her that she had to leave soon. She said her good-byes and promised to come visit them soon.

As Prachi and Milind were leaving the hall, hand in hand, Neev turned and gave a wicked smile at Ayesha and she knew exactly what he was about to say.

"So, now that I have brought them together, will you be kind enough accept my proposal of being my wife" he said opening his arms.

Ayesha smiled and went and hugged him. She knew that if there was someone who could bring Prachi and Milind together it was him. And he had done it.

Once they were outside, Prachi thought it would be better if she did not tell him about Diya right now. It was her birthday in two days and just like all the other years, she would make this birthday wish come true as well.

"Milind, as much as I want to stay here with you…I have a flight to catch tonight" she said quietly not wanting to break his heart.

"Prachi, stay…" he said taking her hands in his.

She knew it was hard for him to let her go as much as it was hard for her to leave him. It took a while to convince him. But eventually he agreed to the deal. He would let her go tonight but he would join her the following day. This would be their last wait.

He had dropped her to the airport and before leaving he said "I'll be there on Sunday…"

"And I'll be waiting" she replied and headed to the counter

It was Saturday evening when she arrived in London. She had immediately picked up Diya on her way. Once they were home, both mother and daughter were comfortably sitting in Prachi's bedroom. She was going let her daughter know that her father was actually going to come and meet her, and only meet her, he would stay with them forever. She was trying to find the right words to start with.

"Diya…" said Prachi "You know about your birthday…"

"Mama, I'm sorry…that I asked about dad…I didn't want to make you sad it just…" she said and came close to her mom

"No…no beta, I'm sorry that I never told you anything about him…" Prachi said as she hugged her daughter

"But Mama is going to make up to you…I promised you that I would give you whatever you asked for your birthday and I intend to make your wish come true"

It took some time for Diya to understand what her mom was saying. Prachi looked at Diya's confuse looked and said "He is going to come tomorrow"

Diya's face had suddenly brighten up, did her mom just say that her father would come tomorrow. Prachi wanted to give an explication to her daughter, but Diya just didn't care. All that mattered was that her father was finally going to come.

That night, both mom and daughter slept together waiting impatiently for tomorrow.

Everything was ready for Diya's birthday, Prachi thought as she looked at the clock. Only Milind was missing. It was already past 6 pm. He should be here any moment. She was confident that things would turn out right. He would be shocked, maybe even a bit angry but eventually forgive her. It was then that she heard the bell.

"I got lost in London" he said smiling as he entered. It was a small house unlike his mansion but this felt like home he thought.

They were both seated in the living. Prachi wondered where Diya was. She had been excited all day. She was probably peeking from somewhere.

"Milind, the reason I wanted to come here today its because I wanted you to meet someone" she said and continued "But you must understand that whatever I did, was because I thought you didn't…"

"Prachi, I thought we were not going to talk about the past…then why are you bringing it again" he questioned her.

Prachi stood up to face the window…She wouldn't be able to face him and say the truth. Milind immediately sensed the nervousness in her. Seeing her all nervous, made him nervous all of a sudden. He came close to her and put his hand on her shoulders.

"What's the matter Prachi…"

She already started to have tears in her eyes. Milind didn't understand what exactly was going on. Was she not happy?

"Milind, when I left all those years ago, I was… I was pregnant…pregnant with our child" she said slowly

"Milind, I'm sorry…I know I should've told you but…" she tried to explain.

He stood there, with no expression in him. What did she just say? As he tried to figure out all this in his head, she saw a little girl peeking behind the hall wall. That little girl was his daughter, his and hers…it was theirs. He looked at Prachi as his eyes filled with water and back to the little girl.

"Diya" Prachi called

As she took small step towards them, Milind bent down to his knees and opened his arms. Seeing this Diya rushed into her dad arms. He hugged her tight like he had never hugged anyone else. He had a daughter, he just couldn't believe it.

Prachi had kneeled down as well caressing Diya's hair.

"Papa…" said Diya "Promise me that you will never leave me and mama again"

Milind kissed her as tears rolled down his face. But these tears were tears of happiness.

As he hugged Prachi and Diya together, he said " Papa will never leave anyone one you, Never "


Well that was the last chapter of my short story. Epilogue coming up in a few minutes.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Epilogue The Complete Family

One year later

The last one year had been the most magical and perfect year for Milind and Prachi. Not forgetting the one of their daughter also. Life couldn't be any more perfect. They had promised each other that they wouldn't talk about the past. They would live the present fully.

Neev and Ayesha together were taking care of the Milind's business in India. He had opened a new branch here in London. Prachi had quit her job and joined Milind's business; together they had made it successful.

Today was Diya's 10th birthday. Just like the previous year, she wanted to spend the day with her parents. No big parties.

As Milind approached the kitchen, he saw his wife and daughter having a great time decorating the chocolate birthday cake. A smile came across his lips. He couldn't wish for anything more than what he had. His life was finally complete.

"Milind, why are you standing there? Come and help us" said Prachi from the kitchen

"Diya beta, can you get papa's cell phone from the study room" he said giving Prachi a mischievous smile. She knew that smile. He was definitely up to something.

Once Diya left the room, he slowly started to walk towards her with that same smile on his lips. He came closer and closer. "Milind, what… are you doing…Diya ajayegi" she said walking backwards. "Itne jaldi nahin ayegi… remmeber I sent her upstairs" he said and just came closer and closer until she hit the wall. She tried not to look at him, his gaze always made her weak, but he gently lifted her face. As his face came closer to hers, she closed her eyes. But at her surprise, he hadn't kissed her where she expected him to, he rather kissed her cheek and said "Didn't know that chocolate tasted that good" She just looked at him.

"Milind tum bhi na.." she said and tried to walk away when he caught her hand.

"Why sweetheart…were you expecting something else" he said teasingly by pulling her close to him.

"Milind…" she tried to protest but he held her tight.

As he lifted her face to his, Diya's voice came from behind.

"Papa, where did you keep it, I couldn't find" she said putting her arms on her hip.

Milind let go of Prachi and went toward his daughter.

"We will look for it after…Chalo, lets cute the cake" he said picking her in his arms.

Diya cut the cake and handed a piece to both of her parents.

"So…Papa, how do you like the chocolate cake" said Diya smiling at him

"Hmmm…chocolate" he said looking at Prachi "It's good, really good"

"Diya, beta here you go" Prachi said handing her birthday present. It was whole panting kit. Something she wanted for sometime now

"Thank you" she said and hugged her parents.

"But Mama…Papa…can I ask for something else too"

"Anything for my little treasure" said Milind taking her in his arms

"I would like to have….have a little brother or sister" she said quietly. Milind smiled at her and then looked at Prachi while she blushed.

"Beta…for that you will have to wait at least for nine months… " he said giving her kiss

For the rest of the evening, Diya painted with her parents with her new painting kit. Once it was past nine, Milind took a sleepy Diya in his arm to put her in bed.

Prachi stood alone in her balcony when suddenly she felt Milind's arms around her waist. She loved it when he took her in his arms. She always felt protected in them. They stood like that for some time until Prachi took his hands and slid them to her stomach.

"Milind, seven months are enough" she whispered against his ear. He stood there not knowing what she meant. Once it registered in his mind, he immediately turned her to face him.

"Such Prachi…" he said all excited and she simply smiled at him.

He just couldn't believe it. His life couldn't have been any better. He was once again going to become a father. And this time, she would not be all alone; he would be with her all along KAYAMATH TAK

So guys…this was the end of my small Fanfic. Hope you guys all enjoyed it as much as I did writing it.

Take care

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Posted: 17 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: shabzc1

lovely parts Heeba...i love milsi's declaration of love 😳 wonder how he will react to the fact that he has a ten year old daughter.



I had replied to everyone's comment...Don't know how i missed out yourss...Really sorry about that

hope you like that last two parts as well😛
Edited by Heeba - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
Loved the ending Heeba. 😳 It's soooo sweet. Sad that it's over. I will miss reading your ff. Please write another one soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks Heeba.. 👏 👏 👏

I wish Snakeman takes some tips from your FF how to get our Michi Together.. 😡

Looking Forward to another Michi FF.. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Heeba, thank u sooo much for writing this fanfic.part 6 was lovely, michi finally got the chance to finish the unifnished dance 😳 and the epilogue was such a perfect eneding. hope we see more fanfics from u, ur writing is brilliant. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Heeba



I had replied to everyone's comment...Don't know how i missed out yourss...Really sorry about that

hope you like that last two parts as well😛

dont worry heeba, like they say its better late than never😃 thank u once again for a fab fanfic😊

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