FF: Rishtey(MP-NA)- new prt updtd 12/25 new thread - Page 174

Originally posted by: optimist

Well, I have that entire theory in my office PC I think because I cant find it here. It is too long I cant remember the details. The gist of it is Prachi loved Milsi, Milsi loved Prachi but thought he loved Anjali. Prachi does not know that Milsi mistook her for Anjali although she thinks he is unaware of the identity of the girl who wrote him those poems. She was to have revealed her identity to him but the Alaap-Suki affair broke out and things changed forever. I had given a lot of details which I dont remember now. From this update looks like Milsi has kissed Prachi thinking she is Anjali may be in a masquerading dance.

Originally posted by: optimist

OK there are two more possibilities. Maybe he had kissed her in the dark and couldn't see her face or he gave her mouth-to-mouth resuscitation again in the dark after she drowned or something.

Originally posted by: jinc118

Thats a good guess. We'll c. toodoodoo. Will continue in less than a month.😆

Originally posted by: shivgauri

that's pure evil😆
okie i don't know why i have a feeling tht Prachi doesn;t know tht Milind thinks the girl he was in love with is Anjali.. the way Milind decided not to mention that it was Anjali to Prachi somehow i felt like that... so since Anjali is there.. i am guessing Milsi is gonna talk to her abt it, and Anjali onviously wud be clueless and maybe she wud help him solve half the mystery😕😆😆
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Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Did I like it?You can pretty safely assume I did in fact Love it!❤️!! AHHHHHH! You dont understand how good it felt to read the update! It's been ages and the fact that I still get excited to see an update means

1. I'm pretty sad...lol...but you already knew that yes i did.😆😆😆

2. It's a great fic.I think you'r a great friend. 🤗

Now...lets actually get down to it!!! It was very well done!!! I'm a little confused about one thing but I'll wait for the next update to see whether that is cleared. no you must ask me...what if its something i've not noticed and needs to be cleared. Just PM me whatever it is.

It was a cracking opening, that little sequence in the beginning...is it a dream, isn't it a dream? Even I was thinking it was...lol, strangely enough...I thought it was Milind's dream🤣 but dont worry..I know better now. Haha...nah Milind doesn't dream...or rather he doesn't just dream he makes his dreams a reality.😃

My absolute favourite part was when they were talking about Ayesha's pregnancy and Milind went...

"Teri baat toh samajh mein aati hai Ayesha'tu roz kahan milti hai mujhe. Lekin kuch log toh din raat mere saath rehte hue bhi mujhse badi se badi baat chupa jaate hain." I understand you Ayesha..you don't see me so often. But some who were with me day and night have hidden several things from me. He had glared angrily at Prachi who felt like her heart had just leapt into her throat.

That dialogue was excellent I felt...and I also really really appreciated that most if not all the dialogue was in Hindi...the whole thing just flowed better for me that way. And Milind's dialogues were very very good in particular but then again, this update, I udnerstand, was chiefly about his feelings. You know its really for you that i've started to do most of the dialoges (at leas the important ones) in Hindi. I gotta say its a pain but yup it flows better.😃 I like to read it in Hindi better.

The progression from the terrace to the dining hall, to Prachi room was very good and nothing felt forced or out of place but I did feel like it was going a bit fast...perhaps I was just greedy for it to keep going.😃😆
lolz..yes you are greedy. I did cut down tho...if i had done my usual it would have gone to like 8 pages in Word but this was only 5. And i did so cause i was hurrying to finish it. I am in an attempt to cut down on the length of my updates..cause i think it gets a bit much...hard for me to write and for everyone to read.

I really also Like this bit...

Milind had put his hand behind her head and pulled her to him by the neck and now he stood pressing his forehead against hers' "Don't lie to me Prachi" he said grinding every word in his mouth. "Mujhe jhoot bilkul nahi pasand" I don't like lies Prachi and Prachi had tried to push him away but she couldn't. He was too strong and she looked away unable to hide her tears.

I dont mean to paste your entire fic here but soemthing about this update, especially from the confrontation in Prachi's room reminded me of that Chawl scene during the PIM track where Prachi finds Milind in his old house. The circumstances were different but I could imagine Milind grinding the words out and Prachi kinda afraid. ya that was the feeling i wanted to bring. Though i don't know how good i did it for Milind. I think i wanted him a bit angrier...and desperate at the same time. In retrospect i think i should have described Prachi's feelings a bit more. But i didn't want to give too much away either.

The love has been aknowledge...😳😆 well by Milind at least and Prachi...UFF...uss jaise tragic characater maine nahin dekhi...poor poor girl!!! See...you dont udnerstand how I feel like...to me, it must be soemthing really BIG for her to keep herself away from Milind but then again...if I go by the show...even preventable things are able to do that so I diont know what to expect but at the same time am expecting something big.😆 Well i am really hoping you guys will think it a really BIG thing. I am about 80% sure that this is the biggest reason for her to act this way...but there is a 20% doubt that you guys will whack the hell outta me. ok change that to i know i'll be getting whacked regardless.
The only thing I can safely assume is that Prachi is not Married to soemone else...🤣...I still feel stupid oevr that😆 lolzl...yes that was stupid.😆

They kissed before...when, what, how, where!!! In Prachi's dream maybe...ahh is Milind one of them Heroes😃that can enter dreams?...I'm guessing thats too far fetched?...maybe a tad. no no..its not far fetched at all...just in line with alien abduction.😆😆😆 oh you guys have given me so much to laugh about with this update.

They've kissed before (btw...love love loved! how he remembered her kiss from like the briefest of touches, now that is RO-MAN-TIC!)...... haina..😳 i thought so too. but then i thought its a bit ridiculous so i had to keep Milind a bit confused about it. How could he tell from a kiss...
but how...🤔...Like when she was a chashmish? Surely not and surely Prachi and Anjali dont look that much alike so right now, Opti's ideas are looking pretty good to me!😆...am so confused...(still😒)
well why can't Milind kiss a chashmish..whats wrong with a chashmish.😡 I am a chashmish and Milind can very well kiss me when he wants.😳😳😳 Ok on topic...the kiss konfusion will be cleared with the flashback in the next update. Wait karo na plz. Only two weeks. Thats sooner than this update came. I love the guessing game so much. I'll surely miss it when this Fic ends.

But Thank you for the update...Briiiiiiiiiliant!🤗 Thankyou Rimzi for the comments. 🤗 I love that you take the time to tell me about all the details. Now if i can get Ryka to come back and read the updates she missed...i'll have another detailed analysis.😛 Thankyou jaan.

Originally posted by: blackcurrant

Lordy, such intensity and still no big reveal. JC, all sizzle and no steak! 😡 😆 issh i was afraid of that. The reason i actually wanted to write this whole chapter in one go and not in parts but that would have taken waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too long.
Okay, I guess I'm just going to have to be patient. But I still can't help having my questions. So, they kissed but did anything more happen (and yes, I do mean THAT by more)?!! Cos Prachi is positively traumatised about the whole thing. grrr...what u mean. They kissed, yup ...but what else happened (or maybe didn't happend😆) will be in teh very next part. Prachi is definitely under a lot of stress currenly but only because she fears that all she's been hiding will come out in one go, which it will the moment Milind confirms hid doubts... I really had to do it broken up like this cause i just didn't have the time to write the whole thing. Though initially I thought it was perfect that he'd remember the kiss...i then thought it pretty riduculous if he comes to grand conclusions based on that. So something more than just that needs to happen for him to realize the truth....
Since the mystery only gets solved in the very last part of this chapter, just how many parts are there? I have a fear it may be at least 20. 😆and it will be revealed in the next part and not the last😉. ..the last part has something else in store for you guys.😃😛There is only 3 or max 4 parts to this chapter.

Originally posted by: jinc118

and it will be revealed in the next part and not the last😉. ..the last part has something else in store for you guys.😃😛There is only 3 or max 4 parts to this chapter.