FF: Rishtey(MP-NA)- new prt updtd 12/25 new thread - Page 14

Originally posted by: optimist

JC, just read Part II of Chapter 12. Your story is getting more and more intriguing by the minute. A sure fire suspense thriller indeed! 😆 I really do try to solve the suspenses but end up complicating it more.😆So Milsi now has criminal records? What did he do? Assault and battery (of Alaap) ?Pretty much.😆 i didn't feel the need to include that little detail...as in the next part it suggests more clearly that it was the reason why Milind has a criminal record. Looks like Prachi is a divorcee(Your other son-in-law clue). A marriage of compulsion after her father's death that most probably did not last long because Prachi took over the responsibility of raising Ritwik. umm...we'll just have to see. Like i said its a very easy guess on who the other guy is. Suki appears to have lost her sanity as a result of Alaap's betrayal and hence may not have been found fit to raise the kid.yup, anoher detail that is specified in the next part. The kid may have been left in the Shah family's custody because Milsi may be serving a prison sentence. Now that Suki is fit and well she may want her child back. As to Milsi having seen Prachi before, it must be during the court hearing (either the one that charged him with assault or Ritwik's custody case).

Now i can't reveal too much.

Prachi's case for Ritwiki's custody now appears to be weak. A biological mother's right can never be ignored by any court. ahaa...but there is reason for Milsi to worry over the custody battle.😃Wonder what happened to Alaap though, unless Milsi has not already murdered him (which seem unlikely considering Milsi is still a free man). I don't know if i want him alive or dead yet. I haven't decided.😆Looks like a marriage of convenience will be take place between Michi for the sake of Ritwik. we'll seee😉 Your Part III may disprove me yet again. So will wait!

I am posting the next part in a few minutes. Do comment.

Originally posted by: Magno

[quote]She interjected just in time, as she thought Milind was about ready to split Prachi's skull in two.[/quote]

[quote]"But we are not a couple Ayesha, what is wrong with you", came Prachi's dimwitted reply.[/quote]

Hwahwahwa, these lines would surely make me laugh😆. Ahem. 😆😆Me too.😆😆 I think my FF was getting way too serious for my own good..so i decided to induce some humor.😆😆

JC don't worry it's captivating keep the updates coming dear.

But I do really want to know about the whole past of Michi *frowns slightly*Lets c who guesses it first.

Originally posted by: optimist

JC, you outbeat me again! So Suki is still in a state of shock and Milsi wants Ritwik to make her better? Who was taking care of her when he was in Turkey? But I guess my prediction of marriage of convenience for Ritwik and Suki's sake is coming our way! Still confused about Prachi's marital status (single or divorcee?) So he was referring to her manic depressive state after her father's death? Was that why Neev was forced to marry Ayesha instead? Ritwik helped her come out of her depression? Every Chapter of yours raises more questions than it answers. 😕

Originally posted by: panache

JC.....What the heck! 😛 my whole thesis of the next part has gone down the drain now!!! *hitting my forehead* Why did i think that Michi were married!!!*Stomping my foot and walking off* I think i know why you thought that.
But, i loved the unexpected....beautiful JC! Thankyou Ayesha as a character is very nice in your FF..I liked that a lot!

So ayesha is asking Milind and Prachi to adopt rithwick together....Wow! Very nice!
Aage Aage dekho hota hai kya.
Superb! hun! Loved it! So, when is the next part..don't make us wait too long! 😉
I'll try. But i'll be updating only on weekends form now on.😭