FF: Rishtey(MP-NA)- new prt updtd 12/25 new thread - Page 11

Originally posted by: shali

😆😆...

she does....

ohhh on a serios note....you better not turn in a BT creative.....

Ooo Shanta I so miss 'exchanging posts' with yooouuu... Whatever break from Kayamath you did or have planned don't ever do it for long dear.

ooohhhh finaly someone who is missing moi 😃 ...
yaar most off my so called friends 😭 are calling my lazy 😕 .....
dont understand why .....

Originally posted by: shali

ooohhhh finaly someone who is missing moi 😃 ...
yaar most off my so called friends 😭 are calling my lazy 😕 .....
dont understand why .....

Hah I think I have told you before that whenever I don't see you in ED I would be missing you even though I don't say it and I meant what I said. Oh wait maybe I said that to Krishna😃 but anyway the same goes for you and even more. Lazy why are they calling you lazy😡, do tell me the detail. Can't say I'm surprised though🤔. Have to run now, besides JC will come with belans if we continue chatting here. But let's continue later hehehe.

JC......I have just been catching up on the chapters! Fantastic job!! 👏 👏 I love the descriptive method of moving the story forward instead of using the mode of conversations and I think this method really works out for the characters of Neev, Prachi, Milind and to a certain extent to Ayesha too because they all don't like to talk much but believe in action 😛, atleast that is what I felt them to be when I used to watch this show!!

I loved your 'Divine guidance' chapters.......The way you had built up Ayesha, the way you gave her that sophisticated touch through your language, somehow I started to feel she has turned all classy. But the moment she opened her mouth in that chapter, I was shocked with the chawl language 😆! I know you are trying to keep her image intact with the way it is shown in the serial!!!

JC....one request...please give Neev the due importance atleast in the FF. One of the reasons I stopped watching the show was Michi were being given way too much importance and Neev was really pushed off track.....so atleast give him justice in your FF 😆

In all it is an awesome FF and nobody will believe this is yout first attempt at writing....you look everybit a pro to me! 🤗

Originally posted by: pragalbha

JC......I have just been catching up on the chapters! Fantastic job!! 👏 👏 I love the descriptive method of moving the story forward instead of using the mode of conversations and I think this method really works out for the characters of Neev, Prachi, Milind and to a certain extent to Ayesha too because they all don't like to talk much but believe in action 😛, atleast that is what I felt them to be when I used to watch this show!!
Thanx. I think it works for the same reason too but it wasn't why i had started off with the narrative style. Its just easier for me than to write dialogs.😆😆😆

I loved your 'Divine guidance' chapters.......The way you had built up Ayesha, the way you gave her that sophisticated touch through your language, somehow I started to feel she has turned all classy. But the moment she opened her mouth in that chapter, I was shocked with the chawl language 😆! I know you are trying to keep her image intact with the way it is shown in the serial!!!
That was intentional Pragz. Ayesha thoughts are always more beautiful than her speech because this Ayesha is someone who hides her true self from the world. She always tries to present a rude and cruel exterior. So she talks like that even though she doesn't think like that.

JC....one request...please give Neev the due importance atleast in the FF. One of the reasons I stopped watching the show was Michi were being given way too much importance and Neev was really pushed off track.....so atleast give him justice in your FF 😆
I hope i can do justice to all four of my main characters.😕 But this FF is about all four of them and not just about Michi. So Neev will be there, don't worry.😃

In all it is an awesome FF and nobody will believe this is yout first attempt at writing....you look everybit a pro to me! 🤗
Thanx Pragu. It means a lot coming from you, considering that your writing has been my inspiration.😃 This feels like Sana di telling me that my VM is awesome.😛 Thanku.🤗

I am updating the next part soon.

Shweta & Pori: thanx for the encouragement. Hope you like the latest part.

Opti: Ayesha was my fav when she was first introduced. 😭 So i have made her the way i liked her. At least in my FF she will have a dignified role.

Dipsy, Heeba, Charmed and everyone else who was all thrilled about he suspense...how do feel now that you know the boy is Ritwik. Do you feel let down. 😕

Magno you win 👏 I just tried my best to change your mind before letting you know that you were right. 😆 😆 😆

Muneeza & Opti: waiting for your comments.

hey... just read chapter 11 😛 😛 another well written part... as ur first FF i think u r very talented 👏 👏 ... love the way u describe everything

liked the conversation between the sisters...

so the kid is Ritwick...hmmm interesting....

Can't wait for The Meeting
Continue soon

JC.. im loving ur ff mostly because ur story is very different and also with the change in Ayesha's character.. im loving her in ur ff and also not to mention the other character as well.. Prachi and Ayesha's bonding seems intense even though they share somewhat of a cold relation.. u know where Ayesha said "noone can speak the words for u" its soo true, Prachi needed that and her half sister has surel given tht to her and tht line even reminds me of the song Unwritten..newaiz dear, im eagerly waiting for the next part

JC, I was right all along. Did I not say that the child was Ritwik? So I guess Michi split up because of the baby issue (Milsi thinking it is Prachi's). He may have later come to know the truth and now wants to take him away from her. May be Suki wants him back. He is angry because she did not trust him enough to tell the truth and let their marriage break because of his misconception. Loved this Chapter too. Please post your update soon. Eagerly awaiting Michi's meeting.

JC..Very interesting..Rithwick! Kutty is the reason for their split! i thought so too...but on the other hand i thought she had another baby and Milind ddin't know about his child...but very interesting twist...would like to know what happens when Michi meet!

Very nice....and looking forwards to reading what happened when they both met...Definitely, fireworks must have taken place..... 😳