FF: Rishtey(MP-NA)- new prt updtd 12/25 new thread - Page 105

Originally posted by: Heeba

I guess I'm the first one to comment today 😃 yes you are...no one else is online.😆

Thank you for the update...really liked it...thankyou. but you always do don't you😕

You know when i read the last part...I thought somehow Prachi would end up hurting herself while saving Sukriti...but the idea of fire extinguisher never crossed my mind haha..yes i think of practical stuff first 😆😆😆....But glad that both of them are fine... yes they had to be for the next part.😉

My favorite part...is when Milind tries to say something...but the words doesnt seem to come...and how he simply hugs her...LOVED IT...it was really beautifully written... thankyou. Yes duffer is too attached to his sister. He was very overwhelmed by everything and so couldn't say anything and needed a hug.😳 not that Prachi minded so much.😃

Also like the way he talked to her..and how she consoled him... Thankyou. That was an addition because i wanted him to get a bit emotional.

You know what...for some reason I feel that Prachi will never be able to leave Milind and Ritwick...it seems that there is always something holding her back...which is good 😳 😊 Well...no comments on the future of the track. Wait and watch.😃

And coming to the last bit...so ur introducing a new character...wonder who it is going to be... Don't be too surprised by it. I am debating on who it should be really. I have two choices...and can't make up my mind about which one to use.😕 Thats why the character didn't show up yet...or i would have extended the last part to introduce that character. Anywho...both the characters will be equally surprising, i am sure.😆 but the character is not a main part of the story. Just for a little something extra on the side.

THANK YOU SOO MUCH FOR THE UPDATE, really liked it Thanx heeba for the comments. 😃

Originally posted by: azam12neelab

a very nice update!!!!!! i love the idea that you are putting on as prachi can make milis change his decision.!!!! 😃

Originally posted by: panache

hun! i have read it! But will comment in detail later tonite...but just so that you know i really enjoyed this part! 😳

Originally posted by: jinc118

Thanx for letting me know...would have been wondering if you got stuck at work again.🤣

Really funny!😡😆

Originally posted by: panache

Really funny!😡😆

I know.🤗luv ya...will be waiting for your comments.

I know.🤗luv ya...will be waiting for your comments.

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

oh my god.......This is like the bestest ever 😆 ...THANK YOU sooooooo much JC... 🤗Thankyou so much Rima and for commenting too...even tho i am been really bad for the past week. sovvy.😔

***JC...hun...I LOVED this part to the T...it was lovely and the star was Milind...I think now your friend will perhaps have a hard time resisting Mr Mishra...😆😳,i am hoping so too but shes a tuff cookie I simply, loved, LOVED when Milind went to see Sukriti...I commend the way you had him handling the situation and bringing out a smile...That part of Milind is fashioned after a real brother.😊

They way he tries to convey his gratefulness to Prachi was also very good (the hug...😳) ...😊...Prachi response was good too...hehe honestly i didn't know myself how Milind would convey his feelings to Prachi. I kept thinking of the words he would use and then realized that he is not too articulate. He'd probably do something more impulsive...so he did.

I'm wondering if you're going to show how Sukriti grew to become a something more than a statue for her son? I'm assuming not u are assuming right😡😆😆...but it would be nice to see their initial interactions yes but see Sukriti is not the main part of my FF. Neesha and Michi are and to some extent KavyAnjali. Sukriti is there because she is important but not the main character so i'll be focusing less on things revolving around her. But she'll be in the center of things related to Michi in the next few chapters...so therefore the importance is given her....also...when Sukriti does decide to go to college...she'll obviously not be able to take Ritwik with her...it feels like she's running from everything,She is not running and i'll explain her thought process in the next chapter. and rather than helping her gain the courage to face it, Prachi's sort of helping her (Is that a somewhat intrisically selfish response, to keep Ritwik? just wondering)...I can understand what you mean about Fresh start but she'll have to return sometime and what about her child? Sukriti knows she'll return and she does not intend to run away from Ritwik's responsibility. That shows from the fact that she is trying to build a relationship with him. But...i'll explain why she wants to go away in the next chapter...and why its important that she goes away. As for Prachi helping her...there might be the subconscious interest of keeping Ritwik with herself and staying with Milind a little longer but mostly Sukriti has convinced Prachi that this is best for her.

Thank you for the update hun...was nice and long and cant wait for more...😊 I'll update Sunday night for sure.😃