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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: alveera

cute, hot and Greek God, oh i luv this part.
btw, no wonder prachi dreamed abt millind all nite, that's the effect milind has on everyone.
will be waiting for the next part, hope to see alot of milind, missing him. 😛



Thanks so much alveera..

and yeah milind has that effect on all women doesn't he..? except that he doesn't seem to realize it..! lol..!

next part very soon.. and a lot of milind..1
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sns23

well,here i am, and as usual late..turning too much like my namesake in the story... do i even need to say how wonderfully well written this was... love the fact that Prachi has two amazingly supportive friends who would probably move heaven n earth to help her.. which makes this story so unique... not everyone is blessed with such wonderful friends...
N i think that Ayesha should be given a chance.. The poor girl was uprooted from one world to the other.. Agreed that Prachi has been as helpful and kind as she can be with her, but Ayesha also needs to heal and accept things... somethings are better left as they are... and I'm talking about the Ayesha in your story... the one in the show needs to be pushed down a cliff...
Ok, sorry for the little philosophy lesson in the middle of the review..i kinda got deviated..
Coming back to the story, dreams eh... haven't all of us had our fair share of them... especially ones involving a certain someone.. I wonder how are Prachi's were...

Excellent part sis... cant wait for the rest...



Sis you are the only person in the world who would give Ayesha a chance..! lol..!

and no worries about being late.. the fact that you read and post your comments.. well i know how you are.. and this means a lot..( i don't think anyone else would understand what i just wrote but my sis will..!)

and dreams... who've heard of mine haven't you..? lol..! just imagine Prachi's were mine..! lol..!
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Posted: 17 years ago
"While the other two slept peacefully Prachi kept having dreams of the handsome ogre in her office. She woke up in a sweat and cursed Geet."

The highlight I believe. A beautiful part I really love the way Geet and Mru try to make Prachi feel at ease.And I enjoy their chats so just like girls. Ah so Prachi dreaming of Milsi hmmm.Well who wouldn't.Update soon dear it's nice to read such wonderful ideas. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: blind horizon

"While the other two slept peacefully Prachi kept having dreams of the handsome ogre in her office. She woke up in a sweat and cursed Geet."

The highlight I believe. A beautiful part I really love the way Geet and Mru try to make Prachi feel at ease.And I enjoy their chats so just like girls. Ah so Prachi dreaming of Milsi hmmm.Well who wouldn't.Update soon dear it's nice to read such wonderful ideas. 😊



Hey muneeza..

well.. i don't about you all.. but i've had my friends thinking rub off on me like that.. one in particular actually..! lol..!

And prachi dreaming of milsi.. well... its dedicated to all the women who dream of him in real life..!

next part coming soon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
Wow nice part..luved to knw tht Prachi is dreamin abt Milind... 😉 😉 😉 Hey da frndship between Prachi, geet n mru rocks... 😊 😊 😊 eagerly waiting for da next part..plzz continue
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

Wow nice part..luved to knw tht Prachi is dreamin abt Milind... 😉 😉 😉 Hey da frndship between Prachi, geet n mru rocks... 😊 😊 😊 eagerly waiting for da next part..plzz continue



Thank you swetha..

and how could she not dream about milind..! lol.. she's only human after all..!

next part will be up in a couple of hours..!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey guys...

here is this next part.. and this part is for Muneeza..! i couldn't put Milind in black but i hope you like what he is wearing.. lol..!

And also for Mru.. luv ya sis..!

take a read and tell me know what you think.. all your comments really motivate me to write more and more...

Chapter 7

Milind tossed and turned but couldn't get any sleep. He saw the clock and it said 2:30am. Ms.Shah had obviously rattled him more than he realized. He had seen people either put up a fight or beg for his mercy. That was what he'd always encountered. He had never once seen "The Prachi Shah" way. Cool, calm collected, no histrionics, and no rage issues. She obviously was a very intelligent woman. That made her a more dangerous adversary, if she was one. Milind had learnt a long time ago that what you saw wasn't always what you got.

He got out of bed and walked around his bedroom. Pacing always seemed to help him clear his head. But right now he didn't even know why he was so pre occupied.

He got up and decided to work on some of the reports that had been turned in earlier. He walked over to his computer the chill air hitting his bare chest. Somehow he could never sleep in anything but his boxers. There were a dozen pajamas in all different material and all different colors but they were all wasted on him. There was even a pink silk one with bunnies on it that had been a gag gift from the only person who was brave enough to give him one. He smiled thinking of that memory. It had been his birthday and he was in terrible mood about work. His sister had called him in the morning from college and wished him. His father had done the same. But as the day had gone by the significance of the day had also slipped down his list of priorities. His staff was obviously too scared to bring it up. So there he was on his birthday alone in his office. He remembered the times when the entire chawl would get together and celebrate his birthday, almost as if it were a national holiday. But now, surrounded by all the wealth and luxury in the world he was sitting alone in a darkened office.

A knock on his door had shaken him out of his reverie. The sight at the other side of the door had instantly brightened up his night. Standing with a huge chocolate cake and a big gift-wrapped box was the only person in the world who had apparently remembered or cared about his birthday. And the minx had bought him those pink pajamas as a gift. When he had told her that no self-respecting man would wear those she had laughed and said she bought that for him so that he would always laugh when he saw them. She thought he desperately needed to laugh more. She was right.

Coming back to the present, smiling fondly at the memory, he realized that her birthday was coming up as well. He had to shop for her personally, couldn't ask one of his many secretaries to do it. He would get into so much trouble for that. Nobody would believe that the grim and unapproachable Milind Mishra was scared of a 5'4 girl.

Maybe she would have some thoughts about Ms.Shah. But the only problem he wasn't allowed to talk business when she was around. That was the standing rule of their friendship. And although he might make a face sometimes he was grateful for that rule. He was back to being just Milind. He laughed more, teased more, didn't care about how the markets were doing and definitely didn't care about things going on at his many offices. He was back to being Milind from the chawl, carefree, fun loving and biggest challenge in his life was breaking the matki in the jnmashtami festival.

But now he had to deal with Ms.Shah. The woman was definitely intelligent. And the fact that she didn't put a fight only made the situation more intriguing. Was she just pretending to be fine with the take over only to pull some stunt in the future? Her behavior at her office was very peculiar. Far from putting his mind at ease it only made him more suspicious. Somehow he had a feeling that Ms.Shah was going to cause more turmoil in his life.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Gal...i really need to come down to where you are right now and twist your arms to reveal who is the gal who gave him those PJs...LOL 😊

@ if you by any chance have portrayed the gal as you! you better stay hidden..Warna..you are done! Doc!!! you will not be in the hosiptal seeing patients but you will be the patient!!!!.... 😡 🤣

Anyways, superb! the suspense is killing me now! Who's is that gal Dammit!!! 😳
Edited by panache - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi shwetha...looks like you've been busy...not that im complaining. ... went to the first page and noticed the index, thanx, i was going to use it but i couldnt hlp myself and i ended up reading ur fanfic from part 1 😊

chapter 5:

loved chapter 5 and i loved the way Geeet said "Forget that! Was he cute?" prachi didnt answer her but im sure if we were able to answer her we would unanimously say YES! 😆 and it was sweet of Geet to ask if prachi would like her dads help.

poor prachi...looks like both her friends followed their dreams but shes rooted were she is? im glad she realised her dad wasnt perfect and i really hope prachi realises her dream and gets a chance to fulfil it...( which is to fall madly in love with milind and marry him 😳 )

will be back once ive read parts 6 and 7 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: panache

Gal...i really need to come down to where you are right now and twist your arms to reveal who is the gal who gave him those PJs...LOL 😊 i can't tell you that no matter how much you torture me Sangeetha.. lol..!

@ if you by any chance have portrayed the gal as you! you better stay hidden..Warna..you are done! Doc!!! you will not be in the hosiptal seeing patients but you will be the patient!!!!.... 😡 🤣 It could be me.. lol.. Shwetha Milind Mishra..! And that would be totally worth a stay at the hospital.. Milind would take really good care of me..! lol..!

Anyways, superb! the suspense is killing me now! Who's is that gal Dammit!!! 😳



Will probably update sooner than you think...! lol.!

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