Michi FF: It’s in his kiss :ending PG1 - Page 5

that was amazing! :) poor praachi, on most FF's here on the forum she happens to be ostracized. Keep up the good work 'n keep 'em comingg!! awaiting eagerly!

thank you so much for the dedication!! 😳!!
nice story waiting to read more!!
by the way, u r talking as if i came up with the name 😆 , it is the title of a book i read 😳 !!

Originally posted by: shivgauri

thank you so much for the dedication!! 😳!!
nice story waiting to read more!!
by the way, u r talking as if i came up with the name 😆 , it is the title of a book i read 😳 !!

me too....by julia quinn. altho there might be many 'its in his kiss'. she writes historical romances based in england. good stuff mostly. i will definitely recommend her bridgerton series to any of yea. its a seven book series abt 7 siblings :D

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Originally posted by: wande

wow,lovely 👏OMG please do more soon pretty please 😳 😆 😆well don Kat it was......wow I'm loving it already👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼thank u soo much darling 🤗

Aweee u are welcome 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: nihita

comeon kat u r my big sis ....u dont need to bow ur head and besides i adore you n love u....its u who is 2be appreciated not me....well i dont mind getting praises though...kidding 😆

wow!!!!fantabulous...out of the scenario performance of michi...loved their turbulence in their heart...hehe...

cho-chweet!!!!!!!!!!!

love,
neena...

Aweee 🤗🤗🤗....i have more praise sweetie!! for u lol😆

turbulence!! hehe!!😳

Love Kat😳

Originally posted by: $weet Ema

Cat, thank you, what a lovely read 😊 😳

Aweee thank u!!😳

Originally posted by: Magno

Kat welcome to Kayamath forum 😊

At first I must admit I was distracted by typos (sorry I do care about this stuff in FF. Seems like you don't really care and that's fine as well) but then I kept reading and waaah you sure know how to grill the story 😃 Fantastic first part. It even gives me another perspective to how cruel Milind's words to Prachi were (maybe I was too absorbed in his pained looks that I didn't really find it cruel when Shabbir as Milind actually said similar words).

Can't wait to read the second part 😊

Aweee thank u for the kind welcome... typos i know i suck at it!!... when i read back im like heck what happen there... 😕😆...i will correct what i fine😉...

hehe grill... see that the thing i enjoy about penning seeing and discovering the other side of the coin.. but i guess we sometimes dont see a full picture on the screen😉

Originally posted by: sum2005

Kat darling when r u going to update the FF.....just set all of us on loose to think for ourselves what happened afterwards,,,,not fair we had our own wild imaginations...now aaja neeche aaja....and do the honorus for us to read about ur wild imaginations on this couple now. 😳

OMG sum i was thinking many be u would show me ur jalwa!!😆😆😆...here on michi😆

Originally posted by: sailat

that was amazing! :) poor praachi, on most FF's here on the forum she happens to be ostracized. Keep up the good work 'n keep 'em comingg!! awaiting eagerly!

i have not had the pleasure of reading any but if u could pm me with a good read would love too... thank u!😳

Originally posted by: shivgauri

thank you so much for the dedication!! 😳!!
nice story waiting to read more!!
by the way, u r talking as if i came up with the name 😆 , it is the title of a book i read 😳 !!

Anything for u babes... but this is the only one i am writting!!😉...so enjoy!😳

i had the concept but was racking my brain for a title...so i though of pming u as have a ff by the same title on the KAA section... u are my book freak advsior...😆😆

Originally posted by: sailat

me too....by julia quinn. altho there might be many 'its in his kiss'. she writes historical romances based in england. good stuff mostly. i will definitely recommend her bridgerton series to any of yea. its a seven book series abt 7 siblings :D

If only i had time to read...alas with the house chores and work..i only get some free time to pen... *sigh*... cheers

Cheers guys part 2 is up... will update sooon

Please comment

Love Kat😳

Part 2 was fantastic to read! You are excellent! Do write soon...I will be waiting! 😊

OMG why do they have 2 stop?😡I mean when the going was getting all cute and lovely for me😆please next time don't let them stop pls 😳 😆GOD I mean I was like come on let get it on😳and befor I could say one more thing they stop why? 😔 😒please take them back to their bedroom on their bed once again 😍please,o babe what can I say 2 u right now than 2 tell u how much I love u for this lovely update and a job well don that u have don thank u soo much darling ❤️and u Milind dear ur wife dose not want any divorce from u alright she want u not divorce,one more thing babe lovely song for them👍🏼👍🏼love it.

I really enjoyed Part2. 👏 Poor Prachi, Milind is sure sending her some mixed signals. 😊

Hi Kat,

Wonderful update, I loved reading both the parts today.... Wow.... amazing at how you put words together to bring out emotions and body language into every small part....

I could easily imagine, sukriti doing allt he naughty stuff and milind putting hands through his hair and prachi timid ..... and one more thing is seeing Ayesha take care of the family for once was such a nice thing to see..... I would want to see her on-screen do such a thing....

You are an amazing writer....and I think you should write romanitc books..... take my advice and start to write a book.... I would be the first to buy the first copy.....

Loved the update.... Keep it coming.....

Bunny.

ok so i am officially late for work... 😕 😕 😕 ...i was supposed to have left 6min ago...but here i am commenting on your ff... 😆 😆 😆

it was awesome...poor prachi sick but milind taking care of her...haila... 😳 😳 😳 and them sleeping in each others arms, and the kiss...wow 😳 😳 😳 ...you totally rocked that scene 👏 ...beautiful...so wait...ayesha is positive in this ff or what...she doesnt know that p loves m so she wants to bring n back to p's life 😕 😕 😕 ...

cant wait for part 3..hope it comes soon
JAZ

Beautiful part Kat..
Liked Ayesha in this installment.
Milind is very sweet and caring but he shouldnt make Prachi feel rejected any more.
Very nice read. 😃