FF: Is Pal Mein Ishq Hua

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ok i was thinking that i liked every single mp ff and decided to make my own sorry if one part is too long this is my first ff. i had ideas and decided to write it down now so i dont forget hope you enjoy it.

As Prachi awoke she noticed the time 8:30am. She had overslept and no one had woken her up. She quickly gathered her clothes and ran straight to the bathroon to have a shower & then ran downstairs to make breakfast and eat.
She had seen everyone was awake and having breakfast she felt abit embarrased that she had come down late and shly sat down.
As soon as Prachi sat down next to Milind he got up to go to work.
Baba:Milind where are you going so early sit back down and eat with bahu
Milind:Umm Baba i have important work to do so ive got to go to the office early.
Baba:What is so important that you can sit with Prachi and eat.
Milind was about to talk when Prachi said something
Prachi:Baba let him go he doesnt have to eat with me and the work must be very important that he has leave so early.
Baba:Ok Prachi as you say
As Milind was leaving to go he looked at Prachi wondering why did she say that she doesnt care about me she only cares and loves that Neev and he just walked off

Baba had seen Prachi looking very bored and decided to call Milind.
Milind:Hello Baba how comes you phoned me?
Baba:I want you to come home early so you can take bahu out somewhere for dinner.
Milind was shocked and angry thinking Prachi must of put his baba up to this. He didnt want to have dinner with Prachi.
Milind:Umm Baba i cant im stuck in work so sorry.
Baba:I dont want to hear anything just come home early.
Milind:Ok baba i will try.
Milind was stuck with having to have dinner with Prachi, and also alone he had to try and get delayed.
Baba had told Prachi to get ready at night to go out with Milind.
Prachi was happy to hear this and put on her black with blue embroidery on it, clothes with stunny jewellery.
But something was missing and that something was Milind, it was 9:00pm and he still hadnt come.
Baba had phoned Milind many times but couldnt get through.
As everyone went to sleep Prachi was still awake and decided to find Milind even though it was raining heavily.Prachi wasted no time and ran to find him.She went to his office but every light was shut so where could he be.She was really worried now what if something had happened to him.Prachi had no luck of finding him and as she was walking home and car was coming behind Prachi really fast but Prachi hadnt realised this and as she was about to get hit by the car someone had grabbed her by the waist and pulled her to the side and that someone was Milind.
Milind:WHAT WERE YOU DOING TRYING COULDNT YOU SEE THE CAR COMING BEHIND YOU WHAT HAPPENED IF SOMETHING HAPPENED TO YOU ......
Milind was about to say what would happen to him if something happened to Prachi when he stopped, he didnt think she even bothered.
Prachi:Umm i was trying to look for you and i was soo lost in my thoughts i didnt hear the car coming.
Milind:Come on look theres a hotel near he we will ahve to stay the night there as it would be very hard to get home in this weather.
When they go there Milind had asked for 2 separate rooms but they only had one but after convincing the manager if they had another one he decided to take the only room availabe and went with Prachi there.
Prachi had no idea that tonight was gonig to be the best night of her married life.
To be continued....
This was the clothes she was wearing(sorry couldnt get the pic to come up but heres the link i decided to let prachi have a new look and these clothes is very pretty for what is going to be written in the next part) http://i.indiafm.com/img/news/07/oct/aaja1.jpg


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sweet @s candy thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great part
pls cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Good effort hun do continue. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PN - loved it please continue 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awww thnx for the comments after i posted the ff i thought omg what have i done it's not that good but for giving me good comments i am writing the next part
Edited by Prachi&Neev - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey gr8 part..liked it a lot...continue soon...... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Heres the next part you will be happy to hear that ayesha will not ruin our Michi's romantic moments.

As Milind and Prachi were walking to their room an elderly couple had said what a great jodi they make.Milind was about to say something to them bu he didnt he had to controll himself. As they got in Milind had tooken a towel and went to the bathroom to freshen up. He had come out wiping his hair with the towel when he saw Prachi on the bed,her back towards him, trying to tie one of the strings on the back of her clothes, it was the middle one so it was very difficult for her(she is still wearing the ones that she wore when she was waiting for milind.picture is on part 1). Milind had seen Prachi trying many times but didnt succeed, so he decided to help her.He moved closer and put his hands out and just froze there. Then he done something unexpected,he started to untie all of the knots.Prachi had realised and got up.There was one more left to untie when Prachi suddenly turned around and say 1 word
Prachi:Milind...
She was about to say more but Milind had put his finger on her lips ,said shh and turned her back around.
He put her hair onto one side and started to kiss her neck and turned her around and kissed her on the lips.Prachi was shocked he had been so mean to her and now all of a sudden hes doing this.She wanted to say something but she didnt want to ruin this perfect moment or anger him.(You all know what happend they sleep together and all that).

It was morning and Prachi had gotten up to see the time it was 7:00am.She had gotten up to wake Milind up but found he wasnt there.Prachi was scared that he had gone back home and left her here but the she heard a door open and looked behind to see Milind coming into the room.
Milind:Err i went to the clothes store to buy some clothes for us.
He had brought himself a nice black suit for himself and a pretty pink sari for Prachi.
Milind had told Prachi to come to the car when she was ready.When Prachi was wlaking towards the car Milind could see her from the mirror.He couldnt believe how pretty she looked. As she got into the car Milind couldnt stop looking at her.
Prachi:Should we go?
Milind was so distracted by her beauty that he didnt hear what Prachi had just said.
Milind:Huh?
Prachi:I said should we go everyone at hom must be worried about us.
Milind just nodded his head and started the car.
In the car Prachi had been dieing to ask Milind why did he do what happened last night he had always hated her and last night he loved here she was really confused.Suddenly she just blurted it out
Prachi:Milind Whatever happened last night why did you do it if you dont love me.
Milind:WHAT??
Prachi:I meant if you love ayesha why did you spend the night with me.
Milind:IF YOU WANT TO GO BACK TO NEEV JUST GO I KNOW YOU LOVE HIM AND I DONT LOVE AYESHA THE ONLY PERSON I LOVED IS YOU.
Prachi was suprised,Milind had just said he loved her.
Prachi:You love me?
Milind:Yes and the reason i spent the night with you is that reason and because you will soon go off to neev and i will never had a chance to be with you.
Prachi:Milind i dont love Neev i love you.
To be continued
sorry it's a bit rubbish at the end i was not really bothered to do it and i couldnt exit it or i will forget it.Please comment and tell me what you think


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Posted: 17 years ago
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itz a nice part..but i guess u really hurried up for da confession..........but i luved it..Michi together...thts enough...lookin forward for da next part 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thnx for the comments next part will be up 2morz ive got no more skool so that means i can go on the computer anytime to write up the next part 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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keep going - waiting for more
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