FF: Ek Paal... (MP) Prt15 pg28 8/15

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alveera

@alveera

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#41

jaz after reading this, i only have one word to say, "Beautiful".
your potrail of emotions and that bond btw the two is so much showing their true love.
it's superb fantastic and i am waiting for the next part.

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shanta

@shali

Sparkler

Posted: 17 years ago

#42

amazing 👏 👏 👏 ....
just love the way your are portraying the situations...
so they are gone meet...
will be waiting 😃 ...

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*lucky_karen*

@*lucky_karen*

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#43

wow it was spellbinding 😊 ...jaz u develop these charatcers soo well especially the relationship between m and p..it amazing..cant wait for the next part!
great work!

-karen 😉

ps-i could never think of neev doing that but its a very believable aspect of a person's nature, to unite mp theres gotta be a villian 😆

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fatima

@wande

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: candyfloss
sorry i didnt like it...i didnt read completely.is it NP ff??
Next time pls pm me when u right mp ff.
I h8 reading np story..its time wasting.

😆candyfloss dearly so u did not because it's an NP story so far me 2,😳😊but still I think we should wait for sometime it will get better once she put MP together so pls pls put MP's jodi together soon pls and thank u for the story so far😉

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shabo_rani

@shabo_rani

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#45

amazing!!! i cant wait for the next part! 👏 😃

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Pori

@Pori

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#46

Awsomee....plz plz plzzz continue soon

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Monu-SunNaa

@Monu-SunNaa

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#47

Beautiful...I love the way you described the surroundings esp Prachi's bus journey home, Poor Prachi, what a life to be living😭

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sneha

@sneha_17

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#48

wonderful 👏 , great going 😊 , keep it up 👍🏼

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arshia

@arsh1910

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#49

aaaaaah jaz...i lov u .....makin MP meet finally...heheehehe...luvd da parttttt...awesummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...esp neev..i felt like killin him...post soon..luv
Arshia

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rumi.love

@rumi.love

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#50

Jaz..
omg i had not been able to read the earlIer update..
Thanx a lot for the pm..
Well coming back to the story.. It was simply mindblowing..
You know its truelly different.. No one has been able to come up with something so good.. 👏 👏

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