This time - dedicating my poem to Neev.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey all - guess what! I always dedicate my poems to MICHI but this time ..I thought I will dedicate it to Neev. I use to be a big fan of NP jodi too..And I do feel very sorry for Neev - but at the same time I love Michi ! You mught have read this poem on the net.I submitted it to the poetry compition. Hope you will like it...

Let Love Not Die

I have felt Anger,
I have felt Love.
I have felt Misery,
I have felt the Hatred towards me..

I have seeked Love,
I have seeked shelter,
But have been left with lonelyness.

I have been used,
I have been rejected.
But, today as I sit lonely,
I wonder was my feeling for my loved one worth..?
Was I taked for granted?

I have never lacked anything but attention..
I have never felt anything but neglected..

Have never said before "Let Love Not Die"
Today I cry letting you know,
That Your Love for me has Died.

Love to all,

Rumki

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Aww Rumki.. What a lovely poem.. It suits Neev's character very much.. 👏 👏 👏

I love Neev too.. I feel sorry for him every time he comes on screen. i want him to let go of his love for Prachi and move on with his life...

I am really angry with kreatives that are not even giving Neev any decent dialogue 😡..

Please do share more of your creations with us.. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I am very very happy that you liked it..Yeah - me too - I feel very sorry for Neev. Now either Ekta should make Aysha a good girl * miracle* or bring in a new girl with whom Neev can be happy again....I don't want MP to break up and neither do I want to see Neev unhappy..!

Anyway - hope more of you will let me know - if you like my poem..

Love to all,

Rumki.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey all,

I have a reques to make here..Please - do listen to my humble request..

My poetry is my personal possession and I share it with you all because it gives me happiness and I hope you guys like it too..But - pls don't misuse my poems. I dedicate them to charecters as it suits them..Please - don't post it to other websites as your own poems..It's very very unethical..

I hope none of you are misunderstanding me ..

And - do let me know how you like the poems..

Love to all...

Rumki.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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beautiful...suits neev alot...

i just wish creatives makes ayesha good and brings happiness in neev life..i can't see him so sad all the time
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mages

beautiful...suits neev alot...

i just wish creatives makes ayesha good and brings happiness in neev life..i can't see him so sad all the time

Hey mages,

I myself hope that Neev becomes happy soon..he deserves better than this I think..

He looks so helpless at times..I feel very sorry for him..

Yeah - I too hope that the creatives make Aysha a good person now..Put some logic into the show after all..

Love

Rumki

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