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Posted: 18 years ago
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A few lines for us viewers who are addicted , and have stayed addicted... no matter what! 😆

Sunne baitte hai har roz
Ek anokhi prem kahaani...
Dekhne do dilon...
Ki daastaan niraali

Par bhool jaate hai
Kahaani hai wahi puraani...
Jo dohraaye baatein...
Ghisi piti , bematlab aur bemaayani!

Bas dekhkar reh jaate hai...
Ek aadhi adhoori kahaani...
Kyonki twist ke baad baaki ki kahaani...
Bankar rehjaati hai total bakwaas aur bemaayani!

-Sareeta

Sorry ppl had to vent my frustration at the sudden twist in a predictable inane tale of eternal love! Hmph!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 That was for ur writing skills even with so much tension. Thanks for a 30 sec of smile I had reading this poerty 😊 🤗
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ryka

👏 👏 👏 That was for ur writing skills even with so much tension. Thanks for a 30 sec of smile I had reading this poerty 😊 🤗


Aww, thanks Ryka.... I go off on a more lighter vein at times... and mock humor when I cant take the seriousness of a situation!

U smiled reading these lines... now that is so sweet! Am glad , aapka tension 30 sec ke liye hi sahi gayab tho hua!

Writing relieves me of all the overwhelming emotion always! ! So glad you liked it! Humbled deeply!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 Sareeta darling fantastic dear. You turly are a fantastic writer adn also superb Video Mixer.👏

I loved all of then from the instrumental Love Strory, to Baatein and the best and my fav was Far Away, which I beleive suit more so now after his big mistake (that is if he commiteed one).

Him repenting and wanting her back.😉😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awww very well written Sareeta. 👏 👏 I felt like you have exactly read the thoughts out of my mind.You know what an hour ago I was thinking that may be Ekta uses the same blender to churn out all her soaps.No novelty as such.And then we are also the same viewers who expect something different from her all knowing her very well.This was what I felt exactly

Par bhool jaate hai
Kahaani hai wahi puraani...
Jo dohraaye baatein...
Ghisi piti , bematlab aur bemaayani!
Par bhool jaate hai

Thanks for the beautiful post dear. 👏
Madhavi.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: kubare

👏 Sareeta darling fantastic dear. You turly are a fantastic writer adn also superb Video Mixer.👏 Awww, thanks yaar Krishna! Very sweet of you to say so abt vid mixes! Deeply humbled! *bows to applause*

Aur abhi jo likha wo mere ko itna gussa chad raha tha na ... bas aise hi dil se nikal gaya...

Mere ko na, jab gussa aata hai tho aise lines aa jaate hai! 😆

I loved all of then from the instrumental Love Strory, to Baatein and the best and my fav was Far Away, which I beleive suit more so now after his big mistake (that is if he commiteed one). yeah u told me u loved the Far Away mix! I love that song!

Him repenting and wanting her back.😉😃 But I want him to wither and cringe in guilt if he has gone ahead with his ex flame all the way!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhu_vasireddy

Awww very well written Sareeta. 👏 👏 I felt like you have exactly read the thoughts out of my mind.You know what an hour ago I was thinking that may be Ekta uses the same blender to churn out all her soaps.No novelty as such.And then we are also the same viewers who expect something different from her all knowing her very well.This was what I felt exactly

Par bhool jaate hai
Kahaani hai wahi puraani...
Jo dohraaye baatein...
Ghisi piti , bematlab aur bemaayani!
Par bhool jaate hai

Thanks for the beautiful post dear. 👏
Madhavi.



Awww, thanks so much madhavi! I know what u feel yaar! Me feels the same too! But cant help it hun , we are hopelessly addicted! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Oh he will wither and cringe in guilt, will wallow in self pity and what not, thats the Balaji male trend after they committed a grevious crime like having an extra matrieal affair.😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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^^ Krishna see my new post abt Mishraji! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sareeta

^^ Krishna see my new post abt Mishraji! 😆

😆 Yes I did and loved it.😆

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