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Posted: 15 years ago
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congo shravu for a new FF
will there be no epilogue ?

the story seems to be awesome ....... michi seems to be fun loving & adventures ........ neev, ali & milsi are friends ..... prachi's marriage is going to be fixed soon ....... love varun & ayesha character here ...... please give the name with the dialogue so that we can know who's dialogue it is ...... so according to my knowledge there will be three more parts

plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

congo shravu for a new FFthanks a lot
will there be no epilogue ?no

the story seems to be awesome yeah ti will be ....... michi seems to be fun loving & adventures ........ neev, ali & milsi are friends 😃..... prachi's marriage is going to be fixed soon .......yeah love varun & ayesha character here varun's character will be till here. and ayesha's is more and typical ...... please give the name with the dialogue so that we can know who's dialogue it is ok you got confused with the starting one., i'll tell you the one bit ahead on the bridge is Milind and below him is Neev. one watching them is Ali ...... so according to my knowledge there will be three more partstwo more parts

plz continue soon asap

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hay ! its really good waiting to know what will happen next, so continue soon.
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Waiting for your next part. Please update it soon.
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Originally posted by: diyak

Waiting for your next part. Please update it soon.

yeah i will

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Posted: 15 years ago
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very nice start sharvu 👏 👏 awesome ⭐️

I really like this milind and prachi 😆 plz con. soon 😃i'm waiting 😳
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Part-2
Milind, Neev and Ali reached the airport, where their next destination was Singapore. Behind them Prachi and Ayesha also reached the airport. Milind was in very joyful mood as ever. He kicks of the luggage from Neev's trolley and climbs on it, and Neev also joyfully pushes and goes in leaving the entire luggage with Ali who was as usual wore a oversize t-shirt carrying a backpack on his shoulder and the headset around his thin neck. Prachi goes in with her luggage while Ayesha was there still settling the remaining luggage in the trolley. Ali finishes setlling the luggage and make his way inside, at the same Ayesha also reaches the automatic door. Both trolley's dashes together preventing them to more further. "hey", Ali barks at Ayesha irritatedly. "idiot", Ayesha scrowls back at him. Again both goes back at same time and again dashes the their trolley's but this time, one of the bag in Ali's trolley will fall into Ayesha's trolley. Getting bit shocked Ali moves back, giving space to Ayesha to move in. "hey my bag", Ali shouts at her, realizing that their bag was in their trolley. "what, your bag…go to hell", Ayesha shouts back. "hey my bag", he shouts for another time with his choking voice. "get lost", Ayesha shouts harshly and walks away in the direction where Prachi was waiting for her.

"oh! These Malayasain air hoistess are damn beautiful, what say Neev", Milind widened his eyes. "yeah, but I saw more beautiful girls minutes back", Neev replied, still eyeing on the air hoistess. "which one, few of them with long hair and mini-skirts." "yeah", Neev replied. "there are guys, not girls." Milind said laughing at Neev. They see Ali standing there suddenly infront of them with his ever irritating expression on his face. "where were you, anyways give us the tickets, the queue is getting long." Milind said with his bullied voice. "the bag with tickets………….", "lost it??", Neev jumped nervously. "I didn't loose it", Ali continued with a irritation on his face. "while I was coming in, it accidently fell into another passenger's trolley." "then what are you wating for, go and get it." Milind yelled at him impatiently. "no, I won't go. I'll show the passenger , any of you go and get it." Ali said with a scared voice. "see if you won't get that bag from that passenger I will kick you so hard that you will go and fall in Singapore without boarding the flight." Milind yelled at him angrily. "hmmmmha", Ali scaringly and stubbornly denied. "arey we are a lightweight person like you to fall in Singapore directly dear, we atleast need tickets", Milind teased him. Ali gives him an irritating grin and walks slowly. "arey, Ali be fast yaar, if not he will board the flight with our bag." Neev said in a nervous tone. "it's not he. It's she." Ali replies sternly and leaves the place. "poor fellow he doesn't have the difference for girls and guys to be scared", Neev comments softly, while Milind looked at Ali who was walking….

Ali stops at the distance from where Ayesha was standing. Ayesha immediately stands sternly, holding his bag tightly and with a very stern look on her face. Seeing this Ali gets scared and runs away from there. "poor fellow yaar. You should have given him his bag. But you scared him.", Prachi said with a pleasing voice. "hey you don't know about them." Ayesha brushed of the matter. "if you are quiet they will play games with us. If not they'll go away quietly. Let him come again I'll give the bag then." Ali ran towards where Milind and Neev were standing. "hey her looks and posture is aggressive yaar, she may attack", Ali said with a scary voice. "what, no talkings directly attacking." Milind asked him. "yeah, yeah.. let me show you." Ali took a book from his cargos pocket and opened it where a lady's agrresive posture is shown. "she was standing in this posture Milind, which means she is going to attack." Ali showed them. Milind just stretches his arms and sees them. "I built these muscles, not to fight with girls. Hey Neev go with Ali and get the bag." Milind ordered him. Neev saw Milind's personality and then his lean body and again towards Milind. "ok come Ali, we'll go and get the bag, even if have to fight hand to hand we'll fight. Ok", Neev convinced Ali and took him where Ayesha stood with Prachi. But Ali denied to come forward towards Ayesha with Neev, but he stood at a distance. "excuse, our bag is with you. If you give that one we'll go of." Neev asked Ayesha softly. "which bag and who the hell are you."Ayesha barked back. "I think he is his friend." Prachi interrupted Ayesha pointing her eyes towards Ali. "so what he has done a mistake." Ayesha replied. "actually… our bag …..maybe….. he made a mistake." Neev could not take of his eyes from Prachi. He was awestruck by her beauty. "hey Ali say sorry to her." Neev signaled Ali to come over there. "no", Ali said irrtatedly and walked out from there. "give him their bag, Ayesha, it's ok", Prachi whispered gently to her . Ayesha handovered the bag with irritation and disappointment in her face. "thanks and I personally say sorry on behalf of my friend." Neev says bending a little infront of Prachi. "it's not an issue, it's ok", Prachi replies moving bit back. "sorry", Neev again says and walks away. "come we'll go", Prachi pulled Ayesha who looked sternly at her.

"why did you say sorry to her. Go away from here." Ali told Neevv irritadely. "it's ok yaar. Her friend was beautiful" Neev replied trying to convince him. "if you do like that you won't become a good writer. I'm saying." "hey don't tell like that. Forget it." Neev tried to hug Ali. "go away", Ali pushed him back. "ok, I'm sorry. But where is Milind. He's not anywhere seen around." Neev asked him cooly. "he went to coffee bar.", Ali replied with his ever dejected face. "till bar its ok, then whats the matter with coffee." Neev doubts something but Ali shrugs his lean shoulders. Neev finds Milind taking snaps of the air hoistess and he goes near him. "shit Milind you sent me away and taking their photos?" Neev questioned him. But Milind ignores him and continues to take snap of them. "why don't take one snap of me with them, huh", "ok, but it looks as if graphics are done to the photo." Milind teases Neev. "the girl's whose our thinny is scared of, her friend is beautiful yaar." "really", Milind exclaimed "then why did you come here. You should have stayed with her." Milind said busily taking the snaps. "I just wanted to think whether I should love her. That's why I came back here." Neev replied cheerfully. Neev felt someone pulling his jeans, he just turns and sees a kid helding her pumpkin lollipop to him. "arey cho chweet kid and cho chweet lollipop, looking like a toy." Neev commented. A fat guy sitting a bit far a away from them peeped back, but Neev smiled at him, "chweet kid." Neev commented to her father. He just smiles and raises his hand in hi. "give this sweety, I'll show this to my friend and give you,ok." Neev said taking the lollipop towards Milind. He places his hand on Milind's shoulder and puts the lollipop infront of him. "Milind see this, is it nice." Neev asks him. But Milind who was busily taking the snaps, instead of seeing it he takes the whole lollipop with his mouth and gulps down. "you idiot." Neev scrowls at him. "hey you", the kid's father yelled at him, seeing his kid crying. Seeing this Neev jumped from there escaping that kid's fat father.


"hey Milind don't go fast, I'll fall from the trolley." Ali started yelling, when Milind started to push their luggage trolley, with Ali sitting on it. They will come to the place where Neev was gulping beer, peg by peg. "hey Neev, you wanted me take a snap of you." Milind laughed at him. "for what, to put garland on it", Neev shouted back. "I just wanted to show you the lollipop, but instead of seeing it, you gulped it. That fatty man, looking likeone of the tower in the twin towers is behind me now and after this kick this beer is not giving any kick." Milind gave a weird laughed at him. "now you know the meaning of being scared, Neev." Ali asked him seriously. "arey the the size you are scared is different and the king size I'm scared is different." Neev replied gulping down another peg of beer hurriedly. "one beer for my thinny friend." Milind orders the shop owner. "for you then", Neev asks him. "actually the beer is for me, he just smells it." Milind again laughs strangely. "then cancel it." Ali shouts back. "hey let us check in first, Milind I can't carry this luggage all around." He complains. "yeah, me too, can't run hanging this heavy luggage yaar. What is this Milind, our bet was till yesterday, but I'm carrying it till now", Neev also complained. "hey you will loose again and at present you are tried and exhausted." Milind pats on Neev's back. "at any cost I should win today." Neev pulled his sleeves up. "so what's the bet", Milind asked him. But instead Neev started looking here and there. "oh this guy is thinking like Einstein", Ali laughed at Milind's comments. "we'll do onething, we'll climb this one", Milind raised his finger up. "this time no climbing up and down. I have a new scheme." Neev pulls a rose petal and shows Milind. "you showed keep this petal flying and it should not touch the groud till you reach the glass windows there at the corner. But you should not care about any obstructions, not even girls. Ok", "done", Milind accepts the challenge.

Milind starts blowing the petal inorder to keep it flying. He already missed two to three accidents. Prachi was coming in opposite direction, holding the coffee cup in her hand. She was not looking front, but her mind was wandering somewhere. Both of them dashes each other, making Prachi to loose her balance and the coffee cup falling down. But Milind's hands automatically went around her waist preventing her from falling down. But his whole concentration was on keeping the petal in air. He pulls her towards other side still clutching her hand tightly. Again in a second she was on the otherside. In this process the headset that were loosly hanging on his coat get struck up with her skirt. He then clutches his hands round her waist and turns around. He again pulls her the otherside, making difficult for the other person to go forward. But his whole concentration was on the petal. He then lifts her to his shoulder and starts running towards the glass pane blowing the petal. They finally reaches the glass pane. Milind strongly blows at the petal and places Prachi down. Now he sees her face clearly, and starts gazing at her intensely, the petal starts falling down, but he blows it on Prachi's face. She just jerks her head when it fells on her cheek and drops down. Prachi starts feeling uncomfortable with his gazes and starts taking of the headset that got stuck. She takes glances of him while doing so, finally she becomes success in doing so and hands over the set to Milind who was still gazing at her, till she leaves the place. All this was witnessed by Ali and Neev in awe.

Milind slowly walks towards them, still staring at the direction in which Prachi went. "I'm in love." Milind told his friends. "this cannot happen, the girl I told I was thinking to love is this girl only." Neev protested. "you are still thinking, but I decided to love her." Milind said sternly. "one can't love, seeing a girl at a first sight." Neev again protested. "if one can't love at first sight, then there will be no love at first sight concept only." Ali interrupted. "see Ali has brains, that's why he could understand my heart." Milind appreciated Ali. "this love at first sight concept, has derived by some one. I don't believe in that." Neev again protested. "ok, guys I'll keep a test for this." Ali declared. "oh, you have test for this also", Neev asked Ali teasingly. "yeah I have for this also, come and stand beside him." Ali said sternly. Both Milind and Neev stood beside each other, as Ali said. "now concentrate on that girl", Ali instructed. Both looked at the girl, "now close your eyes." "why", Neev protested. "do what I say", Ali barked at him. "now Neev tell me what did you imagined." "I see our girlfriend walking towards her judo friend. That judo fighter had told something to her. Both of them sits down and looked towards us holding her bag tightly. From my estimation on my right there is a trolley moving and above the announcement is made." Neev opened his eyes, "how was it", he asked Ali with a smirk on his face. "that was toooooooo much", Ali replied with an irritation on his face. He then moves towards Milind who still closed his eyes. "Milind now what do you see." "she is walking softly. Except her everything in the surroundings is blur. She walked upto the bench and sat there like a heroine. She then places her leg on another slowly. She then pushes her silky hair back of her ear. She then clutches her bag tightly and I can see her worried expression on her face. She was thinking deeply on something, and her romantic eyes searching here and there for something." Milind completed his imagination. "wow Milind congrats yaar, you are in love." Ali hugs him. Neev gets frustrated and pulls Ali back, "means I have not even passes this test."Ali got scared, "hey keep off him, I should know where that girl is going so we can also go behind her." Milind pulled back Ali. "India, Mumbai", Neev tells feeling excitedly. But Milind glances Neev up and down for a minute. "actually, when I was thinking to love, suddenly my eyes fell on her tickets." Neev says with a smirk on his face. "so go and get the tickets to the flight she's travelling." Milind orders them. "hey think once again, I think Singapore will be better that this girl."Neev asked him. "it's decided that we are going to Mumbai. You both go and get." Milind replied. "you go with him", Neev protested. "you lost the bet", Milind remainded him. "ok, then I'll go. But this bag is not in our bet." Neev throws the bag towards and follows Ali who already made his way towards the ticket counter. "love her till then", Neev yelled teasing Milind and goes away.

" I should not placed this petal bet." Neev murmured angrily at arriving the ticket counter. Infront of them was short, plump man standing there. They both stand very closely to him. But he pushes them back keeping an arm distance between him and them. Seeing his actions the both laughs silently. When that man's turns comes, he was told that he came to wrong counter. Hearing that both of them bursts into laugh, but that man glares at them and goes away. Meanwhile Milind started to follow Prachi everywhere. He stood at the distance and started to stare at her. He followed all through the escalator. He meets his friends there. "sorry yaar we did not get the tickets for the flight which that girl is travelling." Neev put a disappointed look. "hey are you serious or this Ali changed your mind." Milind asked him "he doen't have that much secene to make someone change his mind easily." Ali replied. "see Milind, one can fall in love suddenly but cannot get the tickets in which the girl is traveling." Neev tried to convince Milind. "hey Milind atleast we will go to Singapore, we can see the girls over there." Neev smiled at him. "always want to go behind the girls." Milind raised his bag to hit Neev. "if not take tickets to the very next flight to India." Milind demanded. "hey Milind we'll first check yaar. I can't push this luggage where ever we go", Ali said wearily. "first of all we'll pack of Ali with the luggage. I'm getting pissed of with him." Milind barked impatiently.

Prachi was typing something seriously on her laptop. Ayesha enters the caf and sits beside her. "what are you typing so seriously." Ayesha asks her. "nothing much, the questions I have to ask him when I meet him. I should know his tastes and habits before I like him na" Prachi replies with a sweet smile on her face. "I'll tell you. He will try and fail to impress you." Ayesha said in a teasing manner. Milind and Neev came to the caf and sat back of them silently listening to their conversation. Before Prachi could speak out, Ayesha's cell started ringing. "Did the boarding started" a male voice asked her. "we are boarding the flight at around 5:30, hey mind you if you are late and one more thing if I smell cigarrate in your car see I'm going to kill you", Ayesha taunts the guy on the other end of the phone. Seeing this Prachi pulls the cell from her. "you know her know then why", "she's better than you, she keeps me well informed about everything", says the male voice from other side. " see you didn't tell me that you are coming for your engagement." The voice was so loud that Milind and Neev could hear it. Neev bursted into laugh hearing about the engagement. "not so soon." Prachi replied. "I should meet that guy and like him, then only engagement takes place", "I heard if you like that fellow, enagement takes palce tomorrow", asks the voice. "yeah, if I like him." Prachi replies. "ok, then I heard there is some good uni for MBA in U.S shall I apply for it", but before Prachi could reply to it, Ayesha pulls the cell from her. "can't you talk about this after we reach there." Ayesha shouts and disconnects the cell. Prachi just nods her head seeing Ayesha and goes back to her work. Neev who was listening the conversation bursted out in laughing. Even though Milind was glaring him, he did not care for it but laughed continuosly. Milind pulled him from there angrily and out of the caf. On the way out they meet Ali, who had checked in there luggage and coming back. "anything happened." Ali kept a puzzled look at Neev. "nothing his story took a turn. His love at first sight gone at second sight." NEev said laughing. "what", Ali asked in a puzzled voice. "that girl is going to India to get engaged." Neev said controlling himself. "all girls are like that, no one knows when they will be free and when they will be engaged. They are always confusing to us, buddy." Ali tries to convince Milind while walking towards a corner. Milind just leans on the pillar while Neev and Ali sits down. "hey Milind, I think it's better if you forget about that girl." This makes Milind think over Neev's words. "why should I forget that girl. She has to check in, then do boarding and get into the flight. There will be totally 2hrs for her to be in this airport. In this time, she make like also. I have totally 2hrs with her now. Can I not convince her." Milind said encouraging himself. "see buddy…..you can threaten and convince her in this 2hrs, but cannot love and convince her." Neev tried to convince Milind. "see Neev, if you don't want to help me don't, but don't discourage me." Milind said stubbornly. "I'm not discouraging you. But I'm telling it's impossible." Neev replied. "instead of arguing like can't you both think of the idea which makes this impossinle thin into possible thing", Milind said. Hearing him two of them started thinking along with Milind. Ali started scribbling something seriously on his book. "hey Milind I can't give you any idea but I'll give you an eight segment formula." Ali started suddenly.

"go ahead", Milind gave permission. "actually, a boy to convince a girl it takes minimum 2 years. But here you have less time, so I have shrunk this from 2 years to 2hrs." Milind signals Ali to go ahead. "in first minutes, you should see that girl and both should exchange looks." Both Neev and Milind moves forward. "in second minutes you should somehow start a conversation and develop a friendship with her." "yeah", Milind agreed. "in third fifteen minutes, you should do something and get an impression of a gentleman infront of her." "ok", Milind nods his head. "in fourth fifteen minutes you should take her to coffee", "surely", Milind face starts glowing. "in fifth fifteen minutes, even if you flirt a little she should enjoy your company." "yeah", Milind nods his head in acceptance. "in sixth fifteen minutes, you should see that she comes to you and starts talking with you closely." A small smile crept on Milind's face. "then in seventh segement.. start showing you background more colourful way, making her to think that you are most eligible bachelor", hearing this Milind stood up, with a new spirit of success. "and in last fifteen minutes, see any romantic moment and propse her." Ali finishes his formula and sees at Milind smiling at them. Milind lifts him appreciating his work. "hey he told us what to do, but he didn't tell ow to." Hearing Neev, Milind glares at Ali. "I just showed the way, you people should work it out." Ali backed off scared a bit. "it's ok yaar Neev, after listening to Ali, I feel this possible thing." Milind convinced Neev. "hey Milind run soon. Wastage of a second also is danger to you thriller love story." Neev shouted. "yeah, if any tragedy happens to this thriller love story, the first person to be murdered by me is you Neev", Milind warned him and ran inside hurriedly…….

Hope you enjoy this boring part. Sorry for giving you'll such a long part….



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Posted: 15 years ago
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very nice start sharvu 👏 👏 awesome ⭐️

I really like this milind and prachi 😆 plz con. soon 😃i'm waiting😳no need to wait i updated it

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu sharvu muah 🤗


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