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NosVemos

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Posted: 16 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: layla44
hmm i thout it wont come up soon ..like i thout it will take you another 5 or more hours...after all you were changing wat youve written..kiya pata you mite change again...😆..

heheee.. no I got this angel-demon Prachi idea later..so started writing again.

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NosVemos

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Posted: 16 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: $weet Ema
Great part Shubs.

thanks Yas.

I feel for poor Baba/Mishraji =[, I just loved how he brought the subject of marriage up, but still not forcing his wish to see Milind wedded..instead leaving it up to his son.I liked his attitude here:)

Yep, he is a good father. He wasn't really forcing Suk too.. but Suk was in a terrible situation.

Hope Sukku makes an appearance sometime soon in the FF.

She will at some point later.

Btw..I am dying to know what prachi wrote in the end of her email application for the job..am sure it was something outragerous..lol!!

Hope it won't be a bummer, when I reveal it.. it will be the first thign in the next update.

The demon/Angel Prachi face off was hilarious..this Prachi is completely diff from your other FFs, first the dream with Milind begging her..lol, and how the demon/angel talk. really put a smile on my face.!..

I am glad you smiled.. yes this Prachi is different. Was tired of writing about the sweet girl Prachi.

btw Leonardo Dicaprio used to be my crush too ..mad crush it was..:) I would actually beat my cousins when they would pronounce his surname as capricorn instead of caprio just to irk me..!

Heheee.. AK and LDC were my crushes too.. 😳

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JnJ....resh

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Posted: 16 years ago

#163

Okay Shub this is my Furst comment in this ff........And i m really very sorry dea for not being able to comment on it for so long well read the entire ff in a go.........Okay ur this ff Prachi seems real different so she has crazily fallen for hot Milsi well cant blame her noe can we........And like all girl try's deny her feeling as well poor gurl can understand...Okay why do i hab a feelin that Milsi did notice her wen she noticed him u know just my thought........Okay wat is this big secret God really eager to know cant really wait to read the next part........Well i hope u bring Suk out soon poor gurl must really miss her brother and father.........So glad to read ur ff once again dea was really sad wen u said u would not be writin anymore was real heartbroken but noe hab a gr8 smile thanx dea........👏

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NosVemos

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Posted: 16 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: bidnai
Okay Shub this is my Furst comment in this ff........And i m really very sorry dea for not being able to comment on it for so long well read the entire ff in a go.........Okay ur this ff Prachi seems real different so she has crazily fallen for hot Milsi well cant blame her noe can we........And like all girl try's deny her feeling as well poor gurl can understand...Okay why do i hab a feelin that Milsi did notice her wen she noticed him u know just my thought........Okay wat is this big secret God really eager to know cant really wait to read the next part........Well i hope u bring Suk out soon poor gurl must really miss her brother and father.........So glad to read ur ff once again dea was really sad wen u said u would not be writin anymore was real heartbroken but noe hab a gr8 smile thanx dea........👏

thanks Bidnai. I couldn't resist writing.
Yes this Prachi is a departure from my other Prachis. Michi will meet int he next part again, let's see what happens.

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NosVemos

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Posted: 16 years ago

#165

Part 5

'Aphonia! Inability to speak! Oh No!' Milind had said to himself. It came as a disappointment to him since he had greatly appreciated Prachi's application, and in his mind had almost decided to offer her the job. But he still wondered if there were ways to communicate with her even though she is voiceless. He had replied back to her instantly that he was quite impressed with her application but he is concerned about the means of communication. Prachi had replied back saying he could always communicate with her via writing and her disability shouldn't be coming in the way of her work, which is to come up with novel ideas to sell products. Her email had an undertone of request to give her a chance as well as a determination and confidence that though she was disabled, she was not going to let it win her.

Milind had thought of replying to her the next day. Shutting his laptop down, he went to bed, but he kept on thinking about the projects Prachi had designed. He was even more impressed as he happened to further understand the message in them, when he gave them a second thought. He had immediately thought of Mrs. Kundra, who was the most loyal employee in his office, who also did her job well though she was physically challenged. Somehow he didn't want to let this applicant by the name of Prachi Shah go just because she was aphonic. He quickly got out of the bed, emailed her back asking her if she could come to work from the next Monday. He had also mentioned he would employ her temporarily and if it works out he would offer her a longer contract.

Reading his reply, Prachi couldn't conceal her excitement. She had literally jumped and went out of her room. She had shared her joy with Ramu Kaaka, that she had got a job. Though Raamu Kaaka didn't understand everything about her excitement, he had truly felt happy to see her in merry. Prachi had then called Ayesha detailed her all that she had done in the name of this man called Milind Mishra. She had stressed how she thought pretending to be disable would get her the job in his company. Ayesha was knocked out of her wits to hear Prachi and she had said "I thought you were crazy, Prachi. But this is unbelievable. How on earth you are going to pretend to be mute when you can't keep quite for a minute otherwise. But even before saying that let me ask you, are you in your senses to lie like this and what is the need for you to join a small company like that when you have Maamaji who has been insisting on you joining hands with him? And more than that, why are you doing all this just because one person didn't offer this one job to Soumya, when she herself doesn't want this job anymore?"

"Ayesha, I know this is madness, but I am taking it as a challenge and I am super-excited. Let me do it for the sake of it. I have to prove to that man what a woman can do for the grater cause of womanhood. He is hiring me for two months now and I will work as hard as I can to do my best. If he still fires me, then I will open my mouth and blast on him in front of everyone and that should teach him a lesson. You know at the end of the day, it's a job in an advertising business, something I always wanted to do rather than joining my uncle's hotel business. Moreover, if I so don't like it there, I can quit the job any day."

Ayesha tried to talk sense to Prachi by saying "But Prachi, remember that we are not college students anymore and you can't be playing pranks. I still think you shouldn't be doing it, but I also know no one can stop you when you are charged up. But Prachi, isn't Proteek working there? How will you act in front of him?"

"PROteek, nope. He is in the US now. He quit the job. Soumi's cousin Arnav also left. Don't you remember we talking about it in Soumi's reception dinner? Oh damn, wait a minute.. Oh that handicapped lady in the office.. she has seen me and I have even talked to her. Oh No!!" Prachi had suddenly remembered Mrs. Kundra.

"Then you better give up this plan" said Ayesha who would have been only happy if Prachi stepped back from this venture.

"I think there is a way around it. When that lady saw me, I was in my hippie outlook. I don't think she would recognize me if I change my looks. After all, she only saw me for a few minutes", said Prachi.

Neev was back from his work then and had knocked the door of the temporary accommodation where Ayesha and him stayed in a small town of Sri Lanka.

"Prachi, I think Neev is back. I have to open the door for him. Wait a minute" said Ayesha.

"Hey, wait, I don't want to disturb the newly weds. I will call you later. Give my wishes to Neev. But please don't tell him anything about what I told you. He will give me a huge lecture." Prachi had requested Ayesha.

"Okay I won't tell him. But be careful and don't put yourself into trouble." Ayesha said as she wished Prachi a bye and a good night.

Prachi had waited with bated breath for the Monday morning. She had decided to go for a simple, no make up look for her work. She also decided to go with her spectacles instead of the contact lenses she normally used. She was relieved that when she had met Mrs. Kundra she had worn green contact lenses, which gave her a different look. She had neatly tied her hair unlike the way she would normally let it free. She had bought some pale coloured kurtas, salwar kameezes and sarees, which she chose, as her work attire. She had practised her look a few times over the weekend.

As he had got a confirmation reply from Prachi that she would be coming to work from the Monday morning at 10 am, Milind had informed about her to Mrs. Kundra when he reached the office at 9 am. When a girl dressed in a simple beige salwar kameez entered the office and looked around, Mrs. Kundra had wondered if this was the mute girl Milind was talking about. Prachi had walked towards Mrs. Kundra praying every moment that she doesn't recognize her. Mrs. Kundra had given a close look to Prachi and it seemed to her that she had seen the girl somewhere. However, she had thought her memory was really going downhill with her age, as she couldn't remember the occasion she had met her. Prachi had smiled a tiny smile at her and handed over the print out of the email Milind had sent her regarding the job.

Soon, Mrs. Kundra had called Milind and informed him about Prachi. He had come out of his cabin and walked towards Prachi with a smile that showed in his face though his lips hadn't moved. Prachi had watched him and her legs had started shaking while her heart was beating in double speed.

"Hello Ms. Prachi Shah. Welcome to my company" said Milind extending his hands for a shake hand. Prachi had nervously met her hand and his touch had made her all the more nervous. Milind then had guided her to his cabin and asked her to take a seat.

"Your hearing is fine, right?" Milind asked as he sat in his chair right in front of her. Prachi nodded her head for a yes.

"Good" said Milind and gave her a brief account of his company on how it started, what were the goals and policies. Prachi had known all this as much as him for she had collected information about his company as much as she could. Her nervousness had come down as her mind got involved in the company matters. Milind had then briefed her about her work, introduced her to his staff and also had told them about her speaking inability in a dignified way. Finally he had taken her to her desk and gave her some projects to read through and asked her to give him her opinions by the evening. Prachi had nodded her head for a yes, again.

"Ufff" Prachi had taken the deepest breath she ever took once he was left her on her own. Some part of her brain was cursing her for doing this to herself. She needed to be ever so conscious not to utter a word when she was being introduced to the other staff members. She had relaxed for a few minutes and then started reading the projects. The other employees walking around had given glances towards their new silent colleague but Prachi had avoided much eye contact worried about opening her mouth by chance and she kept her eyes immersed in reading the projects.

By lunch time, she had finished analyzing the projects and also wrote a short summary on them. She had sent an email to Milind with her report. Milind was surprised that the girl had finished her job in half the time he had given her and her report was critical and crisp. She also had suggested some improvisation, most of which Milind thought were worth, while he had his doubts on the last point. He had emailed her back describing her why he didn't agree with that point. Prachi had sent him another email in reply and in 15 minutes they had exchanged 10 emails in total and Milind had come out tired of trying to convince Prachi and wanted to speak it out in front of her. She had got up as she saw him near her desk; he had given her a heated lecture on why he thought her last suggestion wouldn't be worth going ahead.

Though initially Prachi got intimidated at the way Milind was criticizing her last point and so tempted to give him back, her mute act had her keep quiet. That also had made her listen to him carefully and finally she had agreed in her mind half mindedly, that he had a point. When she finally nodded her head in agreement, Milind had sighed and said "Having said all this, your other remarks were precious. I will use them when I edit these projects. Good job." said Milind. Prachi had suddenly felt better as well as confused.

Milind had walked back to his cabin while Prachi sat in her seat. She had looked around and found the other seats empty. Milind had come out again and was going out of the office but came back towards Prachi.

"Did you have your lunch?" asked Milind. Prachi nodded her head in negative.

"1-2 is lunch break. You will not find anyone in the office in this hour except Mrs. Kundra. She brings her food from home. Have you got your food too?" asked Milind and got a negative sign from Prachi.

"Do you want to go with me to the restaurant nearby? We all eat there", said Milind.

Prachi had picked her bag and walked behind him. Milind had ordered his usual thali and asked her what did she want. Prachi had put her finger on the sandwich indicating she would go for that.

"Would that fill your stomach?" remarked Milind asking the waiter to get a sandwich. Prachi had smiled at his question. Soon a colleague had joined their table and Milind got busy conversing with him over another project. While eating her sandwich, Prachi had watched Milind eating superfast and finishing his plate in five minutes while she hadn't even finished two bites. But she had quickly engulfed the rest of her sandwich after that. Before Prachi took out her purse to pay the bill, Milind had paid it already and Prachi didn't know how to stop him remembering her mute status.

Prachi had spent the rest of the day in reading a few other projects handled by the company previously. Milind had left early that day, as he needed to meet with a client in another part of the city. Finishing her work at 5 in the evening, Prachi had walked towards the nearby parking lot, where she had parked her Benz, wondering what would her colleagues think if they see that she drives such an expensive car. She decided to use public transport from the next day.

"Oh My God!" Prachi had screamed as she got inside her car. It had been a torture that she had put herself mute for about 7 hours. But soon, her brain got into analyzing the man because of whom she had taken all this trouble.

'He is not that bad', she had thought. 'But this is only the first day, let me see how it goes in the future. It could be that he has sympathy for my aphonia. But then, he really argued too over that last point. Let me see what happens tomorrow' Prachi had kept herself busy in recalling the events of the day as she drove home. That night when she went to bed, she couldn't help replaying Milind walking towards her, shaking hands with her and him heatedly speaking about the last point and him eating.

In the Mishra house, while having dinner Milind had told his father about the girl he had employed that morning and how he thought she was fit for the job though she was mute. Mishraji had listened calmly while Milind described Prachi excitedly.

Edited by ShubS - 16 years ago

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GoGreen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#166

😆 wah ah prachi kya intellegent move...really i appriciate ur talent .

i am sure Milind will soon be awarded in national level and also been ivited by various plitical parties to cintest in the elctions on their behalf and all popular channels will be itching to make documentries on Milind...or any one will send him to CNN Real Heroes...as see he is on hiring spree all the disable people.

Benz....madam came in benz wearing pale suits....poor Milind when will he realise....he wont never ever...as prachi wont open her mouth...either Prootek or arnav or mallika have to open this puzzle infront of Milind.

Milind seems to be so excited and papa mishra will be thinking hey bagwan why did i ask my son to get married soon seems i have destined goongi bahu...better i enroll myself some amphonic classes so it will be easy to me to communicate with my new bahu when this nalayak marries her and get home...criminal daamad...goongi bahu..kya meri pooti kismat.....

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Niki

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Posted: 16 years ago

#167

'Aphonia' - That's a good one Shubs - she obviously beleives that the chauvinist man will only employ her if she has a disability just like Mrs. Kundra. I totally agree with Ayesha, Prachi is taking on a huge challenge by duping Milind in this way, so now only Ayesha is aware of her plan - not even Neev will know about it. Hahahah poor Mrs. Kundra thinks that her age is affecting her memory- naughty Prachi! Milind as expected is being pretty professional and at the same time polite towards her. Must be so difficult to keep oneself quiet at all times - so much mental concentration would have to be exerted in order to keep up this charade.

Their little disagreement was fun to read and I felt that Prachi deserves losing what seemed like a long and arduous argument - serves her right for being forced to agree with it half - heartedly - I'm sure the debate could have carried on had she been talking.

Shubs if it wasn't for what you had written in the last paragraph I would honestly have thought that perhaps Milind had seen her and had recognised her and had HEARD her talk to Mrs Kundra - and that he was duping her like she was him - but he wouldn't lie to his father about Prachi would he?

A great update and an intriguingly fantastic story Shubs

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Posted: 16 years ago

#168

oh no!!!!! wat has she done?

milind would be highly disappointed when he comes to know of her deception. poor guy already is so impressed with her.

interesting one shubs. thank u. will be looking forward for the next update

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Posted: 16 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Second!!!!

Wow Shubs....Prachi is MUTE!!!! Too funny....poor girl, must have to screem as soon as she gets home...to let out all that pent up voice energy!!!! HEHEHEHEHEH!!😆

Did she do that so Milind will hire her, as she will have a disability and would not be interested in Milind as a man.....was that the thought process behind this? Looking forward to seeing what happens next!!!

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NosVemos

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Posted: 16 years ago

#170

Nargis, Prachi went mute because she thought having disabiity would be the only way Milind will hire her. From what she has heard from Arnav, Mallika and having seen Soumya not getting the job, she has a feelign that he won't employ her if she is a normal female... so she added the sympathy factor! Since he has hired Mrs. Kundra who is disabled, she thought he would hire her too!!

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