Strangers- Complete FF - Pages 136 to 139 - Page 36

thanks Opti for the update.................................Loved it.......so its now Our baby....................Tell me why do i feel that this baby well Live long..........

u dont hv to be rude.i like milind in ur story.i read part 7.its very natural for any pregnant woman to go through pain.if prachi cant take pain then she shudnt hv sex with neev in the first place.
milind is exceptionally too good.i kinda find prachi selfish n opportunistic to take advantage of milind.howcome hving sex with another man she fell inlove with milind so quickly. if she loves him then she shud come out straight n confess her adultery to milind's family.i dont like the fact she's deceiving milind's family.
but since u said its ur milind so carry on with the story.
no doubt milind in ur story is a sweetheart but he's very unlike from kayamath.milind wud hv never accepted pregnant prachi,especially when neev is involved.
dont take it negatively.i like milind in ur story but not prachi.

Originally posted by: Opti

You are free to have your opinion but I think I made the deal clear in the first couple of parts of this story what it is about. If you dont like the concept you need not read it. Prachi has gone through a lot of pain (if you had read Part 7 you would know what I mean). Dont think she has to go through any more. Anyway my Milind is not the usual guys who equate purity of a woman with physical purity alone. He sees Prachi far beyond that what meets the naked eye and he loves what he sees.

Originally posted by: ~AngelCake~

u dont hv to be rude.i like milind in ur story.i read part 7.its very natural for any pregnant woman to go through pain.if prachi cant take pain then she shudnt hv sex with neev in the first place.
milind is exceptionally too good.i kinda find prachi selfish n opportunistic to take advantage of milind.howcome hving sex with another man she fell inlove with milind so quickly. if she loves him then she shud come out straight n confess her adultery to milind's family.i dont like the fact she's deceiving milind's family.
but since u said its ur milind so carry on with the story.
no doubt milind in ur story is a sweetheart but he's very unlike from kayamath.milind wud hv never accepted pregnant prachi,especially when neev is involved.
dont take it negatively.i like milind in ur story but not prachi.

Originally posted by: Isa_de

thanks Opti for the update.................................Loved it.......so its now Our baby....................Tell me why do i feel that this baby well Live long..........

Originally posted by: Opti

Yes, it is 'our baby' now. And yes, this baby will live very long although I will not go that far. Thanks Lizzy.

But Is it a BOY OR GAL???

That will be out in the next update, Lizzy.

hey i'm not telling u to stop writing.continue with ur story.i'm just giving u positive n negative criticism. if u cant take negastive criticism do tell me.i wont write.
i think prachi commited adultery which shudnt be forgiven.if she went trough so much pain then she shud hv held back her dignity n selfrespect.she made herself into this mess.
if it was a serial i wud hv prefered prachi marred an old man like mr. dalal.
milind's status n persona dosnt match upto prachi's situation.
what i've understood prachi has low status n milind has high status n respectable.if she wasnt pregnant that wud hv acceptable if milind fel in love.but here prachi doesnt hv status n she's carrying illegitimate baby.no matter how stressed she is...shudnt hv sex with neev.the excuse prachi gave she was stressed n so she had sex with neev;that's very irrational.hence i dont think prachi is to innocent or very clean heart.
its milind who has a clean heart n innocent who's falling into prachi's trap.
i dont think prachi shud be so dependent on milind.
on the contrary milind also shud see the consequence ahead if he accept illegitimate baby n prachi.
rather than love i sense milind is just too sympathetic towards desperate prachi.
dunno why prachi seem to me very opportunistic n luxury lover.dats why she's falling 4 milind's comfort n wealth.
u mentioned, . Anyway my Milind is not the usual guys who equate purity of a woman with physical purity alone. He sees Prachi far beyond that what meets the naked eye and he loves what he sees.
ive seen nothing extraordinary in prachi accept hving sex with neev n carrying illegitimate baby.she's too weak n fragile.instead she's too occupied herself thinking what will happen when she has to leave milind after the baby is born.so my interpretation is prachi is too selfish who doesnt think what milind will go through if anyone finds out its illegitimate baby.neither she cares milind deserve better woman. she's too preoccupied herself.not even a guilt or shame in her heart after sleeping with neev she's trapping an innocent guy whose million times better than her.she shud feel hesitated n keep low profile rather than mixing too much with milind.
milind also shudnt feel too responsible for this illegitimate baby or prachi.he also hv right to be happy n date other girls.prachi shudnt be his top priority.
nb: sorry i went on n on w/o thinking.dont get too sensitive.i just interpretated my milind n ur prachi what i understood from ur story.i didnt mean to discourage or insult u.
i guess i never liked prachi dats why i never take her in a positive light. i will still read ur story only 4 milind.

Originally posted by: Opti

Apparently you have not read Part 7 fully for I was not discussing the pain of a pregnant woman there but that of a woman with a horrendously painful past where she was taken advantage of by everyone in her life. I was not being rude, only explaining what this story is about. How is it called adultery when she did not even know Milind at the time she got pregnant? I guess this story is too complex. You can like or dislike my characters but I will write this story as I have conceived it in my mind and am not claiming this to be anything like the show. In fact none of my characters are like the show. That is the purpose of the story in the first place.

Angel, you will never understand my Milind or my Prachi. So I wouldn't bother trying to explain. You are free to do what you want- read or not read. That's upto you.

That was a sweet update. My sister had told me she felt like she saw some other world and came back when she delivered her first baby. I guess the pain is one hell of an experience. Loved Rehana's "gaalis"..

Milind is eagerly waiting for the baby and his relationship with Prachi to solidify. That scares me.. It might not be all good for him after the baby birth as I feel there will be trouble coming. Guess it would be Neev.

But tell me if Neev is a good guy or a bad guy? I mean what if he was threatened or made to believe something that forced him to ditch Prachi? If he was a genuinely bad guy- then things will be simple. Milind can whack him off. If he is a good guy and wants to get back with Prachi now...... kya hoga aage? Very interesting. Please continue soon.

How did your interview go?

Hmm liked the update Opti Rehana's part was hilarious can full understand her though. So Asma is a cuty pie hope michi confess soon.