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Taniee

@Taniee

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Posted: 16 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: Kavita03
ooooooooooooooooo😲 Milind love Prachi 😊

Yesssss😳

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Taniee

@Taniee

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Posted: 16 years ago

#182

Part-8A

Milind didnt understand why he acted so but then what he saw was definately not a good thing his anger saw no limits.He felt like kicking all those people hard but then supressing all his anger he went upstairs knowing well that they were many keen eyes following him.

Prachi who stood up didnt understand the rage Milind was going through she simply couldnt understand his anger here she was dressed all up just to show him hoping out of hope that he would look at her and would atleast like it.But then his anger seemed to speak something else.God she couldnt help but curse her faith,why did it always had to be her.One day she comes thinking she could do something to please Milind and he would come angry because of something else.Poor soul even didnt realise that it was completely because of her he was going through such a rage.

Ayesha who stood watching all this completely understood his anger and she couldnt help supress her laugh.Finally it seemed like her plan had worked and that to bull's eye.She could she the amount of jealousy in Milinds eye.He just couldnt see her being seen by someone else.She felt real bad for them both but then this was all she could do to get them together because like it or not it they both simply failed terribly in this.And she knew left it in their hands they would never ever confess their love for each other.

Milind who had now reached Ayesha's house rushed in got something in hurry and by all force pulled Prachi by her hands and went straight to his room.Shutting the door with all force making everyone look at him suprise.Especially Ganpat and Ali who had their mouth fully open by now.Prachi didnt understand what he was trying to do but then didnt question him having full faith in him.

Once he was in with her he threw something over her face.She was shocked by his act but then remain quiet.But then she slowly looked at the thing which he had thrown and she was suprise to find Ayesha's white cotton kurta.She looked at him questioningly making him mad loosing it all he said with all anger,Ja aaur apne kapda badal(change your clothes)and then pulling her with full force,he said in a commanding voice,Aaj k baad esa kapde pehna toh tujhey wohi marr dunga(And if i see you wear this again i will kill you)his voice was filled with anger.Prachi didnt know what to say or do she had only wore this just to show him.Why was he so angry with her?Not today why was he always so angry with her?she couldnt help ask herself the same question again and again.

But till then Milind again said this time a little softly seeing her big beautiful eyes full of tears,Tereko yesa koi dekha mujhe pasand nahi,Tujhey dekhna ka haq sirf mujhey hai sirf mujhey saying so he slowly took his thumb near her lips and with all force cleared the dark shade lipstick she had worn.Prachi was stunned to hear that,she had never even imagined to hear those words from his mouth.Prachi looked at him suprise and he continued,Tujhey koi chua mujhsey bardast nahi hota,koi tereko paresaan kara mujhsey bardast nahi hota samjhi........Main tujhsey..........and he finally realised what he was doing and what he was going to tell her.No,this was not suppose to happen she wasnt suppose to know what is in his heart for her.How could he have possibly let her know what he felt.Suddenly realising what he was going to do he pushed her away and opened the door leaving the room hurriedly and leaving behind a very shocked and stunned Prachi.

Part 8B shall be updated a bit later.😃

Edited by Taniee - 16 years ago

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Niki

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Posted: 16 years ago

#183

Hi Taniee, just read all the updates of your FF - they are soooooooooooooooooo good. Personally this type of Milind is my favorite - rough, ruthless, sure of what he wants, possessive and madly in love. While deep inside he has an extremely sensitive, childlike and adorable side that will only surface when true love is returned to him.

You have written this story so well, your characters are so easy to understand, Prachi is so sweet and innocent, while Ayesha is sharp and witty. I'm really looking forward to the next update

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soul76

@soul76

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Posted: 16 years ago

#184

Lovely part Taniee I can completely understand Prachi's bewildermint and Milind's anger. I must say I love your Milsi..... reminds me of the serial Milsi the chawl days... what a treat.

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139271

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Posted: 16 years ago

#185

omg.. tht part was simply awesome!!!
but i still don't understand why Milsi is not confessing! but then, few more similar behavior and he won't even have to confess the whole world will know tht the dude is in love😆

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Taniee

@Taniee

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Posted: 16 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: Insomniac

Hi Taniee, just read all the updates of your FF - they are soooooooooooooooooo good. Personally this type of Milind is my favorite - rough, ruthless, sure of what he wants, possessive and madly in love. While deep inside he has an extremely sensitive, childlike and adorable side that will only surface when true love is returned to him.
You have written this story so well, your characters are so easy to understand, Prachi is so sweet and innocent, while Ayesha is sharp and witty. I'm really looking forward to the next update

Thank you soooooooo much.......Ya even i luv him like this........Thank you once again😃😃

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Taniee

@Taniee

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Posted: 16 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: blind horizon
Lovely part Taniee I can completely understand Prachi's bewildermint and Milind's anger. I must say I love your Milsi..... reminds me of the serial Milsi the chawl days... what a treat.

Thank you so much.😃😃

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Taniee

@Taniee

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Posted: 16 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: asmimani
do it fast dear cant wait!

Try my best😳

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Taniee

@Taniee

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Posted: 16 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: kuku..
omg.. tht part was simply awesome!!!
but i still don't understand why Milsi is not confessing! but then, few more similar behavior and he won't even have to confess the whole world will know tht the dude is in love😆

Thank you so much😃😃